Stories from the past two years with average prose or a style I don't like. I'll review unfinished stories once they're complete. I'm pretty strict: I like stories with solid logic or plenty of drama.
Comparing an article by Mary Sue, the heroine is already a movie queen at the beginning. The hero and heroine broke up together around the same time, and then met at a party. However, when she met her ex-boyfriend at the party and asked why they broke up, the heroine responded in a long paragraph in front of everyone. The whole thing was very embarrassing. I can't quite understand the fact that a celebrity exposes her privacy among a lot of people she just met. Aren't she afraid of being exposed by them or the paparazzi? The logical support is not very good, and the wording is a bit strange.
