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"Angsty, bittersweet melodrama"
[Stoic, loyal, beautiful-but-tragic bottom x seemingly cold but secretly pure-hearted top who bends for love]
[Synopsis]:
1.
After five years undercover, he returns home only to be sold at a female slave market. After changing hands several times, he ends up in the possession of a male insect.
His wings have been ruined, he is blind in both eyes, and even his brood pouch is badly damaged. No male insect would want to make love to a body like his.
He kneels beside the bed, doing his best to assume a submissive pose. He plans to win the male insect over, wait until his guard is down, and then escape.
But he never gets the chance.
"Take off your clothes."
"I mean all of them."
2.
They fell in love when they were young. On countless nights, they had whispered sweet nothings to each other, cheek to cheek. But when they meet again, everything has changed beyond recognition.
Slade doesn't know how he should face Bohnser.
He hates him for leaving without a word and vanishing for five years without a trace.
So he takes out his resentment on him, tormenting and humiliating him, making things difficult for him at every turn. He is determined to make him suffer the pain of being abandoned, neglected, and left waiting.
And yet, on rainy nights, he wakes with a start, presses his forehead against his, and murmurs in a daze:
"...In all these years, did you ever think of me, even for a second?"
He is lost and uneasy, unable to give his love so easily again, until a flimsy test report lands before him.
Only then does he learn that beneath the ghastly, poorly healed scar on the other's lower abdomen, their child had once grown.
A child who died before it was ever born.
[Reader's Guide]:
1. Both are each other's first and only partner, body and soul. Not suitable for readers who are devoted to either the top or the bottom.
2. A gut-punching, angsty melodrama.
3. Set in a fictional world unrelated to reality. Please don't draw parallels to real life.
4. The story alternates between flashbacks and the present. The flashbacks won't take up too much space, probably around 20% of the novel.
The synopsis for the upcoming novel The Insect Emperor's Marshal is below. If you like it, please add it to your collection to help it get started!
Felix, the youngest marshal in the empire, rose through the ranks amid flowers and praise. He was never short of flatterers or suitors, yet he always turned down every match proposal.
He publicly swore that he would die on the battlefield for the empire, holding fast to the front lines even as his sea of spirit deteriorated year after year.
No one knew that deep in his heart lay an unrequited love that had consumed his entire life.
On the eve of the collapse of his sea of spirit, Felix happened to discover an icon on his optical computer called "Common Sense Modifier."
When he opened it, a panel appeared. Its function was simple: he could change one piece of common sense each day, specifying the target and the change, and the effect would last for ten days.
Felix tried changing one piece of common sense. At the banquet that night, he kept exchanging glances with the Insect Emperor seated at the head of the table.
Felix rejoiced inwardly. Day after day, he continued changing common sense, secretly savoring the little bits of sweetness he had stolen, until one day he was summoned to the palace in haste.
"Would you be willing to become my empress?"
Felix's pupils contracted, and his breath nearly stopped.
A moment later, he bowed again, but his voice trembled despite his efforts to control it. "Your Majesty... please don't toy with me."
But it wasn't a trick. He placed an ornate crown on Felix's head, then led him to the empress's seat beneath the gaze of the entire court.
The joy of seeing his lifelong wish come true swept over him like a tide, nearly breaking through the dike of his reason.
But doubt and dread quietly took root, like worms slowly eating away at the dream he had worked so hard to obtain.
If everything he had stolen was discovered, if it was exposed...
What would he do?
That day finally came.
2.
The Insect Emperor has been troubled lately. The marshal he personally promoted has begun watching him with bold, ardent, undisguised looks, and his behavior has grown increasingly improper. Worse still are his shamelessly suggestive words...
Those things would be fine if he said them behind closed doors, just to him. But how could he say them in front of other people too...?
The Insect Emperor's ears turn bright red. After tossing and turning all night, he finally decides to have a proper talk with his empress.
But when he finally speaks, before he can even finish his gentle reprimand, Felix breaks down first.
Tears roll down without warning. His usually stern face, considered unbreakable by the empire, is now full of panic and despair.
