Archive of Stories That Fell Apart Midway 中道崩殂存档处

1 在 Life as a Cat in Japan 在日本当猫的日子 Pumpkin Filling南瓜夹心Danmei (BL)1.5M WordsCompleted 35kFavorites132.1kClicks/ch38.6kGifts

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It's hard to comment on why I couldn't read this book. I read this book while listening to it. I was numbed by the lethal amount of "" during the listening process. I couldn't speak anymore if I continued to listen. I don't know if it's the author's writing habit or because he wanted to have a Japanese feel ("very fresh and very delicious" Japanese style). The content of "" was so high that I could hear it. I have a headache. There is nothing wrong with the plot up to the point I have seen this time (around chapter 23). The animals are more humane, and the cp cats appear very early. They are pure cats. As for the others, I have seen very little content this time, so I can't rate it. Four stars for now. Maybe I will try it next time I have time to read instead of listen to a book.

2 开 From the Start, I Put an Eco-Friendly Hat on Verlaine 开局给魏尔伦戴了顶环保帽 Yu Wei鱼危Danmei (BL)2.5M WordsCompleted 92.1kFavorites222.4kClicks/ch1.9MGifts

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Well, I was looking for a book I had ordered and saw this one. How should I put it? Author Sang, could you explain in advance if you are producing food for your own OC... The original protagonist's innocent 1v1 warrior's character design can change the CP series at a glance. Are you invincible? I forgot how much I ordered. In short, this one star is not It's very subjective, because I'm a cp person. When I was chasing it, I was fascinated by Qiuya's indomitable and self-sacrificing love. I was so excited when I saw the author's homepage of another serialized pre-collection of cp stories with different protagonists from the original. Now I don't want to read the author's other old novels again. Is it funny? It's really funny. I spend money to eat food produced by others for my own OC. [Compare my heart]. I really can't even tolerate the character's ooc. Anyway, it's like zwkfk's dio. It's not impossible to perfect the character according to your own understanding. But, do you love your original character too much, and it doesn't feel like writing a fan at all^ ^, Although I don't like sacrificial original protagonists anymore, it doesn't mean that the original characters deserve to be resented and make way for original characters^ ^ I'm too lazy to say too much. I feel sorry for myself who originally pursued the article with true feelings and shed tears for their love. I will also learn my lesson. I will try my best to only read articles with emotional lines where the author loves both sides equally.

3 在 Selling Spiritual Pets in the World of Cultivation in Various Apocalypses 在各个末世卖修真界灵宠 Popular Mountain Order风行山令Danmei (BL)970k WordsCompleted 45.5kFavorites68.5kClicks/ch60.1kGifts

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Let's give it a three-star rating or a half-star rating. Anyway, incomplete ratings will not affect the rating of the work. I will not consider the author and will only base my judgment on my subjective feelings. If you are interested in this subject, just read the first two copies. The writing is more interesting and seems to be written with care. It starts from the third world. Fortunately, the protagonist's spiritual pet is a cat. After all, I will love cyber cats unconditionally, so I can ignore the roughness of the details. In the end, there is no explanation of why everyone is having nightmares. Then the fourth and fifth ( That is, the copy when I couldn't stand it) has the feeling that it is forcibly expanding a plot. The author seems to have only conceived a few scenes, and then tried hard to stick to the same template, and cut scenes after almost filling up a unit. As for the settings and characters of this world, there is no feeling of being too detailed. The more I read, the more I feel that I am reading repetitive things and wasting time.

4 现 Modern Little Town God 现代小城隍 Clothes Falling into Flame衣落成火Danmei (BL)902k WordsCompleted 60.5kFavorites117.7kClicks/ch132.5kGifts

