Personal Archive of Long Reviews 自用长评留档

1 那 That Fearsome Female Alpha 那个女A凶名赫赫 Martian Short Stacked Blocks火星矮积木Romance142k WordsCompleted 12.6kFavorites30kClicks/ch5.4kGifts

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In fact, I would give a rating of 3.5 Stars, which is a little higher but not much. It is quite a pity. It would be better if the plot connection and emotional development were more carefully considered and polished. I personally really like the deer, crane and white in the sea of ​​flowers on Rosemary Island and Chi Meng's oath of ten thousand deer. Many small designs are actually very warm, and the sticky sweethearts in the susceptible period are also very cute. In fact, whether it is Chi Meng's injury in the middle and his outstanding carving ability to replenish energy, or the clever use of the energy master's expertise to resolve the enemy's attack crisis at the end, it can be said to be an outstanding memory point as a plot fragment, but it is very strange to put it in the whole story. Theoretically speaking, the development of the story usually builds up to a climax step by step. As a result, the plot is arranged as follows: You have just saved the spaceship and saved many lives, then you have to take a certificate to prove your ability to legally join the job, you have just blown up a mine to defeat the enemy by yourself, and then you have to participate in an energy engineer competition to show that you can carve 999 circuit cards. It's clear that the protagonist's ability has been shaped by a more intense confrontational plot. It was exciting at the beginning and I was looking forward to whether it would be even more exciting in the future. In the end, it turned out to be something that was obviously lower than the ability threshold, which hooked the readers' psychological expectations and then handed over a boring successor. It is really difficult to accept... As long as these plots are changed, the reading experience can be improved to a higher level. Secondly, as for Lu Hebai, I really wonder why he can't take his sister Lu Qingyi and fly solo with the Lu family? He spends tens of millions to buy gifts without blinking an eye. Not only does he have his own power, but he is also a rare and precious purification healer. This is already very powerful. Not to mention that he can be at the top of the federation, but at least he can not be coerced by others, right? To be honest, Lu Xuan, as a villain who wants nothing, is too low-level to be worthy of attention. As a result, he was plotted by him again and again. He and his sister were almost set up for sexual intercourse. If Chi Meng hadn't taken action, he wouldn't have been able to stop it. And you want your father to be included in the family tree. Lu Hebai, aren't you already buying shares secretly? Why do you want to put yourself and your sister in danger? This part is top-heavy and actually plays 0 role. I don't know what to say. It's really a pity... Many of the basic designs in this article are quite original, and the daily relationship between the young couple is very warm. Both parties pay attention to giving emotional value and will not easily cause misunderstandings and internal conflicts. If it is polished and written longer, it will be a very good novel.

2 穿 I Became the Villain's Wife 穿成了反派的老婆 Jin Cheng锦橙Romance564k WordsCompleted 87.7kFavorites363.4kClicks/ch68.3kGifts