After finally figuring everything out, the emperor lets out a sigh, bends down, and gently kisses the tears clinging to his empress's lashes, then presses a tender kiss to the corners of his reddened eyes. His voice softens:
"As long as it's you, anything is fine."
Theme: Study hard and make progress every day.
After reading the entire article, I feel that the early content is written in a normal and orderly manner (the setting is to my liking), but from the middle stage onwards, the author feels as if he is writing about what he dreamed of, and the whole process is foggy. 1. The connection between chapters is stiff and unnatural. Is this an interlude, a flashback, or a forward sequence? It's the current stage of the plot, it's the student days and it's the escape plot, it's very confusing. 2. The settings are unclear. Is this article a superpower or does it add system settings? Why are there multiple endings, revised timelines, multiple protagonists, etc. I read it carefully, and there is no explanation at all for this setting in the article. I am reading a novel, and I am not doing contextual reading analysis and filling in the blanks. The author did not even give out the setting, which is a bit funny. 3. Lack of character creation. There are so many characters in the article. Their origins and transitions, how they meet, how they communicate, why they cooperate, and why they become villains are too flat. There is no character plot at all, and the characters are forcibly generated just to advance the plot of the article. 4. The holes are not filled and the ending is unfinished. The plot digs so many holes but does not fill them at all. It throws in a new thing and then throws it away. Moreover, the ending is no longer called O. Henry. It is completely incomprehensible and unclear. At the same time, the [mandatory mark] of the article is not shown and the [ball] disappears. Is the title considered deceptive? It was set up at the beginning so I kept reading, but I didn't expect this ending, which is amazing.
After reading it, the article is interesting, but I am confused as to why there is reincarnation and rebirth, and then I run with the ball, but the ball does not appear, and I don't know whether the child is alive or not. The tension between them was also very confusing, and the plot line was not very clear, which made me confused.
I want to see Slade look cold and angry [hug his thigh][hug his thigh][hug his thigh]
There are so many ellipses [lie flat][lie flat][lie flat] I cry😭
I'm so sad that I entered V only after the movie was finished. It's so sad to buy it now
Looking back, I still like this sour flavor... Please ask for more...
The first dozen or so chapters were really written with a sour taste, but as I progressed to the end, I became less and less understandable. I skipped and subscribed to a few chapters. Neither of them opened their mouths. It felt like the conflict was progressing by not opening their mouths and trying to make up for it [covering face, laughing and crying]
After reading it, what should I say? . . It can be seen that the outline is good and the plot is also very good, but it is a pity that the rhythm is too confusing in the later stages. . . Boss, if possible, can you fix it? There were many places in the later stage where I really thought it was something that caused the camera angle to jump. . . . Hey (touch) (crawl to read the prequel)
It smells good 💛 💛 💛, etc. There are ellipses [lie flat] [lie flat] Good fragrance 💛 💛 💛 etc. There are ellipses [lie flat] [lie flat]
The overall plot, concept and rhythm can be seen that the author has created it carefully, but the later plot is a bit complicated and not explained clearly. I also write novels. I suggest that if my wife writes hundreds of thousands of words, she should abandon multiple deep hooks and focus on the emotional line. Readers can just enjoy it. The hook needs to be buried for more than 300,000 yuan to make it clear. As far as this book is concerned, the emotions stacked up in the first part are too high (very attractive), and the subsequent plot hastily reveals the grievances and failed to capture the previous emotions. If the strength of Madam you in the previous description of the twisting mentality is the same It will be used to reveal the truth later, and too many descriptions of the supporting characters' backgrounds will be discarded. I can't imagine how delicious the work will be. It's a pure love-hate relationship between the young couple. The important supporting characters' backgrounds are scattered in different chapters and briefly mentioned, which will not affect the readers who are watching the plot line or the emotional line. Come on, madam! Apart from you, where can I find a wife who writes both sour and bitter articles about Zerg!!! The interstellar literature is almost the same as the Zerg literature. Madam, please consider whether you have any inspiration.