When the most advanced testing device in the military exploded into a shower of white light at his fingertips, and the hashtag #FirstEverSuperSGrade# swept across the star network with thunderous force...
The boy, lazily wiping blood from his fingertips, finally let the sharpness he had hidden for eighteen years burst forth and shatter the long-standing peace of the stars.
"Mental power, C-grade?"
"The machine must be broken."
His tone was light, as if he were talking about something trivial.
At the time, no one could have predicted that this nonchalant boy would bring the Federation far more than an overwhelming victory.
The power gathering at his fingertips was a thunderclap strong enough to overturn the old order. Hidden in his eyes was a revolution about to reshape the entire interstellar landscape.
Theme: Learning changes your fate.
"Ji Mingchuan scratched his head, and for a moment..." This is a big bug for the author~ island
Well written, the plot and characters are great
A small suggestion, can you reduce Yu Mingshu's appearance? I don't know why I feel disgusted with her.
When can this large ending of the previous chapter appear at the beginning of the next chapter? If I see it, it will appear in the last chapter now 💔
Why does the end of the previous chapter appear at the beginning of the next chapter, and it is still a long paragraph? I suggest you change it.
The main reason is that there are too many doubts. The more I read, the more doubts I have. I hope the author can explain 🤩
Big, maybe the plot is a bit bland, and there are a lot of foreshadowings that are not solved, so it feels like there is no conflict and it is too slow. Also, there are humans like me who secretly peek at the screen. Hehe
35% Of places have wrong names, the one who looked around at the photo
The introduction was not attractive enough, so I hesitated for a while before clicking in because there was no book to read. I thought it was a type that started with the C-level determination and was revealed in the middle... If I had known in advance that it was not the case, I would have clicked in directly.
The next plot won't start with a fight, right? 0. O