For personal archiving! Personal use! Not making any recommendations, just personal notes. Fully ordered from beginning to end in 2025 + finished article after reading.
4.5, Warm, cute, calm and gentle, basically what you see in the copywriting is what you get, willing to open your mouth and fight for it is very good, the writing at the beginning is a little messy, but once the short article of hundreds of thousands of words is finished, the background is not forced to be clear.
It's a rather weird story. It feels like I've planned for a follow-up relationship, but I haven't figured out how to let the two people stay together reasonably, so I fabricated the beginning of a depressed and frail person who fainted and was sent to the hospital alone, and then was taken home by a senior doctor in the hospital who he had met ten years ago. . . The first few chapters even have a sense of horror, but the follow-up turns into a very cliche cookie.
3. The objective evaluation is indeed carefully written, so I reluctantly give it four stars. 20% Boring, 30% exciting, 30% weird, 20% unfinished. There is a lot of unnecessary description in the early stage, but it starts to jump again at the end. The interaction between the male and female protagonists in the early stage is a bit interesting, but in the later stage, there is not much writing about it, and secondly, when there is nothing to do, they go to bed to solve the problem. To be honest, although I didn't write it down in detail, all the scenes mentioned are disgusting. I really liked it when I was halfway through it, but the ending and extras were really bad. I can only say that I used too much force in places I shouldn't have used.
4 It's a very simple, very direct, very two-person romance, and a very novice romance. It's a pure romance story with almost no plot, but it's actually quite smooth. . A super-controlling dad x a straightforward and cheerful sweetheart, a very typical story about a pot with a lid, otherwise the police will be called. .
3.5 It's weird to be honest. . There was no plot or design that made me particularly unhappy, and I didn't have a child, which is already rare in the modern world. The plot and characters are not considered suspended, but they are just purely boring and completely unattractive. It can barely be considered a mini version of Marriage First, Love Later, but maybe it's because of the way it's written and the plot is too scattered, which makes it look weird...
4.5 (4) The article itself can be rated as 4.5, But the hot searches about girlfriend fans, sister-in-law, and public and private matters gave me a very, very headache. I should not challenge myself to look at any related careers easily in the future. . Except for this nice, standard urban sweet story, the heroine is a rare and well-matched baby. She is proud but not annoying. She has some shy moments but is basically not aggrieved or sad. The male lead is okay, cliche, a bamboo horse god. The one thing that is not manly enough is that he feels that he is about to fall out of favor. He should not drink alcohol and take the initiative to seduce the princess to give her a sense of freshness [Star Eyes] [Star Eyes]
3-4 Start high and go low. The plot and characters have been falling apart since the breakup. The later episodes are also very uncomfortable to watch. If the line is good, I can give it a +1.
4-4.5 Add 0.5 If you are too crazy now, and deduct (.) If you give birth to another child in the future. This is a story about a man who has a crush on a man and takes the initiative, but mainly writes about the female protagonist, but has a gentle and beautiful daily story of falling in love. Come on, the author. I really like this style [Star Eyes] [Star Eyes]
The island survival part in the early stage 4.5-5 And the 4 cp in the later stage are quite cute in themselves, but the plot is indeed a bit too naive!
4-4.5 The story/character design itself is fine. I like the character design and relationship model... But the writing itself has some areas where it can be improved.
The article itself is 3.5/5. It can be seen that it is trying new writing methods/story types, so +1. More like a light novel...? The research on the plot is obviously more intensive than the interaction between the protagonists. There is not much about getting along with the characters who are best at it, but it is obvious that the creator has put his heart into it.