The King's Avatar Fanfiction

1 [ [The King's Avatar] First of All, You Won’t Fall in Love at First Sight Cuckoo SeedRomance477k WordsOngoing 8.6kFavorites9.3kClicks/ch27.8kGifts

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I'd give it three and a half stars. I've read more than thirty chapters, and it's a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. The female protagonist is a classic, broken, beautiful, strong and miserable, with low self-esteem and no bottom line. She habitually pleases others. Her character design is similar to that of a book about the heroine named Xia You Xiaohong. This kind of character design is relatively strong, and people who like it will like it very much. For me, if you go up quickly, you will go down quickly, because it corresponds to the strong character. I feel tired and bored after the threshold is raised, and I don't really like this kind of heroine who looks like a vampire dodder flower. Although the heroine is super strong in e-sports, she is too submissive to the people around her in real social interactions and doesn't care about things that many readers care about. This is the survival logic of this type of heroine. In addition, the author likes to pile up a lot of vocabulary to describe the details of appearance and demeanor. It is a bit complicated and procrastinating, and it shows a bit of literary youth, which is not my type. A lot of times writing it feels like having a self-orgasm in your head. Basically everyone falls in love at first sight when it comes to love. I don't like the free love line given by the speed of light, which seems very boring and boring. What I want to complain about the most is the stupid bird system. The tasks and punishments assigned make me speechless. For example, sleeping in the same bed with xx, hugging and kissing xx, and the punishment is death or turning into a succubus... I see these tasks and punishments as a question mark. This is not the way to push the plot. It can only be said to be a way to satisfy the readers and the author's bad taste. The heroine is even more passive under this system. Although the heroine has a chaotic outlook and doesn't care about the content of these tasks, as a reader, when I see the heroine turning into a succubus at the mercy of others, my first reaction is wtf. . . I don't feel the ambiguous atmosphere, I only feel the frustration of losing the initiative and dignity. At this point, the heroine has become M. The m here is not a derogatory word, but an objectively expressed concept. The heroine is in a state of being controlled and obeyed every day. The heroine does not object to most things because she also agrees with this approach, because it does not harm her interests. However, the way she makes decisions is to obey others instead of taking the initiative, or to apologize and withdraw first and wait for others to push her. The advantage of this is that she shirks responsibility afterwards, but the disadvantage is that she looks very m. . Because no matter what you think in your heart, it looks very aggrieved from the outside, not to mention that the heroine doesn't feel this aggrieved at all with her chaotic outlook. Otherwise, people have to pretend to be cool in life. No matter what you think in your heart, just pretend first. But the one thing I want to praise the most about the novel is that the forum style and the illegitimate fan circle are written so well. It is this forum style and illegitimate group chat that attracted me to read it. It is very interesting, interesting, and interesting.

2 [ [Full-Time] What Is the Champion? Can You Eat It? Ga Fei'erNo CP35k WordsCompleted 1kFavorites1.7kClicks/ch795Gifts

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321 On ID, the goddess come back. I really like the heroine's image of a young man running a train.

3 [ [Full-Time Master] a Quiet Place Zhen DanRomance22k WordsOngoing 124Favorites311Clicks/ch63Gifts

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This book is interesting. The heroine's image is relatively three-dimensional. The story centered on the heroine has the feeling of having her own life outside of glory.

4 [ [Full-Time Master]now or Never Yogurt BerriesRomance10k WordsOngoing 410Favorites1.4kClicks/ch157Gifts

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The heroine is Korean, especially the Queen's mean persona. This Korean entertainment toilet smell is so good. She is so capable of scolding the heroine's mouth, but she is still absolutely powerful and absolutely popular. It's so cool. Should the emotional line be one after another? I'm not sure yet. The book written by this author is not as natural as this one. The toilet smell may be from the comfort zone hhh, but the same point is that the first male guest is FSJ. The spring of work has really come recently, and many new articles are being serialized.