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This is the first pair of CPs that are written in big letters but I really can't get enough of them. There is a very long rating in the three-star rating. That sister is my replacement. This pair is really weird. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Let me talk about some of the uncomfortable points that impressed me the most. Shou was killed by the City God at the beginning and needed to be resurrected as a city god by accumulating faith. However, because of his special physique, real ghosts could not get close to him. So even though Gong's whole family was prone to being ghosted, Gong didn't believe it at all. He felt that it was all a high-tech pretense. Ghost, when someone performed real magic in front of him, she insisted on saying that it was very scientific. After reaching the 100th chapter, she believed in ghosts and gods because of the special characteristics of Shou. She believed that there were ghosts and gods before. Gong is the kind of big boss who is a king of capitalists. Although he should be regarded as a capitalist with a conscience, he is also a man of both sexes. If, I just... Can't stand it, especially when I saw that in the first hundred chapters, he felt that Shou was going astray, so he assigned Shou a paper, tried to test Shou, and recruited him to work in his company if he felt that he was a talented person. It was really uncomfortable; the big villain behind the scenes appeared from the beginning, and then... Maybe it was because I was anxious, but in short, my body sense showed that he was everywhere, but the protagonist team found him very late due to various reasons (it was only 68% of the time when I gave up the game that I really paid attention to his mobilization... The monsters were looking for him, well, I didn't contact the Taoist priests among humans after this), I was really anxious to read it. To be honest, I basically came here to read the stories about Yi Da. The previous ones were very enjoyable, but I endured reading this one because of the modern supernatural. The supernatural part is above the average of the supernatural stories I have read, but the attack is really good. Although you can probably tell what kind of boss he is just by looking at his physique, his identity in life is that of the CEO of a company! Still the kind that has a bit of a daddy vibe but not a daddy vibe! I saw other cp interactions as phantom limb hard, but this pair of interactions were fist clenched. As a result, when I saw the supporting characters in the article being attacked by cp, I didn't laugh like my aunt, but instead thought, "Are they crazy?" After thinking about it, the problem is still the same as in the first hundred chapters. If Fan Gong's reaction is more comedic, rather than being so serious that he feels harsh, it will be much better later on. Unfortunately, it is not the case. In short, it is a pity that this book cannot be read at all. The more I read the cp, the more alienated I feel.

5 在 A Substitute Teacher in a Melodramatic Novel [Quick Transmigration] 在狗血文里做返聘老师[快穿] Yancheng Taishousheng岩城太瘦生Danmei (BL)695k WordsCompleted 31.6kFavorites36.7kClicks/ch62kGifts

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The text is quite good, the cute and cute little couple are so sweet and cute, but I really can't help it. Although I know that there will be slaps and abuse in the face soon, the happiness brought by the slaps can't make up for the mental pollution I felt when I saw the bloody text. I am also praying sincerely today. Prayer copywriting scams can also be used. I am an omnivore, not a fan of pig food. Damn it, some people think their hobbies are very shameful. Do you want to sneak in and trick readers into killing? If your definition of certain words is different from the public, just write down the expected outline in the copywriting, okay? A long copywriter is better than a scam copywriter

6 最 The Strongest Animation Producer[rebirth] 最强动画制作人[重生] The Stars Say星星说Danmei (BL)1.0M WordsCompleted 54.9kFavorites156.2kClicks/ch223.8kGifts

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At that time, the author's ID was still new. I didn't particularly like this book at the time, but it could also be automatically subscribed. Well, then I got stuck on v and was knocked off, haha. I saw in the final score that it was said that it was smooth just reading the text regardless of the initial v-stuck. I can only say that you are right, but I am the one who was stuck on v, so I don't care. There may have been an explanation at the beginning, but most likely there was no explanation. Otherwise, I have encountered a lot of stagnant writing. It makes no sense for this book to be hung in a separate folder. If there is an explanation, then you are unlucky as the author. Anyway, my book list rating will not affect your final rating [red heart]

7 你 Are You Going to Kill Me with Your Cuteness [Quick Wear] 你打算萌死我吗[快穿] Better Not Return莫如归Danmei (BL)1.5M WordsCompleted 284.6kFavorites706.1kClicks/ch1.7MGifts

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Don't say anything, Mo Rugui, can you compensate me? It's not a refund, it's compensation, and compensation for my mental loss. This book directly gave me ptsd. I was chasing this serialization at the beginning, and I really accepted it. It turns out that hate lasts longer than love, I I don't even remember the content of this book, but I was so disgusted that I couldn't sleep all night long and scolded you + the feeling of anger was still stuck in my throat, okay? You rounded off your pen name and committed suicide and left the show beautifully. What about me, the readers who were inexplicably hurt and have nowhere to redress? How is this not a genuine victim? Spend money and get angry, that's what I am (thumbs down)

