Football Article, I Haven't Finished Reading It but You Can Taste It as Appropriate
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I have read too many football articles, and only twenty-three out of ten can keep reading. Since there are not many football articles, I might as well include the ones that can be included.
I'm scratching my head. I don't know why I wrote such a silly protagonist to be the chairman of Arsenal. The author still has some clever ideas in writing how the protagonist racks his brains to spend money for the club. The other parts are really boring, and the love part is more like sawdust than tasteless. To be determined.
I really want to finish reading it, but I always feel that the author's world view is not smooth enough. Magic is not magic, and physicality is not competition. It is still relatively short, so I will wait and see.
I was confused about whether it was good or bad, and I was very confused about how to evaluate it. The good part was the cp description, and the bad part was also the cp description. It was even rare for me to read a lot of C Ronaldo fanfics. I really like the part where the male protagonist meets the kid Luo by chance and establishes a friendly relationship. The part where the kid Luo turns into Xiao Luo and their relationship slowly deteriorates is also smooth. But when the plot progresses to the part where the relationship is established, it starts to feel bad. But in fact, the main reason why I can't watch it is that the protagonist is obviously going to be a coach, but the love between son and daughter is still there until more than eighty chapters. I want to watch the competition! If you don't show me JingSports fandom, I will just think that the protagonist has no right to love.
Because I thought other works were good, I wanted to love the author's early works, and then I was created. The author's love for Cristiano Ronaldo was so strong that it almost turned into a compressed biscuit. The protagonist seemed to be born for Cristiano Ronaldo. There are also those little ingenious ideas from ten years ago that add fashion value to a character, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Originally, I basically couldn't stand football articles written by Cristiano Ronaldo or Messi Lalang. I have a phobia of red men. Maybe it was in line with contemporary tastes when it was first serialized, but I didn't catch up with the time when it was so popular.
I have never seen an author who likes to include long if lines in the text. The Serie A is so well written that it jumped to the English Premier League. As long as the author's purpose is clear, I will continue reading. Yes, your setting is the background of a football game, with the protagonist controlling the characters to play in different leagues, but you can't just insert an extra story before finishing Serie A, right? I was confused.
The author's self-evaluation is that the early plot is sparse, and it is indeed sparse. He also wrote the protagonist as childish, and wrote the interactions between the players as if they were children pretending to be a family wine. As a result, I was not able to wait until the author got better, but I still need to wait and see, and give it another try when I remember.
[Please] This is an article I have been looking forward to for a long time. I was fascinated when I saw the pre-receipt. I didn't expect it to be published so early. At such a slow time, I was a little moved. The author's writing is very good, and I recommend it to everyone. Editor 2: [Cracked] I forgot that this author's writing style is exaggerated, and there will be a long adaptation period for readers to adapt before getting better. The plot is really good, but the presentation is unsatisfactory, so I'll wait and see. Editor 3: I can't wait and see anymore. I can't stand the writing style, which is like a primary school student writing a tribute. Withdraw the book list.
I really hate watching the setting of a rich young man pursuing his football dream. It doesn't matter if he is rich. You can't really highlight this setting. Jack Su who is so straightforward is really not able to win at all.
The reason for the recommendation is the same as before. The author has a deep understanding of the players and a true love for the players, so the writing will be solemn and the emotions will be very delicate. Readers who do not have corresponding emotional experience will have a hard time reading it, so it is suitable for senior fans to read.
The reason for the recommendation is that it is written with a sense of life and has a real-life understanding of real players. It is suitable for reading by in-depth fans. However, there is a certain understanding threshold for ordinary pseudo-fans who just watch for fun. For example, I cannot understand the subtle love and hate of players for the team. I only feel it is hypocritical. But the excellence of the work cannot be denied.
The product sister should like to read it, but the writing of the competitive part is so simple and awkward. I was so focused on feeding sweets that I was a little bit too lazy to finish it.
I watched it retrospectively. I caught up with it ten years ago but didn't finish it. When I watched it again, I felt the obvious traces of the times. My reading mentality is no longer what it used to be. Ps: It hasn't been finished in ten years, and the author is also a god.
Looking back, I followed it five years ago when it was serialized, but I don't remember why I didn't finish it. But after re-watching it, I remembered that I didn't like the character's personality very much.
The most attractive part of the writing was the purchase of Manchester United. The other parts are not memorable. Let's start with the point about foreigners coming to China to adopt orphans. The author is connected to reality, but only half of it is.
I was persuaded to give up by the description of family affection, the beautiful mother, the coquettish son, and the father who competes for favor... I don't know what to say, but I can't get over this hurdle anyway.
I am at odds with the author's style, so I chose to skip reading. Editor 2: This is the only article from this author that I have read more paid chapters. The protagonist this time has a very smooth internal logic from his personality to his behavior. Even though the protagonist is very internally consumed, very tired, and very mentally unstable, it gives me good sense. Even if his emotional line is complicated, I will believe that he is a good person. Although this article is awkward, it is reasonable and natural, and the protagonist's behavior, achievements, and past experiences support his image, so I can still read it.
This is another author who is familiar with me, but I will always dote on the first person the protagonist meets, so let the story stay here. Editor-in-Chief: I had the foresight not to read the author of Mammy, and it was such a hit. Re-edit: The author has made another update, and has also taken remedial measures such as revising and refunding money, which is good. After all, there are few people writing about football, so it would be nice to have one more.
The first time I saw a woman wearing a man, I jumped over it. Then the second time I saw it said there was no CP, only a single arrow at most, so I came back. After reading it, I found that the author's single arrow might not be the same as my understanding, so I gave up.
It was originally meant to be a review, but when I looked back I found that I couldn't stand the lavish praise of the protagonist, so I withdrew before I could make it through the competitive part.
The author's writing style is light and has a bit of a stream of consciousness, which I like very much, but the author's pace is slow and leisurely, which makes me a little anxious.