5 [ [Full-Time Master] This Matter Is Also Recorded in the Fan Fiction Xia YuecheRomance251k WordsCompleted 2.9kFavorites2.6kClicks/ch6.6kGifts

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I am an old writer who writes full-time, but after so many years, I still haven't gotten rid of the smell of fish in the fish. It's like eating a grain of sand in the tender and silky fish meat. The diaphragm is very obvious, but I can't bear to throw away a plate of fish. Although this book is written about the heartthrob Su, the male protagonist is actually determined to be Ye Xiu. It is too obvious to create a god for Ye Xiu... The description of the heroine insisting on her original intention and refusing to take shortcuts made me anxious. When she said "I don't want to be dominated", I was embarrassed, especially when compared with the calm demeanor of the opposite Ye Xiu, it looked even funnier. It is said later that it is about becoming freewheeling, but this is not the case. The emotional line only looks good when the heroine is poorly presented. If the heroine takes it seriously, she will fall into a cliche and be very tired to watch. Especially the existence of this strategy system makes the heroine very weak and uncomfortable to watch. It reminds me of the book downstairs about a heroine who has been fighting for ten years of glory. The two books are similar in that I don't want to read it when the heroine is normal, but I like the latter one more when the heroine is crazier.

6 [ [Full-Time Master] Goldfish KkzzouoRomance219k WordsOngoing 3kFavorites2.2kClicks/ch2.6kGifts

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The heroine is Korean, a very cute little girl Editor 2: Updated on 10.23, The rating has dropped, forcing the value to write about competitive beliefs, loyalty to fans, self-sacrifice, and players being sympathetic to each other, there is no need.

7 [ [Full-Time] Chronicle of Prince Baihua Arctic DogRomance140k WordsCompleted 4.9kFavorites6.5kClicks/ch7.5kGifts

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The heroine is very cute, sunny and funny, and her interactions with other characters are very comfortable, daily but interesting, and the content of the competition is just right, but the forum part is average, not sharp enough or fun, but it is enough. Another point is that it is not conflicting enough. The current progress is very harmonious, smooth and enjoyable. If the article is abandoned in the future, it will probably be because there is no drama. In short, it is boring. I look forward to a turning point in the later article.

8 [ [Full-Time Master] Being a Genius, I Chose to Play for Glory, Which Made the Seniors in the Academic World Cry Bitterly. WangmingtaiRomance171k WordsOngoing 2.1kFavorites2.2kClicks/ch1.2kGifts

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The writing is quite good, but the character description needs to be improved. It can be seen that he is a novice. The writing style is very exam-oriented and educational, and the relationship with the female partner has a strong sense of deliberately trying to make Lily. It has more game content and focuses on the career line. Compared with other novels, the characteristic of this novel is that although the heroine is also a genius, the writing is more down-to-earth and does not feel erratic. Ps. Not all content describing the relationship between women can only be reflected through Lily, and not all female hostility is due to female rivalry. What's more, behind many female rivalries are actually people's vanity, desire to perform, and desire to compete. Do people really love men that much? That's not necessarily true. Don't write so deliberately when writing about lily, as if you are performing for the readers. Many authors fail to grasp this point.

9 [ [Full-Time] Pure Hate Warrior Has Something to Say BraukeleRomance24k WordsOngoing 652Favorites1.7kClicks/ch312Gifts

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It's better to make a short story, just watch the climax part and it's done, there is no need to lay out too much plot, emotions or characters. In fact, I really like to read long stories, but many of them become more boring the more they write, or they start high and low, so short stories are the best solution for this type of writer. I say this because this author wrote the simulator novel downstairs. I have abandoned that novel for the following reasons.

10 [ [Full-Time Master] You Dare to Fight the Emperor Too Red Barrel Blueberry BRomance35k WordsOngoing 773Favorites687Clicks/ch433Gifts

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There are two other books by this author at the bottom, but they have all failed. I don't know how long this one will last. Now I can sign up for V. I hope it can be longer. I enjoyed writing the first chapter of this forum novel. My favorite one right now is the childhood sweetheart sandwich of Two Ghosts of the Void... The heroine is a dancer who switched to e-sports due to an injury. There is no need to say more about the author's Su flavor. But having said that, why do you still have so many authors working on your job?