8 升 A Coffin Rises, Good Fortune Arrives 升棺见喜 Black Cat, White Socks黑猫白袜子Danmei (BL)510k WordsCompleted 302.2kFavorites358.5kClicks/ch239.3kGifts

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Spoiler alert, full story alert if you are not subscribed (only subscribe to the first story) While my memory is still fresh, I quickly wrote a review to prevent me from feeling the same pain in the future. First of all, I can't finish reading it because I don't like this genre. Before reading this, I always thought that I liked people and was very receptive to people. After reading "The Feast" and then reading this book, I realized that I overestimated myself. In fact, I can only accept people who are biased and sweet in love. I won't talk about "The Feast" in a separate review later. I'll just talk about this one here. The current subscription is until the end of the first story. How should I put it, the ghost has always been a ghost, and the ghost design is not broken, but it is too ghostly and too powerful. It makes me despair and hopeless. At the beginning, I hated Xiaofang and thought that this kind of school bully would die if he died. In the end, Xiaofang was regarded as the most living person among Xiuxiu's peers, but Xiaofang did not end well. Lord Hong is too strong, so Xiuxiu can only watch in despair as her relatives sacrifice their lives to get out of the ghost monster that Lord Hong tricked her into in order to save her once. She can also watch Teacher Xu, who is strong but not strong enough, but really kind, turn into a vegetative state in order to save him, and in the end she can only accept being with Xiaofang, who is destined to be Lord Hong's leather sheath after the kidney transplant. There is no way to help Xiaofang escape from this despair. Of course, the current ending is still better than the original ending mentioned in Zuo, but I still feel that both endings are pure despair for Xiuxiu - not because he did anything wrong, but just because he was there, so he was involved in all this, was targeted by evil spirits, and everything was ruined from then on. Why. I can only say that maybe I am too old to eat such mouth-watering food. Even if I eat something with strange taste, I will only accept the mother of all species kind at most. But the writing is really good, and the descriptions are great (otherwise I wouldn't have broken my guard like this). The ghosts are also pure alien ghosts. They have no humanity and are authentic outsiders. They just have a lot of knives and are very tongue-tied. If you can accept it, this article should be great. I didn't dare to read the next two chapters because I saw a sister in the comment area saying that the ending of the first chapter was already the gentlest. I don't dare to think how many sharks will go crazy later.

9 继 Inherited a Haunted House but the Employees Are Not Human 继承鬼屋但员工都不是人 Qiu Yun秋筠Danmei (BL)555k WordsCompleted 18.6kFavorites30.4kClicks/ch20.4kGifts

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The overall rating is three and a half stars. The advantages and disadvantages are equally outstanding, but the bad points happened to be that I couldn't stand it at all, so I gave up. The amusement park stuff is interesting, the supernatural stuff is awkward and some are okay, and the face-slapping stuff is all awkward. I read Chapter 43, and out of the five times I can think of it, four of the five slaps in the face were embarrassing. The remaining scene only took half a chapter to resolve. The little guy who was slapped in the face didn't even have a psychological description, and there was no room for embarrassment at all. It only takes half a chapter to go from scene to scene. The latest face-slapping experience in Chapter 43 is slightly better because there is less description and the appearance to the end is within one chapter. Even so, it is very awkward. I actually don't understand why the face-slapping content is not in the fortress. Is it obsession or KPI? Removing such a templated character has zero impact on the plot. As for the amusement park part, when it comes to pure amusement park content, although Goldfinger is a bit big, it's still fun to watch. However, when it comes to content outside of the amusement park, it's too old-fashioned and bloody. Although he appeared in the early stage of the game and his character design is quite cute, his presence is not particularly high. However, it would be great if the prime minister can appear in the early stage and have an exclusive emotional development chapter. Really, at least it is not a side confession in the later stage, haha.