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Some time ago, I suddenly wanted to read some novels in which I traveled to the villain camp and was still bound to the villain camp, so I had no choice but to survive. I found this article by randomly searching for keywords. Hmm... This time I am writing a second book review, and I found that the comment area seems to be quite controversial. The rise of female consciousness in recent years is good. Maybe the ancient spoiled wife framework makes it seem that it does not respect women very much. But in fact, I think the core of this article is not problematic. It can be regarded as an exploration of the budding stage of female consciousness. There are many shortcomings, but it is undoubtedly female-led. Focusing only on the novel itself, this is also an excellent story. When reading, you can have a good and relaxing experience by closing the comment area and not being led along. The main plot is to be a good wife and mother. If you want to see naughty children being taught to be good cubs, you can give it a try. And each chapter will be written with hundreds of words, which is cute and funny... There are some balances such as marginalization/male cohesion/female competition/object balance. Before jumping into the trap, you should read the top carefully to see if you can accept it. Although the appearance is that of a domineering boss who buys and sells by force, marry first and love later, the characters of the male protagonist Lin Suizhou and his adoptive mother Lin Aiguo are very careful, and they are not the conventional indifferent CEO and vicious mother-in-law. After all, a father who can accompany his daughter to sing "Little Rabbit" can be so bad. We Zhou Zai are just childish ghosts pretending to be serious. Ms. Lin Aiguo is also great, avant-garde and enlightened, and the stories that happened in the past are really touching. The author is very good at daily descriptions, and the ordinary dialogues are interesting to watch without dragging on. Each child has his or her own quirks, the well-behaved first grader is bound to the rebellious Ah Wu, the noisy Liang Shen and the cry-loving Qian Qian. In fact, it seems that Qian Qian should be the most worry-free, but Jiang Tang really raised these children very well. It's probably about 70/30 of raising kids and building a career. In the early stage, we deal with the difficult little kids with their own characteristics, and in the later stage, we focus on upgrading and beating faces. After all, there are golden fingers and backstage, so this part is nothing but success. It's an ending, so I decided to arrange it this way. In fact, I can feel that the author is very courageous in writing. It touches on many hot social issues, including school violence and trafficking. The stance is very upright. After all, he wrote it early and is tolerant. The part that I personally can't accept is Ah Wu's departure and Zaizai's balance. Although it is said that Ah Wu is one of the children, he is actually arranged to "die". This plot arrangement is not necessary. After all, it is said to let go of the knot and then disappear to give Chu Yi complete control (? But the actual effect is that except for Ah Wu's death, 0 people's lives have been affected. At least they are left and said to be sleeping... Anyway, it looks very uncomfortable to me. And the full order is my personal habit and respect for the author's labor. Seriously, it's hard to describe my feelings when I see Chu Yi and Liang Shen find a partner in the third chapter of the extra chapter and then find their emotional balance. I can accept Ouyang Liang Qian's cp of deep bonding and natural development of emotions. As for Tian Tian and Xia Mengmeng, one of you has changed your soul and it makes people feel alienated. Finally, I would like to say that once I go back to the past and see Zhou Zai, there is no follow-up. I am half-hearted in writing. I really want to watch this...

3 对 I Had to Chase the Target All by Myself, and After a Chase I Found Out That It Was Not a (Female A, Male O) 对象全靠自己追，一追发现不是A（女A男O） All the Strength and Pain力力皆心苦Romance116k WordsCompleted 1.7kFavorites5.5kClicks/ch257Gifts

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It is a very cute and life-like article, the young couple get along with each other in pure love; to choose the reader's taste, please check whether the xp is: female A male O/female chasing male. The male protagonist Bian Tingshu might give people a cold feeling at first. He silently watched the female protagonist Jiang Wuyue pursue people and have sex, and thought he was a bad man who likes to watch other people's hot faces and cold butts... (A huge misunderstanding). But after catching up with him, he is actually very cute and contrasting. He looks like a piece of dough that has just been taken out of the refrigerator. After the heroine defrosts it with love, she can move her hand up and down as she pleases (? It rebounds slowly) But there will always be a response every time I pinch it, and the emotional satisfaction is really great. The descriptions of how Shu overcomes the shadow left by his past bad experiences, fills the psychological scars, regains self-confidence, and gains the ability to express love directly are very gentle and delicate. Yueyue is a good baby with full sunshine and full mobility, and I feel full of vitality with her. I'm actually torn between giving it four stars or five stars, but after thinking about it, I felt that the rest of the plot, except for the romance, is a bit thin. It's really short. The struggle against sexism/stereotypes exists but there is very little content. The focus is still on chasing a partner and falling in love, because I personally prefer articles with more plot. (Walk around.) It's really painful that Jinjiang can't be rated 4.5 Points...

4 我 I Cultivate Pills in the Interstellar Era and Become a Legend 我在星际炼丹封神 Fish in Water鱼之水Danmei (BL)597k WordsCompleted 79.9kFavorites114.1kClicks/ch177.7kGifts

