25 I read the system records before the end of the summer vacation. For personal use, my attention and patience are weaker than ordinary people, so not many people actually buy or fully subscribe.
One evening, I suddenly found it and gave it a second glance. In my impression, Simon seems to be my favorite Huai Shou! The humanoid weapons are ignorant and arrogant, and they are also very cute in my opinion.
And I personally think this is the most CP-esque CP I've ever seen in a Huai novel. It's very right and has the smell of a stinky couple who doesn't care about people's life and death. It's cute!
I feel that Huai is the author who is best at writing big scenes. Every time he comes to this kind of plot, he cuts it with a big knife. It is bright, refreshing and efficient. It makes people see clearly and at the same time, it is wrapped up in it. It is like Cameron making a superhero movie by making bold moves and burning money but not breaking through quickly. When writing has a bad taste and I suddenly want to be humorous, I don't care about the life and death of the readers. I take into account both the sense of language and the reading experience, and it's really difficult to avoid drama.
Since I am really weak at reading ancient style novels, I generally leave the first two chapters if I don't get into them. This book is completely narrated and it's so weird. I don't understand why most of the ancient style novels on the market are written as if they were shot in Hengdian. It's just a change of scenery without any sense of substitution. It's weird.
Moreover, the author gave me the feeling that he is not smart. Ancient style literature is a subject where it is easy to see the author behind it. In comparison, it is not as good as those xp writers. At least the author has a lust behind it instead of giving readers a sense of mystery.
It shows the author's qualities as a leader: he has his own unique language pattern. Plots, characters, etc. Are all in the eye of the beholder. It's really impressive that Papaya Huang has been able to maintain this hard-to-replicate sense of language for so many years.
One afternoon, after I finished reading it twice, I realized that it was really a very standard version of Danmei. No matter how childish or otherwise good the writing was, it was quite difficult to keep people reading.
And the character is so pretentious, don't you guys named Mu...
I read it a long, long, long time ago. I think it was quite controversial, but I don't care about any controversy other than poor writing.
Is it really the second time this year? I don't have any feelings at all... I just remember that several plots that left an impression on me back then have been deepened.
After flipping through the author column, I found that Galaxy Superstar was also written by her. Ah, she is really an author who is very good at writing about entertainment industry topics. This type of subject matter actually does not have high requirements on the author but is tricky. Business writing in business writing is very important in terms of emphasis on language. I think the requirement is a writing style that is biased towards the advertising industry. Don't you see that few of the top authors are involved in entertainment industry topics?
My impression after reading the first dungeon was that it was a very fast-traveling novel, which was quite refreshing. Unfortunately, the fast-traveling novel was not really in my comfort zone.
Make a point for yourself: suspected of being a queen. If you want to eat fried chicken someday, let's see
Su Su's refreshing and sweet book, I haven't finished the last world yet (then I went to watch something else and lost it), but the author wrote a very orthodox and royal way. I am a person who loves all orthodox kings.
It's just that in my impression, the relationship names of the people in this car are a bit tacky (?! But this is probably a common problem in copywriting.
It seems that after reading the first copy, the author's writing was a bit too hidden, and it felt like he was completely immersed in his own writing language and did not care about the life and death of the readers, so the reading experience was not very good.
Make a point for yourself: if you are suspected of being punished. If you want to eat fried chicken someday, let's see
It seems that I have been in and out several times, but I didn't stick to it this time.
But sometimes I want to challenge myself to read this kind of article that combines the age difference, status difference, father's bloody battle, and many other points from my own hell zone. What's more, it's an author who is very good at writing in this genre.
It came out after reading the first chapter, and it seemed like a fantasy before death.
And I just realized that I don't really like white knights between men and women, the sense of purpose is too strong! The guiding arrow of sexual relationship is too strong!
Two stars. I seem to have seen it but I have no impression. Why do I have the impression that I have seen it? Because the main characters are named Pei and Yan, which is a rare combination of surnames.