10 我 I Really Don't Want to Be a Rebel [Infrastructure] 我真不想当反贼[基建] Bluebird Among the Stars青鸟临星Danmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 48.7kFavorites84.2kClicks/ch75.9kGifts

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I couldn't stand it anymore and couldn't possibly buy it all, so I put it in my book list to record it. The evaluation is nine-turn large intestine. Does it smell good? Fragrant. Do you have experience with Akaashi? Have! The two later books by this author, Traveling to Han and Traveling to Qin, are okay. Although there are common sense errors and interesting plots, the content is low, the overall reading experience is relatively smooth, and the protagonists are all from the privileged class, so the plot of the technology tree is not out of the ordinary - it is not impossible to artificially assemble one or two objects that can only be produced by modern industrialization, but the protagonist of this book is in southern Xinjiang, which is a bit... And the most terrifying thing is not only Shenbi's technology tree and the too-high content of the cool plot, but also the lethal amount of cat sculptures in the text and the lethal amount of "little belly chatter" at the beginning. Maybe the author thinks that the protagonist is a child under ten years old and it's okay to use such a word, but the reading experience is really fragmented. I almost gave up the book because of the little belly strain at the beginning, and the protagonist is an adult. The pseudo-child's whole thing is really a bit malicious and cute, and the problem with the cat sculpture is also the same. The cat sculpture in the beginning of the text is really too forceful. Maybe the author really wants to write about cats (the next book written by the columnist will be about cats), but this is not the reason why you have to replace every word with cat xxxx. Later, I don't know whether it was because I was numb or because the content of cat sculptures was reduced, and the experience was slightly better. Then he told me the reason why I gave up the trap, banknotes, and openly formed a small court called the "Father Worried Alliance". It was suspected that I was forcibly incapacitating the supporting characters. He called me three times in a row and silenced me, and then ran

11 我 I Became Qin Shi Huang's Second Qin Emperor 我给始皇当秦二世 Gold and Jade Fill the Courtyard金玉满庭No CP1.1M WordsCompleted 183.6kFavorites319.7kClicks/ch674.4kGifts

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I really can't do it anymore. I retreated in the first chapter of v. "Fusu sniffed sharply." You, the author... Oh, forget it, let's take it for granted. Because some stereotypes about strong female protagonists in Chinese literature are not bad, I tried to grit my teeth and read on, but then I was completely sunk by the young style of writing. I won't go into some stereotype errors in the article. They are all corrected in the paragraphs and comments, but they are suspicious. The mental age of all the members is under 20. I really can't accept it. Now that it has happened, I feel sorry for myself who insisted on buying the V chapter before retreating. After all, I chose to automatically purchase the next five chapters and I can't read even one chapter... Sometimes I really hope that some authors write original farming articles, so that my acceptance will be much higher. Why Shitong has its own traffic? Oh, that's okay.

12 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Robin Simulator [综英美]知更鸟模拟器 Lying High on East Mountain东山高卧Danmei (BL)625k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites33.4kClicks/ch55.9kGifts

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It's too dramatic... Okay, maybe that's not the right description? It doesn't matter, in short, after watching one-third, maybe two-fifths, I can't even think of how this scene of 123 stews turned into a mess, but my premonition is already screaming, this kind of final CP that has no warning at all in the early stage... Is a foreign girl rice! It's a bastard foreign girl! She really doesn't look Chinese at all, she's just the kind of drama chick you can see on Ao3! From the beginning to the process to the ending, it makes people think "Huh?" From the beginning to the end. It is a foreign girl rice that will penetrate the Chinese stomach! So even though Hell Joke is really delicious, and even though I'm not a big fan of bats and I just came here for Hell Joke, I still gave up. I'm afraid that if I continue reading this article, I'll jump up and beat my tongue, stomach, and brain:)

13 [ [Comprehensive British and American] They All Say That We Are a Waste of Character When We Are Together [综英美]他们都说我们在一起是浪费人设 AilsanaDanmei (BL)1.5M WordsOngoing 25.8kFavorites62.7kClicks/ch118.9kGifts

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Another comprehensive review of the UK and US + type moon, and the UK and US parts are weird, just... Although many people like to play with the stereotype of bats, do many people really regard old bats as monsters...? In short, the portrayal of Bat is a bit unacceptable, so although I really like Shirou's portrayal, there is nothing I can do about it, alas.