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It's okay. The main plot is actually quite simple. The way the plot is told is straightforward, the tension is relatively weak, and the reading experience is relaxed. There are very few conflicts. The focus of the plot is on how to do scientific alchemy in the interstellar world. It is very topical. It integrates the immortal cultivation channel and the interstellar spiritual power system in a strange and harmonious way. I have never seen this kind of subject matter. It should be quite niche and novel, but unexpectedly it looks very good and a genius idea. The self-built system of world view has complete logic and detailed content. There are many setting introductions. It may be a bit confusing at first, but the explanation is very detailed and organized. The methods and functions are explained clearly in two or three sentences like a manual. The alchemy process is interlocking. The setting is not to throw away an elixir after making it, but to supplement the completeness of the alchemy system in the article. The setting of combining the efficacy of the elixir with mental power/spiritual sea is also very good. After reading it, I feel confident that my mother will let me go to the interstellar to make alchemy, cough cough. Although I don't know how to make alchemy, it does not prevent me from experiencing the happy mood of "Hey, let you open your interstellar eyes, what is the wisdom of the world of immortality?" As the upgrade line of the article (? And the main point of enjoyment, I can give five stars to the content of the alchemy part. The emotional line is natural and there is nothing wrong with it. However, I feel that this article is more like a career article. Although the interaction between Xue Jinxing and Yan Lan is cute, this cannot compete with the content of alchemy at all. It can only be said to be a dose of medicine. Let's spice it up, it's a slap-in-the-face flow of the center, and the presence of the attacker is a little higher than that of the supporting role. I don't mean to say that this part is not good-looking. I feel that blowing up a spiritual storm for you is as romantic as lighting up fireworks. I wish the young couple happiness. As for the main plot, the settings and solutions to the problem of super star-level death explosions are based on the fusion pill system of the full text, which is very comprehensive and solid. But how can I put it, the biggest boss was defeated very easily, too quickly (…) It is not difficult at all. Those who like to watch the confrontation between the positive and negative camps should not have high expectations.

5 砸 Sell Everything to Pay for School 砸锅卖铁去上学 Red Thorn North红刺北Romance1.1M WordsCompleted 960.2kFavorites1.6MClicks/ch4.5MGifts

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It's so good to read, I read it in one sitting in three days, and the reading experience is also very good! It felt like I really accompanied Damocles on a journey of re-emergence. The background is explained very concisely. Although it is an imaginary world, it does not spend a lot of pen and ink to instill the setting. The entry threshold is very low, the early foreshadowing is fascinating, the plot development and the appearance of the characters in the group portrait are also arranged naturally, the foreshadowing is long-term and natural, and the atmosphere in the comment area is also very good. Readers will consciously maintain it. There are no serious spoilers, so you can feel free to discuss it. I think the plot can be divided into three parts, one is the growth of Wei San, the other is the rise of Damocles, and the last one is the new life of the entire federation. And these three parts are not only progressive in terms of the subject involved, but they are also inseparable from each other, and they are really integrated when viewed coherently. Wei San is the core of the story, but the story is not only about her, but also includes more flesh-and-blood characters. In the growth line of Wei San, the problem of survival in time travel and the establishment of short-term goals are first solved very quickly, laying the foundation for the final chapter. The relaxed writing style lays a solid foundation for the entire article, completely establishing Wei San's character image and personality, allowing readers to synchronize with her thinking mode and action logic. In the middle, there is also a background of the star beast and the debut of the male protagonist Ying Xingjue. The rhythm is really tight, but it does not feel too fast when reading, making it very acceptable. Then the growth line was immediately merged into the rise of Damocles line. After Wei San entered school, he met Ying Chenghe through Jin Ke, while echoing the theme of making money to go to school, he entered the black factory, met Huo Xuanshan and Liao Runing, and the protagonist team was officially assembled. Then, through the official launch of the Hephaestus Competition, the article entered the most exciting and my favorite climax of the large group portrait article, facing different situations in various arenas, and different military academies. Various bonds are formed between people, and it even feels a bit refreshing to read the story quickly. As the event progresses, not only Wei San transforms from A-level to super 3S level, but Damocles also gets rid of the dilemma of being at the bottom of the crane. Through the efforts of these fresh and fearless students full of youthful spirit, they gradually become the favorites to win the championship. This kind of growing collective honor is also very touching to readers. As they read, they feel like they are fighting side by side with Damocles Military Academy. After these two lines completely melted and matured, the last new federal line also joined. The foreshadowings previously buried in the article were connected one after another. The fate of the three Wei people, the fate of Damocles Military Academy, and the fate of the entire federation were tied together. The final chapter and the final battle finally arrived. The enemy was very powerful, but fortunately, as we grew along the way, we were not afraid. Although it was difficult, victory would definitely belong to us. At this point, the three lines were officially unified, making the content of this article complete and substantial. I also like the emotional line very much. Although I think this is not the focus of this article, the ambiguous period between Ying Xingjue and Wei San until the final confession is really delicious... It is a mixture of indulgence and appreciation. They are obviously different but experience very similar understandings. It is natural to develop from mutual secret observation to an atmosphere where outsiders cannot get involved. They are the best match, and pure love is the best!