Just remember to give me the feeling that I had when I read I Like Your Boyfriend for a Long Time (I didn't finish it), and then decided that I don't like this type of matching article. The name Dan Ruju matches Dan Ruju's character and Dan Ruju's emotional line. It's really a bit artificial and has no impact. The reading experience is like wanting to drink an ice drink but taking a sip of warm water.
Moreover, the emotional lines of this kind of novels have a sense of friendship that I really hate. When two people are together, it's like they are being watched and coaxed to rush to the shelves. Well, most of this kind of novels are based on university campus backgrounds.
If there are people who really like to watch this type of love, then I have nothing to say, my bad
Lost it
I feel that writing this kind of article by Wu Zhe highlights her personal thinking. I really like this combination of attack and shou. It is a little out of the ordinary and has a sense of control.
So why don't you like to watch the whistle direction. This is an element area that needs to be broadened in my reading of articles. I'd like to try to read a copy of Shao Zhizhi before the end of this year and then go to Shao Xiang.
Jinjiang's special Zerg article is very good in the early stage and lacks power in the later stage and goes astray. The author didn't make a good outline and the ending is scattered, but it is very hurt/comfort. Please continue writing in this comfort zone.
Two and a half stars, Young Master Yu Ge's article belongs to someone who may have a sudden illness once a year. After reading it, he was smelled of homosexuality three times between the lines. It was too explicit and... Unhygienic!
I personally feel that this book is not as good as his other works
Three in and three out has passed the stage where I can read high school campus stories. In this modern online literature market where coldness has become an urban legend, I am really curious about this famous coldness. I will look for opportunities and conditions to read it.
For the second time, Qinglu represents the kind of author I like. Her protagonist always has something to do, always lives a healthy and positive life, and always has the will to expand the boundaries of his abilities. Reading articles written by this kind of author is a nutritional supplement for me.
And this book is actually about taking care of children that I don't hate at all? !
I remember reading the beginning, but I don't know why I didn't stick with it.
Look for an opportunity to find the status and then check again
The heroine does not overemphasize her sexual characteristics and is well received
Reading this author's first book helped me get through the reading bottleneck. After reading it, I realized that I really haven't read high school campus essays for a long, long, long time...
The author is very good at writing online articles, and he has a very royal style. It made my mouth water. What a rare fundamentalist gay article. However, it can be seen that the plot in the outline is one board after another. Every transition to the next plot board has a break point, which is not particularly smooth. The slogan of each party was unnatural and a bit stiff, which resulted in a sense of copying. As soon as the vinegar came out, it was obvious that it was for the dumplings it was making. Even though there were several dishes of vinegar, it took several rounds of making dumplings before it came to the end. Is this probably a sign of a lack of ability in long-form writing?
And I like to use descriptions of scenery to wrap things up. It's too standard and a short composition template.
It's because I was very confident about this book, but in the end I didn't insist on reading it because of Gu Feng Wen. I looked for opportunities to try harder.
Two and a half stars, just to pass the time and don't really know what I was watching.
And is this a special offer to attack the Soviet Union? What picture is subject to a single arrow and is purely backwards?
I checked it out twice, and found that there were quite a lot of mentally ill protagonists like this at 50% off in the early years. It was obvious that my mental state was not very good at that time.
It seems that after reading the beginning, I remember that the language style is relatively innovative to me, a bit like comic writing? But I'm the kind of person who has poor image input skills so I can't read comics at all. It's rare to see this kind of text combination method that is completely out of my blind spot. It's really hard to understand.
And the cute (suspected) shou (it seems that the protagonist is not the shou) is really my difficulty area...