11 [ [Full-Time] What Kind of Simulator Are You? BraukeleRomance32k WordsOngoing 1.3kFavorites945Clicks/ch638Gifts

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It is lighthearted and cheerful, and the heroine wants the Su Shuangwen that the heroine gets. However, because there is no blank space in the plot, the follow-up development can be seen to the end. The heroine only has a prominent "player" attribute and no personality. The fan character is too philanthropic and the description is too broad and rough. In short, it is not attractive, and the book is full of books. Ps. Apart from the word "player", many novels written about gamers describe the heroine as having no personality. There are also many second-person novels in which the audience is supposed to join the party. Anyway, it looks like drinking boiled water to me, tasteless and traceless.

12 [ [Full-Time] Can a Poor Man's Life Be Turned Around by Relying on Absolute Options? A Closer Look at the Tide 123Romance53k WordsOngoing 3.8kFavorites8.8kClicks/ch1.7kGifts

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There is a post on the meme, don't worry about it, just watch it for fun, click to see the extremely vulgar and spoof, the absolute option to harm everyone

13 [ [Full-Time Master] You Still Have to Believe in Love, You Bastards PyxisRomance16k WordsOngoing 587Favorites1.5kClicks/ch61Gifts

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This is 95% prostitution and 5% career as a musician. Love is constant and only about men who compete for men. When the heroine was questioned about this, she responded with the man who is young, obedient and has low academic qualifications. I laughed and nourished my stomach. Although everyone knows that you compete for men with low academic qualifications, it is too low-key to say it clearly in this place where meritocracy is oriented. Full-time filters cannot save you, because men with college degrees have become labels. The fact is that we working men do not even have college degrees... Ps. At first glance, I suspected that this book was a trumpet by a certain author, but after reading it, I felt that this book was more refreshing, natural and down-to-earth, and not so pretentious (I felt like I was about to be beaten). Fortunately, it was divided into short stories about different men, because I really didn't want to read the various sleeping stories of the chic goddess elder sister and the cheating man.

14 [ [Full-Time Master] as a Planner and Strategy Player The Way Has No CauseRomance574k WordsCompleted 23.2kFavorites27.7kClicks/ch70kGifts

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It's a new book by the author downstairs who has been working for ten years. The identity of the heroine is interesting. I look forward to the follow-up. Editor 2: The follow-up was a bit boring. The novelty of the planning and character design was exhausted and it became boring. I didn't continue reading after entering v.

15 [ [Full-Time Master] Become the Number One Equipment Developer in Glory! Miyuki0515Romance31k WordsOngoing 279Favorites518Clicks/ch163Gifts

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The heroine is a graduate student in materials science, and she has a very special personality as an equipment developer in the fanfiction. I have always liked this author's writing style, and he also wrote a fanfic about Dragon Clan. The protagonist is not considered Su Shuang in the traditional sense, but has a heavy sense of exhaustion. People who have been rubbed down by society, career, and family read between the lines, and there is a sour feeling in the faded movies. But this sour and tired feeling combined with the heroine's character makes it even more unique. The author's writing is also very down-to-earth. For example, the heroine has a lot of professional knowledge in the process of making equipment. The only drawback is that the relationship has changed. Editor 2: The heroine had an online relationship with a working man when she was in college or high school. The moment I saw it, I dropped my head. I have a stereotype about online dating that I met through games. Originally, the loneliness of the heroine in the previous article seemed to me to be like the atmosphere of a literary movie, but suddenly I was presented with someone who had been involved in online dating in a game, which really made me wonder. Is this some kind of reality that deceives little girls who lack love?

