Stories from the past two years with average prose or a style I don't like. I'll review unfinished stories once they're complete. I'm pretty strict: I like stories with solid logic or plenty of drama.
This is a rather Mary Sue-esque story. The female lead is already a movie star at the beginning. The male and female leads break up around the same time and then meet again at a party. However, at the party, she encounters her ex-boyfriend and is asked why they broke up. The female lead gives a long, awkward answer in front of everyone. I don't quite understand why a celebrity would expose her private life in front of a bunch of people she just met. Isn't she afraid of being exposed by them or paparazzi? The logic isn't very strong, and the wording is a bit strange.