[Hp]pride and Prejudice

Looking back, it is Harry who is arrogant and prejudiced, and Ola has become just a wife who drifts with the crowd and has no sparkle.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for generating love. But I still have to say that it was too scary to read it all at once. At the end, I felt how ruthless the heroine was... Was the author taken away from her? ? ? The text describes everything before the second breakup The plot is just right. Ola and Harry go from pranks and friction to hormonal adolescence to finally opening up to each other. The emotional line is very pure and has sexual tension. The characters of both people are full and delicate. Ola's arrogance, Harry's kindness and slyness. They are all full of the freshness and cuteness of teenagers. My aunt laughed the whole time I watched it. But after the second breakup, and after Harry attacked Aura, I felt as uncomfortable as being fucked by a piece of shit! Harry's character completely collapsed. At the age of nineteen, when he was supposed to be young, he turned into a greasy, wretched, and possibly domestically violent daddy. Ora went from being a self-reliant and proud young woman to a "beautiful girl" who spends all her time acting coquettishly on Harry. In the BE extra chapter, the author even specifically wrote that she had become a depraved and humble prisoner who wanted to sell her body to Harry in the interrogation room. The most disgusting part is the scene where the heroine gives Harry a blowjob (as well as the "fighting for a son", the fact that a child born in ten months of pregnancy cannot be named by himself, etc.), And the scene in the extra story where a group of male characters discuss girls' bodies obscenely, the meaning of which is unclear. And maybe the author wants to highlight the "political" factor, because Harry and others finally achieved political victory, so they can become superior to the heroine? ? I understand this plot but have no respect at all. Also, in the Auror chapter, Harry spoke in a vulgar and obscene manner that was very uncomfortable. What was he writing about? ? It completely destroyed the image of Harry that was successfully created in the first seventy chapters. I advise everyone: just read the text, otherwise you will be so angry that you can't sleep. The ending of this article can no longer be described as "bad". It is completely bad from a male perspective.

I don't think Harry and Ola are on a relatively equal footing in this book. Ola doesn't have a complete personality from beginning to end. Although I like Ola very much, and I think the author who wrote this kind of setting and created power for love is excellent, I still feel pity after reading it no matter how many times I read it. Originally, Ola might be able to become a better player than Klum with her talent and hard work, but she gave up on her own, although her reason was that others on the field might attack her injuries, and that she only competed to prove herself. But every great athlete has injuries all year round. None of them has stopped or given up their career because of this, because this is the power of passionate faith. Not only have they achieved outstanding results, but they have also been praised by their opponents. It makes sense to want to prove yourself, but if you can prove it in one game, others will question her again in the next game. After quitting the game and returning to her family, Ola will not have the quality and willpower to prove herself again. I believe everyone knows that sports competition is actually quite cruel, especially for female athletes. It is really a pity that Ola has not thought about fighting injuries and fighting herself. She can obviously get more things through her own abilities, a more successful career - and even a better man. But this is the power of love. No one forces Ola to become an independent woman. She becomes a member and spends more time at home with her husband and children. There is nothing wrong with giving up her career for love. But she will never be able to stand up for the rest of her life. Without her young body, tenacity and strength, she will always be trapped in the identity of Mrs. Potter. Harry has become her only support, and it would be best if she could keep relying on him, but no one can guarantee it. In the original work, Ginny relied on her own hard work and strength (everyone who has read the original work knows that Ginny is very powerful and courageous) to become an excellent reporter. This is completely different from Ola. I think Ginny is better in terms of career and personality charm, which is also a bit sad about this work. But this work itself is very good, except for the concept and the portrayal of the protagonist, it is impeccable

I watched it a year ago. I felt that the final episode was not very satisfying, but it was much better than most old Ford JJs. The front part was really great. To be honest, a free long fanfic was suddenly judged by so many people. I thought it had written something that directly subverted the protagonist's three views. Don't look like a god when reading free articles. If you don't like it, you can leave. It's enough that the characters in the text are not big problems. It's really weird to hit the cook while eating.