16 【 [Full-Time Master Otome] a Fourteen-Line Love Poem for You YuyuRomance16k WordsOngoing 204Favorites656Clicks/ch2Gifts

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A collection of short stories in a superb stream-of-consciousness style. Both stories have particularly delicious customers... Some of the heroines are bright and sunny ladies on the surface, and some are cute and lively little suns. In reality, they are deviant and dank female ghosts in private. With a superb customer, who can not eat this meal? Ps: I clicked on the column and found out that it was the author of the book for ordinary glory players. No wonder when I read this book, I was wondering why JJ fans were all recommended by Zhang Jiale. I feel that it is suitable for writing fast-paced short stories. Long stories can easily expose many problems.

17 [ [Full-Time Master] the Strategy Game Has Come True River Wind a Thousand Miles AwayRomance1.2M WordsCompleted 42kFavorites51.1kClicks/ch48.9kGifts

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Four and a half stars, half a star deducted for the heroine's characterization and gender stereotypes. This book has the most competition scenes in this book list. The career line of the protagonist is very refreshingly written. There is basically no cp in the main text. The group portraits, especially the many seventh-term freshmen, are quite detailed. I don't know if it's because it's about fandom making love. The writing in this book is not as dry as the other books, but the description of the heroine's appearance and some descriptions of clothing are quite subtle. I really wanted to highlight the coolness of the heroine's appearance, so I added a lot of unnecessary modifications. , The description of clothing also deliberately includes a lot of small skirts and matching, which is very contradictory. The contradiction is that the heroine is obviously a capable pragmatist, but the excessive description of clothing and appearance feels like deliberately increasing the femininity that conforms to the stereotype. My attitude towards this is that the author has committed the problem of wanting and wanting, which is beyond personal control. If you read the other reviews on the book list, you can actually see that my portrayal of the heroine Su Wei in Su Shuangwen is more inclined to a light and natural style. I don't like too many deliberate descriptions of the face. It just depends on the readers to appreciate it carefully. Secondly, there are some very typical "average girls can't..." Speeches. But these are minor quibbles and innocuous. Ps. I got Zhang Jiale for the first time in this book, and I'm sorry to say it, but I really tasted the heroic beauty of sacrifice from his loser temperament. I've seen many fans recommend Zhang Jiale before, but I didn't get the writing, so I was very rebellious towards this character hhh.

18 黄 Huang Shaotian's Secret Love Notes It's Not a HorseRomance8k WordsOngoing 407Favorites2.1kClicks/ch41Gifts

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Cp Huang Shaotian, the heroine is a documentary director, the two are high school classmates reunited after a long separation, the writing is very comfortable, more appropriate than the author's other book.

19 [ [Full-Time Master]404 Not Found Illuminating FlowersRomance368k WordsOngoing 1.8kFavorites1.3kClicks/ch1.3kGifts

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All Xiang Su Shuang is a collection of short stories used to store the author's imagination. Each one is very exciting, and the author's writing skills are good. There are currently three ideas that are very popular, including a game robot heroine whose data was violently deleted by players, an e-sports player who looks like a fairy but is a shy little girl at heart, and a girl who is really epileptic and mentally ill but doesn't know it.

20 [ [Full-Time Master] When I Woke Up, the Glory Level of the Whole World Dropped a Hundred Times, but I Was Not Affected. All Things to MeRomance3k WordsOngoing 88Favorites1.1kClicks/ch41Gifts

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The article is as its name suggests

21 [ [Comprehensive] My Sister Arrives It's Not a HorseRomance147k WordsOngoing 7.3kFavorites9.6kClicks/ch12.7kGifts

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Needless to say, if you are a true fan of gk, you will love gk regardless of the subject.