6 和 A Happy Ending with My Own Brother's Beautiful Dao Companion [GB] 和亲哥的美人道侣HE了 GB Yao Yao Zi要要子Romance417k WordsCompleted 40.7kFavorites47.4kClicks/ch17.6kGifts

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In fact, based on the score of the emotional line alone, I personally can give it four points or more. After all, long live the straight ball! God, I really love straight talk. If I have something to say, I will resolve any conflict immediately. If I like it, I will like it. If I want to hug you, I will hug you. If you want to kiss me, I will kiss you. This feeling of firmly grasping the initiative in emotions and actions is really great. I really like it. Tuwei's emotional initiative is really the most worry-free part of the character. You don't have to worry about the misunderstanding that makes you want to die, the difficulty of expressing your love for you, and Feng Qiandeng, you are really too astringent. . The innate holy body of the Four Loves, cold and charming, you must be eaten dry and wiped clean by the disciples. Whose xp is restless? It turns out to be mine. But I don't know why it seems so streamlined. The plot seems to come out one after another, so I just write it down. There are many places that can be shaped into the climax of the plot, but the reading experience is like scratching the surface. For example, when Tu Teng confronts Lu Wenyou because he wants to see Feng Qian Teng later, it feels like he's stuck somewhere. It could obviously be made into a character with explosive growth. I can only say that maybe the author is not good at writing this kind of plot, but the relationship between Tu Teng and Tu Teng is still very enjoyable. Some of the characters are too flat or do not have a vivid and fixed personality at all. They just grow up in about 20 chapters. The author must have written smoothly and adjusted well with the characters under the pen, and the personalities of all parties have gradually unified. I can't dwell on the background of the world. Anyway, when I read it, I felt that this bloodline-only fairy sect or most of the monks had no need to save them at all. Even they themselves were ruined. They pretended to fight, but in fact they would rather fight among themselves than bother to contribute to the destiny of mankind. When encountering problems, each one would run faster than the other. And the few positive characters other than the protagonist have to be ridiculed by this group of show-offs... It's hard to comment. Anyway, I want to give up treatment altogether and support the devil as the new orthodoxy. You all should die to me (. When creating multiple sides of a contradiction, you should first establish the basic side. Xianmen is anxious to emphasize it without even having a positive image. If it is said to be rotten, then this immortal sect is not even as good as useless, and it is a disaster to keep it. It is better to tear it down and build a new one. I don't understand the combat power system. It seems that the golden elixir is already a very powerful level, but usually it is still very frustrating and can be manipulated by others. It requires the help of the ancestors to accomplish many things. Therefore, if you add the plot part, the rating of the whole book will not be very high (... Because I am a person who pays great attention to the plot, but if you just want to see the emotional line and don't care about the plot, then I highly recommend reading this book, it is super sweet and cute!

7 太 The Professionalism of a Eunuch 太监的职业素养 Tong Ke童柯Danmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 136.2kFavorites385.5kClicks/ch246.5kGifts