Wow, a very good article, it successfully corresponds to the title of this article. The author is also very biased. He writes well at the beginning, but towards the end, he writes the heroine like shit. Don't you think it looks like pua? This is the real spoiled wife literature (applause, applause), the male and female protagonists have completely changed. Look what you wrote about Allen? Harry has been written as a greasy and confident man with a big belly? Not to mention that it is written based on the game, this is completely a fanfic with the name of the so-called protagonist. Damn it, in the end the heroine doesn't even have the right to be named, right? How much do you hate this heroine?

The backend is so bad... I know the author is Harry Dreams, but the heroine is also an independent character...

This article has been recommended many times, so Wenhuang read it. It was pretty good when it was written during the school years. Although sometimes it makes me feel a little weird when I read it, it can be explained by the fact that the child was still young and immature. However, when it was written after the war, many parts of the story portray Harry as too broken. Moreover, Ola is written as a spoiled wife, which can be explained by the fact that the author is Harry Dreamgirl, but Harry writes it like this... I have never seen any character Dreamgirl write this character into an adult body that looks daddy, greasy, and pua female. It makes me feel sad.

Before Chapter 73, it was very good, very sweet, relaxed, and the details were well handled. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was also very good, and the male protagonist was not too OOC. But! ! In the following chapters, after the male protagonist becomes an Auror... Uh uh... The male protagonist "grows up" too fast, is daddy-y, preachy, and fails in the heroine's character quality - he wants to have his own career and a spoiled wife, especially when the heroine gives the male protagonist sex, which is really not in line with the heroine's tsundere and proud character. (It's a bit ugly to say, but it's the truth) Alas, I really hope that my wife back then could love the heroine more. But maybe each character has its own direction; maybe my wife is no longer under her original control as she writes it; maybe my wife will read this article again many years later and will arrange a different route for them, because the characters are growing, and so is the author.

I have read almost all the hps on JJ, and I found that many people are recommending this book, which I have collected for a long time but have never read. However, I am very disappointed. When they were in school, Ola and Harry were very lively people, with small shortcomings and great advantages. But as soon as they graduated, something was wrong. Ola suddenly became hesitant and very uneasy. She looked as if she didn't care about anything as soon as she saw Harry. What I don't understand is that Aura didn't lose anything in the war. The only thing she wanted to say was that her elbow was injured and her friends were not in a good situation. In addition, I don't understand why Harry became so greasy and daddy as soon as he graduated. His behavior made it impossible for me to see any sign that he loved Orla and respected her. Could just shaking the bracelet and crying be enough to make up for all the trouble he had brought to Orla? After graduation, Harry really made me feel like I was watching the scene in an idol drama where the male protagonist looked down on the female protagonist's job, so he ruined the job opportunity that the female protagonist had worked hard for and then loudly reprimanded her for what she was doing now. It made me feel panicked and sick.

I think this article is pretty good, and it's one of the best ones I've read among all the Harry's articles. Harry also has many shortcomings in the original work. In this article, Harry and the heroine also have a lot of shortcomings. Harry is a bit like his father, an arrogant maniac. This article also fully reflects his machismo, super control freak, stubbornness, etc. The heroine was confusingly like a love brain at the end, always coaxing her to go along, which made me feel that it was not her place to do. But after thinking about it, I just softened her temper for the sake of her partner. It should be the same reason why she would act coquettishly to please her beloved brother. Now I'm fed up with articles where the male and female protagonists are perfect and look like dummies. I just like to read about the collision of love between imperfect male protagonists and female protagonists. Only normal people have shortcomings.

What kind of person is Ola...? At least not like this, this kind of Aura is not the Aura Egil I know. Throughout the novel, except for Harry, the other characters are not the characters I know from Weitian's Ao Pi. It's so OOC, I don't know how to say it, just watch it for fun

I'm speechless, I still prefer the original Orange Light. [Split][melted]

What I wrote above is really good. The flaws are not to be concealed. It is 80% immortal and 10% rat shit. The main reason is that Harry's writing is too little and I am really hungry after reading a lot of 50% fifty shit.