22 [ [Full-Time + Dragon Clan] After Breaking Up, My Ex-Girlfriend Went to Slay Dragons Pavilions Full of FlowersRomance332k WordsOngoing 14.8kFavorites24.1kClicks/ch36.3kGifts

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I'm actually quite subtle about this one, so I put it up since it's very famous among Dragon Clan fans. In my opinion, the heroine's strength and character are not very good. The enhancement of bloodline strength is achieved by being reborn again and again... In addition, Huang Shaotian's line in the plot is too thick and annoying. The heroine obviously can't let go of Huang Shaotian's first love, Bai Yueguang, not to mention that Huang Shaotian dumped her because of e-sports. The author's reason for this is quite perfunctory. She is a heartthrob. There is also a famous book by this author that I didn't like. The heroine is just a cute little girl. There is a plot where Zhang Jiale manipulates her, and in the end she actually reveals herself to be a gamer. . I'm really convinced. .

23 [ [Dragon Family/full-Timer/stealing Pen] the Dangers of Online Dating Toddler GenjiRomance559k WordsOngoing 18.3kFavorites29.7kClicks/ch110.3kGifts

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CP Ye Xiu. The writing is very good, and the characters are very suspenseful. But the biggest shortcoming is the single cp, and the love line is poorly written. The heroine has been helping Ye Xiu for no reason. She played a few games online without understanding it and met him offline. Why did she drop out of school to help him play games... The heroine's image is very bad. I don't like to watch various heroines who help the original characters. Secondly, Chu Zihang is the uncle of the heroine, which means that the heroine is separated in age and generation from the hot men of the Dragon Clan. This is simply unacceptable. It is like having a large table of delicious food with different flavors in front of you, but you can't eat them. It's a sin.

24 [ [Full-Time]how Many Children Do You Have? It's Not a HorseRomance263k WordsCompleted 7.1kFavorites8.4kClicks/ch3.2kGifts

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It will be very satisfying to read it in one go. If you pause in the middle, you won't want to read it again. Because this book is essentially a ticket book, it sleeps with too many men, and the men are too fair-mouthed to be boring. In addition, the heroine's attitude of not taking the initiative or refusing sometimes makes people feel like they are just looking at the story. In fact, she wants too much. I always think the best thing about this kind of ticket is that it tastes good when you catch it, but you get tired of it when you eat it. Secondly, there is the old problem of some Su Wen, which is too deliberate and boring. The author tried his best to create an image of a big sister who is merciful but very chic and indifferent. However, the overall article is in an overly exaggerated state. It would be better if it can be controlled and inward.

25 [ [Full-Time Anke] You Are Favored by the Dice Mother Xiang LiangzizRomance373k WordsOngoing 4.9kFavorites5.4kClicks/ch9.9kGifts

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Su Shuang is one of the few An Kewen who can be seen, and Su Shuang is An Kewen's background. But there is still a problem that all An Kewen has, unable to remember. . An Kewen and the simulator novels are like this. I got bored after reading too many of them. It doesn't matter whether the heroine has a name or not. I just felt so refreshed after reading it. But if you ask me what I said about the heroine's character, I really can't tell you.

26 [ [Full-Time] I Have Been Wandering for a Long Time Xia YuecheRomance189k WordsCompleted 4.3kFavorites10.5kClicks/ch551Gifts

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Three and a half stars, this author has written many books, but because they are relatively old, they are more or less a little bit ridiculous, mainly because of the stereotypes of men and women and the character design of the heroine. The heroine is not a very refreshing type, but the literary waste is interesting.

27 [ [Full-Time Master] Tuntunrat Shocked Ye Xiu for a Hundred Years Qichi ShanzeRomance131k WordsOngoing 3.2kFavorites5.6kClicks/ch2.4kGifts

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This is also the best thing to do in one go. The heroine is very cute and has a naive feeling. But I don't like this kind of character design, because he is always suppressed by Ye Xiu, and his literary talent is disappointing.