14 皆 All Are Beauties' Servants [Complex Martial Arts] 皆为美人裙下臣[综武侠] A White One一只白白Romance832k WordsCompleted 70.6kFavorites263.9kClicks/ch63.2kGifts

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The writing is very tempting but not what I thought. (My favorite thing about Ma Jiawen is the cosplay plot, but this one has no ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)

15 把 After Handing over the Golden Finger 把金手指上交后 Mi Lili米栗栗Danmei (BL)393k WordsCompleted 106.6kFavorites352.5kClicks/ch75.4kGifts

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The standard plot is good but the details are broken, which is not to say that it is completely unreasonable, but this kind of interesting article is not completely satisfying... Well, in short, I really can't stand it.

16 基 Infrastructure Throne 基建王座 Zi Wu Yue Yuan紫舞玥鸢Danmei (BL)566k WordsCompleted 68.4kFavorites162.7kClicks/ch51.5kGifts

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It's very scary, my friend. I found that I actually subscribed to most of the books, but now I can't read fifty chapters even though I gritted my teeth. Sometimes I really felt that I was a little too picky about food in the past... The setting should be fairly self-explanatory (I'm not sure if I haven't seen it later). Because it's a game world, it's straightforward and easy to understand, simple and rough, but it's really too novice. The protagonists, supporting characters, and passers-by are all very stereotyped, and it's an extremely scary combination of Chinese and Western. The characteristics of this article are so obvious that I can't stand it anymore. I can only mourn my JJ coins and nutrient solution.

17 宿 My Mortal Enemy Begged Me Through Tears Not to Die 宿敌哭着求我不要死 Qiao You乔柚Danmei (BL)444k WordsCompleted 36.3kFavorites29.2kClicks/ch14.7kGifts

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In fact, it's quite acceptable...? But even if I skipped a chapter and read the back part, I still felt that it was easy to watch emo, and there was not enough plot to relieve my anger, so I better forget it...

18 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Distress Signal Receiver [综英美]求救信号接收器 Drawing Bones to Sharpen a Blade抽骨磨刀Danmei (BL)405k WordsCompleted 51kFavorites125.4kClicks/ch88.7kGifts

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It's so good that it's a sacrificial protagonist + a useless but still loving PUA protagonist system. We're hopeless. The good news is that we haven't finished buying it, but the bad news is that we just finished it. No, my taste was so philanthropic back then.

19 地 Underworld Emperor Transformation Guide 地府皇帝改造指南 Three Fools, Two Madmen三傻二疯No CP744k WordsCompleted 27.9kFavorites34.5kClicks/ch106kGifts

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I enjoyed reading the author's last book with the same protagonist, but I really couldn't hold back this one. I was always in a tug-of-war because the author was really interesting and I wanted to read it for a while because the characters were templated and I couldn't ignore it, so I wanted to run away. Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away. In addition, this book has too many words and verbosity. Do you have any clues about it? I don't think it's stupid. Those repeated words don't cost a few cents, but they affect the reading experience too much. Occasionally, I hesitate, and often. In this way, I will suspect that everyone is stuttering, especially as I listen to books, which is called a pain. In addition, the tit-for-tat battle between Persimmon, Mr. Liu and Emperor Wu is actually quite interesting, but Wei Huo is in a superposition of an important supporting role and a passerby. When the author really wanted to write about them, he would feel that the two were well written. The author just wanted to write about a passerby and subordinate. However, since Mr. Liu was surrounded by these two people, the middle man was replaced by a passerby background. This also made me feel very divided.

20 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Earth Has Fallen into Chaldea [综英美]地球陷落迦勒底 Cola Cat阔落猫No CP636k WordsCompleted 27.3kFavorites40.2kClicks/ch55.6kGifts

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Is the Chaldean part okay? There is no special highlight, but it is not difficult to stretch, but the more you go to the back of the British and American related ones, the more you feel that the original characters will not have the same sense of déjà vu, or to put it too much, many people in the back are a little OOC. In fact, the identity setting of Guda is quite interesting, and the early stage is also good, but starting from Shen Xia, I don't know if it is a setting requirement or something. I don't feel that the two are John and Curly Fu at all, alas.