HP 94 Diagon Alley

Family members, here we are teaching Squidward, who can't seem to get rid of Spongebob's arrogance, incompetence and rage hahhhh

It's a very interesting long HP fanfic. At the end, especially the final battle in Chapter 78, based on the original work, those who were saved by the author's wife played a very powerful role, and they were naturally integrated into the plot of J. K. Rowling's original work. It didn't feel out of place at all~ Especially in the end, the navigator who answered Harry's questions at King's Cross station was changed from Dumbledore to Sirius. This setting is so clever! If I insist on talking about the shortcomings, it is that this love line has less writing and ink. You can feel the family and friendship, but there is really not too much love. The relationship between the male and female protagonists has no twists and turns, no ups and downs, and is very smooth ~ But although such a relationship is not impactful enough in plot presentation, who can say that they are not envious ~

Grades 1-5 are pretty good, but later on I feel like I can't tell who the protagonist is, there are too many original works posted, and it's lackluster.

The writing was good at the beginning, but in the end I felt that the author couldn't write a plot or a sweet love, and copied large sections of the original content. It's a pity that the heroine is invisible. In the early stage, the heroine's perspective was really interesting.

After reading the whole article, I actually like this extra episode the most, hahahaha, madam

Great writing! There has never been a story that I could reread immediately after reading it. The protagonist can be completely integrated into the original work without being too abrupt, and the characters are not OOC. They save everyone very logically. Unlike other fandoms that force gold fingers to save people, the Savior Cult is really amazing, and I have no regrets! But social death is also death hahahaha

This book has the best logic and the least OOC among all the happy endings I have read.

Very good article, thank the author, thank you for being able to read every word of this article. After seeing the charm of the twins, in retrospect Fireworks Exploding Pink was really the happiest episode. Gwen is a very good original protagonist. Her objectivity and rationality are my favorite part. The Snape extra is so fun, even more fun than the redemption story. The description of Snape has very low OOC content. I love it very much.

It's a really nice HP novel.

I was so moved by Draco's story that my heart broke.

This is the first fanfic I've read about George! I feel like most of them are Fred's, well I love them all. All in all, really great! Throw flowers! !

Big, awesome! The professor finally lived his own peaceful life

I wonder if you are interested in writing a story about Fred's brother.

What a wonderful article, what a wonderful article!

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! !

"Bang" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

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It's great. I've eaten [Orange Candy] a lot.

I like it. It ranks among the top Harry Potter fanfics I've read.

So sweet ah ah ah ah

Dazai, be happy no matter where you are Thank you very much for letting me see the possibility of Dazai's happiness, thank you Liuliu

[Purple sugar] kswl [Purple sugar] kswl [Purple sugar] kswl [Purple sugar] kswl [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

Teacher, I want to see something even more shameful [hug] you tell me quietly ()

What a great author and text

Wow, wow, such a beautiful article, I just saw it now [changed][changed] I really want to watch the extras.

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it

Isn't the book next door open yet? I've been looking forward to it for a long time.