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I finally finished reading it. This is a novel that is very tiring to read in the early and middle stages, but not because of the twists and turns of the plot that are mind-burning, but because the emotional lines interspersed with the career line are very tiring to watch. Don't read this if you are under control, you will be pissed off (no kidding). The sense of CP between attack and reception was weak until about one hundred and sixty chapters. Although I don't support the countless censorship comments in readers' comments, I feel that this reflects the biggest problem of this article to a certain extent: the speechless emotional line. And from about Chapter 190 onwards, the relationship between the two people can be said to be like a dry tree blooming and a long drought coming. The two parties established basic mutual trust, confirmed their feelings, and their relationship returned to normal. It made people less hypertensive. Wow, it was really worth setting off fireworks to celebrate. The protagonist, Shao Huachi, the seventh prince, has a period of character growth, but until both parties completely trust each other and reveal their feelings, he cannot be regarded as a character that readers like at all. This is not to blame his poor characterization. I can only say that if you don't have the patience to accompany the protagonist to grow, then you should leave quickly. I don't expect it to be perfect, but the beginning of this relationship was full of coercion, calculation, use, misunderstanding, selfishness, never speaking, and all the irritating elements you can imagine. It's hard to sympathize with him when he suffers so badly, and sometimes it even feels like it's all his fault. Alas, as long as there are enough points, there will always be one tailor-made for you. The career line of the conspiracy is really exciting. See how Fu Chen went from a fake eunuch to the king of Baoxuan step by step. The author comprehensively and meticulously analyzed it one by one. Killing the symbol of the Wolf Star is like stacking chips in the chess game of the world. What's surprising is that this part is well written, and it doesn't take much thought when reading. All the strategies are like an outline. All the benefits and possible development directions are written out in every aspect. Everything you thought of and didn't expect is in it. You can happily abandon your brain while reading, and the part that arouses emotions is left to the compact book. The structure of the story is full of ups and downs, and the clever suspense setting makes people's attention involuntarily captured. They follow the protagonist step by step, turning dangers into dangers, and using all possible means to survive. Every step is foreshadowed. Every step Fu Chen takes is difficult but practical. His final success is truly what he deserves. The focus is on the protagonist, but the author's writing skills are solid and three-dimensional. It can be said to be a semi-group portrait. When you watch it, you won't have the feeling of "because he is the protagonist, so he will definitely win", because the opponent has always been very powerful, and his strength is online. The author really wrote the essence of using less to win more, which is interlocking. This part is particularly beautiful and I like it very much! ! As a digression, the design of "Past and Present Life" is particularly baffling. After reading those three chapters, I personally felt that there was a piece of hook history in my rice. The good bl cp suddenly turned into bg for me, and the far-fetched and abrupt one seemed to give me a blow in the head. Finally, I would like to talk about my personal highlight. There are many typos, and even the name of the main character is misspelled. I saw that the bugs in the comment section were from 5 years ago.

8 三 Three Sentences, and the Protagonist Shou Abandons His Evil Disciple for Me 三句话，主角受为我抛弃孽徒 Pluck Peaches and Ask for Wine折桃问酒Danmei (BL)680k WordsCompleted 45.9kFavorites46.7kClicks/ch22.1kGifts

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The main plot is very simple, the reading experience is easy and smooth, the length is not long, the world view and the portrayal of supporting characters are relatively tool-based, focusing on the sweet interaction between attack and suffering. Gentle sick weak attack x Bai Qie Hei crazy criticism, gifted wild painter x apocalyptic plant type defecting experimental subject, the interaction is very cute, the character creation is very delicate, there are many cars stuffed in the candy (looking at the sky. Maybe it is not just Lan Shanyuan who needs to ask Zeyi to be his light to dispel the darkness, let He has reconnected with the warm and beautiful part of the world; on a deeper level, Wen Zeyi also needs a morbid but tough love like Lan Shanyuan to heal his past of being always abandoned if he is not chosen. Generally speaking, this kind of person is a delicious cookie! The shortcomings are also obvious. The big boss of Tiandao is really fragile in the later stage. Although I know that I will not die, I am very worried after watching it... The plot of "Sealing the Aperture" is a bit long and delayed. The biggest role of the cultivation background in the whole story is to prevent the fourth question from dying (actually it is not), but it is really not important and is a background board. As several reviews of this book said, this is an anti-routine novel, and the final direction is still very traditional. The author who reveals the truth about the world at the end should want to make the characters more three-dimensional, whether it is Gu Yanjin's resistance or Shen Juyu's acquiescence to the rules, but in fact there is no It was so successful that all the problems had to be solved by Lan Da and Wen Si in the end. The only way to end the darkness in this world is to rely on the power outside the world, right (luck), so the plot was very bland, and there were no impressive memorable points in the whole story. Once you finish it, you won't want to watch it again. Relax and eat sweets to pass the time. Don't worry! Lovers of dramatic group portraits should take a detour