I read the novel last year and wanted to review it this year. I found that many people are saying that Ola has become a spoiled wife with no sense of independence. Harry is very greasy and paranoid. The author of this article also said that there is a big difference with the heroine of Orange Light. In the original novel, the brother did not ignore Ola so much. , So Ora's performance in the daily chapter is a little more disdainful than in the novel. In this article, Ora will doubt that no one cares about her because her brother ignores her, will be shocked because Draco said Hermione is a mudblood, and will worry that Harry will be angry because of the fake Firebolt. I think Ola has always been an unqualified Slytherin, unable to leave everything behind. She values feelings more than freedom. She kind of likes Harry's domineering attitude. She says Harry's sincerity is rare (people who keep saying Harry is really a bit morally kidnapped, and his childhood was so miserable. I knew I had to die when I was 18 years old) Even though I lost the opportunity to be a Seeker later on, I still worked in the sports department after getting married, doing what I liked, and had a happy life and a happy family. My husband was capable and loved me very much. This is probably the dream life of 99% of girls. I think there is no rule that all girls have to live on their own. How lucky to be able to have a life of happiness and preference.

It did fall apart later on. Everything before the second breakup was pretty good, and his brother Allen really didn't care about his sister. He was obsessed with love and warned Harry to stay away from the heroine. The heroine was really miserable in the later period. Before the second breakup, it was really beautiful. It would be more perfect if it stopped there, and even more so after the war? ? I feel like Harry's character is also broken. How could he be the heroine who was injured and retired and still treat her like that in the beginning? I was also shocked.

After re-reading it, I found it very amazing. Both the temptation of GG and the sincere infatuation of AD when they were young were vividly depicted. What is terrible is that after they separated, they seemed very different from what they were back then. GG seemed to be full of obsession. After completing half of the great cause of ruling, he seemed arrogant and complacent. He spared no effort to ridicule AD, and AD seems to have washed away all the frivolity and arrogance, becoming polite, always calm, unmoved and a bit cold. I really like the last sentence "I saw dead people". To be honest, this is the perfect ending for AD and GG in the entire HP series. Ashes to dust, dust to dust, forget about old things, nothing can compete with the fading of time.

It's super cool. This is my favorite Harry bg fanfic so far. It's super cool.

Nice! Ignore the comments below that are too long to read! It's a cookie suitable for Harry's dream girl. My wife said it was a female lead story from the beginning. If you want to see the heroine pursue a career, why don't you read this female lead story? The portrayal of Harry in this article is so good, and it restores the charm of the savior in the original work. The other characters are basically not OOC, so please don't think too much about Harry Dream Girl! Finally, I would like to thank the author for retaining Luohe, and even having Luohe sugar QAQ

After reading this book without reading the comment section, I think it's actually okay. Maybe I haven't read any Harry fanfics, hahaha [laughing] After reading it, I scrolled through the comment section and found that many people were discussing that there are indeed some problems in the post-production of the male and female protagonists. I really can read it without reading the article. This setting is quite good.

I have never been so scared of a man...

The author's thoughts are actually the same as mine. I originally liked Malfoy. I thought the fanfics were good, but after reading too much, I felt a little tired of the aesthetics. Plus, I was a fan of the original novels in the beginning, so I didn't have a good impression of Malfoy! But when I read those fanfics, I really felt sorry for Harry π_π. I wanted to read about Harry Potter and the original girl, but I couldn't find it. The only ones I found were all otome, and they were also very partial to Malfoy. Then I suddenly had the idea of ​​​​writing my own, but my writing skills are not good (╥ω╥`), so I gave up. I came here through Douyin recommendation. Madam, I am so impressed!

After reading so many articles, this is the first time I've seen Potter so aggressive.

After reading it, I realized that I actually don't like Harry. I don't really like Harry. I prefer the gentler ones. The interesting ones are the icing on the cake. Sure enough, I love Gemini?

Wow, I really like Harry and Ora in the author's works. They are so charming. Woohoo, I will read it again.

This is the best Harry Potter book I have ever read. I read it over and over again. It is so delicious.

Does your wife still write HP fanfics? Want to see it

All in all, I loved this article!

Madam, Madam, can write! Can anyone please give me some directions on my wife's Weibo? Thanks!

This extra chapter really made me cry! So well written!