HP Fan with Personal Comments (Continuously Updated
Collects
25
Books
46
Grade
Level A
Updated
2y ago
I have been reading HP articles for 9 years, and I have mixed tastes. I hope to find common ground while reserving differences. I will also recommend serialized articles, and there are also mines that I think the plot is not good (different opinions), you can eat it according to your personal needs.
All heroines, it's been a while since I forgot the plot. I'll review it again when I find time.
I remember it should be pretty good-looking, and it's still being serialized.
Cp Sirius, the original indigenous heroine, without Voldemort but with Professor Riddle
The writing is okay, the playful words used in the first person point of view really struck me as cute, and the heroine is cute.
The pit is shallow and I'm not updating anymore, but it looks good. I'll give it four stars.
By the way, the cover is very nice. It seems that I paid for the appointment. I really like the heroine with black hair and blue eyes.
All heroine single arrow, time travel heroine
Updates were stopped after being reported, and the synopsis was posted at the back, so you can get into the literary wilderness.
Cp George, the original indigenous heroine
The first part is okay, but in the second part the heroine doesn't even appear much, the plot starts to follow the original work, and the proportion of quotations from the original work is too high
The emotional line in the middle and late stages is almost zero
Cp Tom, the original heroine
You can understand something by looking at the title of the article, right?
Healthy love is good, but dark emotions are even more satisfying
Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, sister-brother love
The writing is good and the plot is interesting, but the author updates it three times a year, which is considered a trap. Give it four stars, it's worth watching if you can wait.
Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, Draco has low OOC level
Very delicate text, with a little bit of abuse in the middle, probably a bit sour or sweet.
Also first person
Cp Cedric, the original heroine
Quite sweet in the middle
But I don't like the extra story very much. Seid joined the Quidditch team and didn't go home for a long time. The heroine Ravenclaw gave up the chance of promotion in order to take care of her children.
CP Abu (yes, Draco's grandfather, Lucius' father), the original indigenous heroine, has a big golden finger
I remember it was pretty good, but the earlier ones were inevitably a bit awkward in the middle.
Cp Cedric, the original indigenous heroine
Completed, good writing, first person (this is my personal cuteness, if it is someone else's fault, please avoid it)
It's really good to write well in the first person, especially if it's a fanfic, so I'm more tolerant.
CP Sirius, the original indigenous heroine
I have nothing to say about the writing style. I personally think it is very good. The plot is also logical and well-rounded. It ranks in the top ten in my heart.
The heroine of all is a descendant of the next generation. The heroine is from a time-travelling flower gardener.
It was discontinued after the fifth grade.
Cp Voldemort, original indigenous heroine
The main text is ridiculous, Dumbledore is portrayed like a control freak, and the extras are...
As well as the cheating/marriage scenes, it's a matter of opinion.
Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, sister-brother love, the heroine is a snake-like Ravenclaw
I can't remember clearly, it seemed a bit rough in the middle, I'll re-do it when I have time.
There are several branches in the CP extra story, and the heroine has been reborn four times.
A bit sour
But this book was actually written by the author when he was still in junior high school and high school? Give it four stars
Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine
A bit like a Mary Sue, not very memorable, but still writing extras? This article is seven years old
Demining is written at the back: the heroine is a Muggle noble, if you can accept it, you can read it.
Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, is the daughter of Sirius
The writing style is quite serious, but the author hasn't updated it for a long time.
Cp Harry, a time-traveling heroine, a funny article and the heroine is a hottie as the title says
The pit is shallow and the updates are broken, but I give it four stars because it looks pretty good.
CP Tom, very short but very beautiful!
I didn't expect that less than 30,000 words could bring some reversal and shock to me. The writing is so powerful.
Cp Ron, time travel heroine, first person
The words used are a bit embarrassing to me, brainless cookie
If you can accept the demolition of Luo He, you can watch it
Cp Tom, the original indigenous heroine, started in the orphanage
The pit is shallow but beautiful, so I give it four stars. I beg the author to come back and update the TAT.
The cp has not yet been determined. It is an original heroine, borrowing the setting of an unlucky child. For details, please see the introduction of the article and the food guide.
The serialization of "Kengqian" is slow to update, but it looks good, so I marked it with five stars.
Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, 1991 was both the year Harry entered school and the year Su Jie entered school. The heroine from Eastern Europe came to London to study.
The pit is not shallow, but it has been out of service for a year. It was very interesting to read, so I gave it four stars.
Cp Draco's bl text, the ancient time travel system with Miracle Warmth
I completely treated it as a censorship-free novel. The emotional line was so awkward that it could be regarded as a mindless novel (…?
Cp Snape, original heroine
For example, the father of the female protagonist in the title of the article takes up a larger proportion in the article, and the emotional line is average. I always feel that most people in the comment area prefer to see the father-daughter relationship?
An old comedy, complaining about the heroine, sometimes it's quite embarrassing to watch, but you can watch it because of its ability to resist embarrassment
Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, a world without Voldemort
It's a silly and sweet article, but I feel like Harry in a world without Voldemort wouldn't be like the one in the article? Anyway, don't look at it with your brain
Cp Harry, the third creation of Orange Light with the same name
Demining: The early stage was okay, but the later shaping of the heroine was very different from the second heroine. Harry was portrayed as a male chauvinist, and the relationship was very unequal. I remember that the name of the extra child was not up to the heroine. If you can accept it, you can watch it.
Cp Sirius, the original indigenous heroine, quite satisfactory, the plot and writing are a bit awkward, and the emotional line is a bit inexplicable?
Demining is written at the back: The bg article has an original bl line. The heroine's brother x is a Ravenclaw, and the heroine's brother is bent. There are many descriptions of this pair of cp, which is acceptable.
All heroine, serialized but interesting. There are options at the end of each chapter. The plot is based on readers' votes, which gives you a sense of development.
The demining is written at the back: I agreed to update regularly on a certain day, but there were other readers of the author's articles under the comment area causing trouble. It was probably because of the interruption of the update. I can accept it and read it.