Find a chance to hold on
The most amazing thing has to be Chen Liang who vividly writes the wretched yet beautiful feeling of heterosexuality. The male protagonist is quite cute (sometimes), but if he can be more human-like (most of the time) I really want to slap him. I find that the current romance has reached the stage where the human form is removed and the female protagonist seems to be in love with all species except humans. In this way, once the male protagonist becomes a monster, everyone can rationalize this person's behavior: "You and a cat/dog/(n kinds of popular online animals are omitted here)... What do you care about?", But holy shit, no matter how much animals are plasticized and pinched, this is still a human being? The heroine is in a relationship, not a pet! If you can't write about a heterosexual man who looks like a normal person, just say so! Of course, there are problems with the author as well as problems with the men themselves. If you want to write about a good man, you must first have a little understanding of what a good man is. However, good men are spread orally like urban legends in online articles and in reality but are extinct... Anyway is back, and the heroine of this article is really too good and powerful. After reading this, readers have become a marriageable person.
After reading Chapter 30, I started posting on WeChat Moments and shouting that the food was good, the food was good, the food was good, holy shit, this is the kind of GB article I want to read, just give her a round face! !
The plot line and setting line have no impact on me at all. Just watching the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is so enjoyable. Oh my god, it's so delicious. It's so delicious. The interaction with the body shape difference and the reverse body position difference is super cute, super spicy, super tense, and the male protagonist is definitely not a traditional weakling. Where can I find this kind of gb? It really drives me crazy. Even with the female A and male O, the slightly broken plot in the later stage, and the many points that I can't think about in detail, my heart is surging and my blood is boiling as soon as we interact with each other. I completely forget myself and don't know what the world is. It's so delicious.
Two stars, this is a typical author who does not know how to write about the entertainment industry and touches on the entertainment industry theme, but indeed if it is not the entertainment industry, there is no other subject matter that can support this volume of concentration. I knew something was wrong just by looking at the title of the table of contents. This kind of title that directly uses events as the title can easily lead to abrupt and unsmooth transitions in a few chapters. As expected. This sense of copying is taboo in entertainment industry articles. Multi-line narrative is a skill that long-form writers need to overcome.
Entertainment industry articles, especially talent show articles, test the breadth of the author's writing. The amount of information must be large and dense, and the author's known knowledge must cover the reader's unknown, making the reader feel overwhelmed. This article is obviously because the author doesn't know enough about the story he wants to write. He can't give out the information in just a few words and then ends up reading it. This is very fatal for entertainment industry articles. Because the production of this kind of writing requires a broad place with a strong sense of presence everywhere, once the author writes narrowly and short, something will happen. Apart from programs, the forums and passerby responses introduced by the standardized process of entertainment industry articles are too single and thin. The core of the use is a set of words. Well, this is another narrow writing.
All in all, the author's narrative ability cannot support entertainment industry articles, especially talent show articles, but if the purpose of writing is just to condense, I won't comment too much.
After reading the beginning, I personally feel that Xiao Xiao is not suitable for writing this kind of setting and character, or is he more suitable for writing about a handsome boy with a high-spirited boyish look?
Put it into the three-time super stereotypical lesbian sister-dog match, well...
And I can't stand the high school campus buff, maybe it's my problem?
I have tried several times in the field of Baihewen, but without exception I feel that it is too stereotyped, and it is always easy to compare it to the current lesbian ecology. I felt a bit out of place when I moved the overly sexual style of writing into Baihe. I always felt that the love between women I imagined I experienced was not like this.
But actually lesbians often give me this feeling too. So maybe it's still my problem?
A Japanese light novel flavored campus story. I would believe it if you say it is written by Yume Girl (Yumeo Boy). It has a sense of atmosphere and is quite cute.
I seem to have read the beginning but have no memory. I only remember the name of the main character.
Why is it an ancient style of writing again!
Make a point for yourself: The queen is suspected of controlling the field, Mei Suhou.
The author is very good at writing about atmosphere, but there is always a feeling that the actual situation she writes does not quite match the atmosphere.
After reading this, I want to travel to Japan again. This is Japan. It's a dream-like experience for everyone who goes there.
Two and a half stars. It's a joke, right?
But I don't like funny articles
The plot development is just like the writing method of the author who is not very good at scheduling the writing. It was the same as following the cycle. I left after two rounds.