28 [ [Full-Time] Can the Cyber Girl Win the Championship? HottottiRomance40k WordsOngoing 2.4kFavorites4.3kClicks/ch2.2kGifts

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The heroine is a 16-year-old super middle-aged girl, cute

29 [ [Full-Time] the First Step to Chase the Demon Sword It's Not a HorseRomance51k WordsCompleted 2.3kFavorites4.3kClicks/ch1.9kGifts

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The character design of the heroine who is an illegitimate child is quite popular, but this book written by Huang Shaotian is very OOC, very masculine, without the youthful feeling like his label. It feels like the two-dimensional paper man has grown a few times, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable... In addition, the process of voting is essentially a sleeping powder, which immediately reminded me of the real-life e-sports circle. And looking back, I found that this author's old problem is still looming. My rude opinion is that all her works in recent years share the same template for the heroine. I read the short stories and got acquainted with the setting, but I can't stand the long novels.

30 [ [Full-Time Master] Don't Only Half-Speak. Zhen DanRomance41k WordsOngoing 1.8kFavorites4kClicks/ch456Gifts

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I vaguely remember it being very refreshing, which means that the heroine's character has no characteristics, but she is quite beautiful. I attribute this to the author's writing style. My impression of a novel begins with the description of the heroine.

31 [ [Full-Time] Everyone Thought We Were Eloping No Blue CardRomance25k WordsOngoing 1.8kFavorites7.6kClicks/ch1.1kGifts

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Perfect daily life. I love the heroine. She is a rare heroine who I met on the way away from home because of family reasons and Ye Xiu, who gave up his studies and became a traveler. The heroine is very smart and completely active. It is very interesting to see the deflated Ye Xiu in his teenage years.

32 [ [Dragon Clan/full-Time/stealing Pen] Sanqi Worker Ga Fei'erRomance73k WordsOngoing 1.7kFavorites2.7kClicks/ch1.3kGifts

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Don't worry if you read this author's fanfic, the heroine is a heartthrob

33 【 [Full-Time] Development Game Is Loading Milkshake JellyfishRomance39k WordsOngoing 1.6kFavorites2.4kClicks/ch3kGifts

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The heroine doesn't play games, and treats the Glory characters as cubs. The heroine was described as very ordinary in the beginning. For someone like me who likes the heroine design, I abandoned it several times. The later setting is more interesting, which overwhelms my pursuit of the heroine design.

34 [ [Full-Time Master] After Ten Years of Glory The Way Has No CauseRomance47k WordsOngoing 1.4kFavorites1.9kClicks/ch398Gifts

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The heroine's mental state in this book is worrying, but that's what I like. When the heroine's mental state improved and she started to guide Ye Xiu normally, I wanted to abandon the article. I didn't want to read a serious strategy article. Can you write more about the heroine going crazy?

35 【 Full-Time Masterprincess Diary Red Barrel Blueberry BRomance82k WordsOngoing 999Favorites1.3kClicks/ch294Gifts

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It's very cool. I also gave up several times because of the heroine's name. The heroine's name is "Nian Zhizhi"... It's really not my stereotype. As soon as I saw the words "abb style" and "Zhizhi", my heart skipped a beat. I already had a clear picture of the heroine. When I opened it, it turned out to be true. In addition, the heroine's feelings for Hou Jiashi were inexplicable, and Excellent Era was not good to the heroine. A genius like her wasted a few years in the youth training camp. The atmosphere in the team was also bad, and Ye Xiu was forced to leave. The author did not explain this setting, which made the heroine insist on being very abrupt even when Excellent Era was on the verge of disbandment. Ignore this and you can still watch it.

36 [ [Full-Time] Thunder Transformation Meter Selling Wheelchairs in an AlleyRomance51k WordsOngoing 628Favorites1.9kClicks/ch360Gifts

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It is a rare unruly teenage school bully heroine. The heroine's youthful spirit and student's astringency are well written. However, it is boring to see the loyal dog who becomes Thunder in the later chapters. Fortunately, she was stuck on the road to becoming a loyal dog (can I say that?

37 【 Full-Time Masteronline Dating Master Red Barrel Blueberry BRomance11k WordsOngoing 385Favorites1.1kClicks/ch44Gifts

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This book is more to my taste than the Princess Diaries by the same author. I recommend it. I like the heroine's naughty temperament.