It is a very cute article, and the "difficulties" faced by the protagonist are very appropriate. Especially for lovers of sweet articles, the contradiction between being cruel and having a layered character image is inherently contradictory, and the author handles it quite well. Suitable for lovers of sweet stories.
The shortcomings, teacher, can you please make them longer?
It's really great. It's the most humanistic drama I've seen in the past 3-5 years. It may be a little difficult to call it a masterpiece, but it is definitely a masterpiece. The darkness of human nature is presented in the form of events and contradictions. It may be labeled in some places, but this high-level summary is also an important presentation method, although I personally prefer to see more "realistic" scene descriptions, including the depiction of death scenes and the description of some environments. I think there is no specific treatment, and part of it is also based on the compromise of the rules of the creative platform. When I thought about it, this was the author's first completed article on this account, and I couldn't help but be full of expectations. (I'm not sure if I'm an experienced writer, but if I'm a new author, the author has a lot of room for growth! It's the reader's luck, and I hope to see more works born in the future!)