I originally wanted to wait until the serialization was finished before reading it, but I couldn't bear it anymore and started reading it. As always, Master P specializes in succubus protagonists, Hollywood-style action scenes, and a dry humor that makes me laugh. Although the reading progress has stopped at a certain copy, I will finish it.
It intuitively made me realize that I have really grown up. Even last year, I should have been able to hold on to read these plots, dialogues and descriptions, but this year I can't bear it. What I wonder is why the language pattern of this type of article can be so eternal. I can see romance articles written like this no matter when I am ten, fifteen or twenty years old. Even after n rounds of market scouring, it has not been flushed out. I am shocked. It's both gratifying and sad to say that in the olive-shaped romance literature market, which accounts for the largest proportion, it seems that wholesale and mass-produced Chinese literature is no longer within my acceptance range. This is a good thing or a bad thing.
Moreover, I personally think that with the character design of the cool guy and cool sister, it is difficult for any romance novel to surpass the all-girls school pearls, so the authors should find another career.
The author is the kind of author who pursues her own writing characteristics, but because her level is not high enough, her performance is that she occasionally has an inexplicable paragraph, sometimes she suddenly has a sudden inspiration, and sometimes she is suddenly completely immersed in a narrative rhythm that the reader cannot see clearly. Neither of them is integrated enough with her normal writing. But having this kind of pursuit makes people feel that the future is promising. As long as they write more, they will definitely find their own way. The fear is that they can't find their own way.
And he even wrote a cute story that I don't hate, which shows that a story cannot only use cuteness as its selling point. But you can't see that this is a beautiful story about a black detective. However, having a poor body shape is not a plus point for me, so I didn't insist on it.
The character strips drawn by the author himself are very cute > <
As an idealistic author, Mushroom's writing is very inspiring to me. Other readers may not be happy with this, but as long as she writes to her heart's content, she will provide me with the chicken blood.
The characteristic of this author is that the settings are full and the protagonist upgrades. I really like watching the upgrades to defeat monsters! At the same time, the rhythm is not good. I should not even say it is not good but has no rhythm. However, because I like to read these kinds of authors write articles, I find that their articles do not seem to need a neat and perfect framework. As long as the author, readers and characters are always immersed in the state of growth and exciting emotions, it will be OK. The icons are full and the emotion is king.
It's worth mentioning that this book has a pretty outstanding mother character, but I haven't finished reading it yet. The stories about Mushroom are all saved to replenish my energy when my mana bar is low.
This is a very high-quality book among the entertainment-related novels. It is so enjoyable that you can read it in one sitting. The author is both extravagant and upgrading, and he is very good at managing it.
This is the kind of author who can write about the entertainment industry! It's a pity that I won't write it now
The ancient flavor revealed between the lines makes me feel that this article hugged me when I was a child. Using a dog (a real dog) to promote emotional development is also a quite old school technique.
Classic sports student attack and art student/art student/pet doctor (n identities that can embody gentle motherhood are omitted here)... Love, dog and cat matching, year after year matching, with additional settings such as skin color difference, poor body shape, skin hunger and thirst, physiological attraction, etc. The large number of such articles feels like it has become a category in the gay literary world, and I can accidentally eat it at least once every six months.
Although it doesn't contradict it, it doesn't look good either.
It's a BG novel that favors GB (nothing against the author's CP meaning, just a description), which is quite good, but a common problem with XP works is that the author's narrative is generally unable to support it, leaving only a lustful heart (the representative of the few authors I have seen who can support it is Huai Shang, but this girl gave me a sudden lustful feeling even if she could support certain plots, which was unexpected and scary)
The female protagonist's wording was well received and gave me an inspiration. If the male protagonist really can't be written as a good person, he can consider writing him as a idiot. In this way, no matter how inexplicable he is (I didn't say that the inexplicable meaning of the male protagonist in this article is that he is a good person), he will feel like he is willing to be humble in front of the female protagonist. It should be palatable (suitable for my own mouth). Belike him. Although he is morally corrupt, he is willing to be her dog? !
