This is a complaint about having too many points, being cheated by copywriters, being a novice at writing, etc. If you think what I said is wrong, don't attack me. I just want to make a record. There is no hierarchy.
After reading the copy, I felt it wasn't as good-looking as I imagined. It felt a bit um. How can I say that the character design of um Gong didn't stick to it?
The copywriting is good, but after reading the article, I still feel that I was deceived by the copywriting. I feel that the writing is a bit dull in the later period.
Uh-huh, I don't know if I can put it this way. I think it's a little oily, but the copywriting didn't feel that way. After reading the article, I felt like I need to use a bottle to remove the oil and water. The character design didn't stand up, and it fell apart in the later stage.
I am a novice at writing, but I feel that my points are too high and I was deceived by the copywriting. The copywriting is quite good, but the text does not convey the feeling reflected in the copywriting.