This is a book that intuitively reflects how low the market for online articles has been in recent years. The author only used a few tricks of narration and reversal, and the readers started shouting. This shows that today's authors no longer pay much attention to narrative techniques and content structure.
Although it can be seen that the author has absolutely no traditional views on heterosexuality and even uses irony. He only regards catching men and so-called love as a career, but I also don't like this interpretation of heterosexuality, and it is difficult for me to accept it.
Getting along with the opposite sex is a very difficult part to write about. There are very few authors who can write it well, with sparks flying and full of tension. The vast majority of authors just make readers draw their swords and look around in confusion. Dialogue and interaction are all games. Authors who have never really played games cannot write it. The interaction between men and women in this book is intuitive and does not affect the readers at all. The author's treatment is flat and one-sided and even a little childish. It is purely self-pleasure from the woman's perspective.
Moreover, as soon as the heroine hooked up with the man, the first picture of Xiaohongshu's post appeared in front of my eyes. Don't tell me, girl, whether men can see this kind of psychological trick. Most people are surprised if you don't tell her, but she is really completely immersed in her own art.
However, I feel that this article is just a starting point for straight women with red books, so I have nothing to say.
Speaking for myself: I don't want to see such a story at all. I completely understand that the author wants to satirize reality, but if here women can only obtain upward opportunities and value by clinging to men, I feel very sad and painful. I don't want to read this kind of story anymore, completely. I have really seen enough of women relying on men to survive, no matter for what purpose, no matter in reality or in the void, no matter whether it is active or passive.
The author has his own worldview, but it's not clear whether he didn't write it out or wrote it off. The visual sense is gloomy.
419 Such a sparkling plot has just begun, but it does not have the dramatic tension it deserves. It is a pity.
Make a key point for yourself: It is suspected that the two powerful commanders attack the commander and the opponent (this is more like an urban legend), try again when you find a chance.
The author has written what I consider to be a benchmark for draft writing, so I had high expectations before reading this book.
However, I realized that I have a problem: if a subject chooses cuteness as the first impression on readers among beauty, handsomeness, and sophistication, and if a subject falls into the sunny, vigorous, lively and cheerful position on the personality spectrum and has no other characteristics to compound and superimpose, I will leave. I didn't fall in love with Huang Shaotian when I was watching The Master!
Focus on yourself: Suspected to be handsome (Why didn't I see it?! This is the problem of starting from the perspective of the protagonist. Others think he is handsome and how he behaves and behaves are completely different things. Give me an inspiration. If you have to write about being handsome, the conventional and effective way to write is to introduce it from the perspective of others. It is difficult for a person to be handsome without an audience!) (But if handsome refers to appearance rather than personality, I have nothing to say. I think handsome is a composite temperament!)
I've been looking forward to this new work by the author hc for a long time, but I don't know if it's because I haven't updated it or if it's a problem with the book itself. In short, there is too little effective information in each chapter, the water content is slightly high, the story line is very scattered, and the rhythm is too weird.
After finishing it, I'll see if I want to try it.
Atypical romance novel, quite special, I personally like it very much
Saya is really... A disgusting and truly excellent game. I feel exactly the same as this article. It is a purely sensual mental stimulation and a crushing and disgusting obsession. This is actually a game that I hope there will be more on the market.
I haven't finished reading it yet, so I give it four and a half stars. The author is really good at writing and has strong writing skills. The beginning is also very touching and touching. Creation is about being all in from the very beginning, tense up, considering every detail, and treating the current story as a once-in-a-lifetime undertaking.
Really, she is so good at writing. This is the kind of author who has the ability to lead you into her world. The writing power of the character is not necessary to describe the appearance, label and atmosphere. The overlapping of the characters is as hard to ignore as being embossed. It intuitively expresses what is distinct. Readers can say whether they like it or not, but they cannot say that it is not alive. It is powerful.
And this is actually a trilogy, I'm even more looking forward to it. I'm going to hide this bite and wait for a good opportunity to reward myself.
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