Su Yunyu transmigrated into a book as the head of a sect. He was peerlessly beautiful, famous throughout the land, and could break all spells with a single sword strike.
He also had a proud, heaven-defying disciple named Xiao Shuying, who endured oppression and scorn before finally overcoming every obstacle and achieving greatness.
But transmigrating into a book always came with a mission, and Su Yunyu's mission was to kill Xiao Shuying.
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The Son of Fortune was favored by the Heavenly Dao, and every blessing and opportunity fell into his lap. But Su Yunyu thought, I have the strongest cultivation in the world. How could I fail to kill him?
Yet every time he tried to assassinate Xiao Shuying, either heavenly lightning struck him, or an overwhelming pressure descended from the sky. Once, a watermelon rind even appeared beneath his feet. He slipped and was impaled by his own ancient divine sword.
After failing to kill his target and getting killed instead, Su Yunyu coughed up blood. As he died in front of Xiao Shuying, he thought through tears: None of the Thirty-Six Stratagems worked. This time, I'll win him over instead.
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In his ninety-ninth life, Su Yunyu crammed on master-disciple romance tropes and tried every way to coax and tease Xiao Shuying.
At last, when Xiao Shuying seemed to be falling for him and taking their relationship seriously, Su Yunyu deliberately coughed blood and collapsed into his arms. His pale face, as cold and pure as snow, was filled with tender devotion.
"This lord cultivates the Unfeeling Dao. Would you be willing to die first, so we can fool the Heavenly Dao and evade its punishment?"
But his usually gentle and polite disciple only smiled. His eyes were dark as he gripped Su Yunyu by the throat and parted his lips.
"You've gotten smarter this time."
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Su Yunyu had lived through ninety-nine lives, and Xiao Shuying had lived through just as many.
In every life, he had watched Su Yunyu scheme tirelessly to kill him.
But in this life, that master, lovely as autumn waters and a jade-like figure that could take your breath away, would blush to the tips of his ears and speak to him gently. He would let his clothes grow damp without seeming to notice.
Those eyes, which seemed to hold the stars and moon, could be full of such captivating charm.
Had he changed from trying to take my life to trying to win my heart? How naive. He had long since stopped giving his heart to anyone.
Until Su Yunyu tried to coax him into giving up his life again. Xiao Shuying's heart clenched painfully. He slowly tightened his hand around Su Yunyu's throat, his eyes reddening with obsessive gloom.
"Master, we're destined to be entangled with each other for all eternity."
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Extra Scene:
After his plan failed that day, Su Yunyu was imprisoned by Xiao Shuying and kept in bed day after day. Finally, he couldn't take it anymore and begged the System to fake his death and get him out of there.
Once he'd faked his death, he could leave all his troubles behind. On the night of the Qixi Festival, he lounged tipsily on a pleasure boat. Just as his mind began to drift, the clamor around him abruptly stopped, leaving only the sound of unhurried footsteps.
Su Yunyu lazily raised his drunken eyes. The newcomer was tall and slender, holding a bone whip and running his fingers along its sharp edge as he fixed Su Yunyu with a cold, half-lidded gaze.
For no apparent reason, Su Yunyu shivered. The System's warning siren suddenly blared in his mind, telling him to run. It was Xiao Shuying!
Just as he finally realized he needed to flee, the bone whip coiled intimately around his slender waist and drew him into the man's arms.
Xiao Shuying raised a hand to caress the corner of his drunken, reddened eyes and murmured softly:
"Didn't you want to kill me? Come back with me, hmm?"
Theme: Cherish life.
Don't be discouraged, author. Your writing is very clever, but the pace is a bit slow at the beginning, so the data is not good. I suggest the author to seriously revise the emotional line. The emotional line after the self-destruction of the consciousness is very stiff. The reasons for the master's heart are not enough to convince the readers, including Xiao's blackening. 🐰🐰
Expenditure, I quite like the second male lead, it feels like a more complicated task.
It's a bit disturbing to say that there are some people who are too lazy to curse at this author's data (.) Don't take it to heart, the Internet can cause quarrels about anything.
I really hope that when I wake up, the author can update N chapters and finish it all at once (I went into the author's manuscript box and searched everywhere to no avail)
Happy reading 🐶🌹. The plot is very smooth, and the running part is also enjoyable. I look forward to the new article.
The previous writing is okay, but the emotional line is a bit stiff in the back. Long Aotian's love is obvious, and the master's liking is a bit inexplicable. I feel that it suddenly changed after becoming a Taoist couple. It can be more natural. For example, in the previous plot, there are things that care about things in the name of missions, and give a little sincerity? Well, there's no extra story, Modo Modo
Don't be discouraged, author. Your writing is very clever, but the pace is a bit slow at the beginning, so the data is not good. I suggest the author to seriously revise the emotional line. The emotional line after the self-destruction of the consciousness is very stiff. The reasons for the master's heart are not enough to convince the readers, including Xiao's blackening. 🐰🐰
What! Too late? Chapter locked?
Wondering how to fall in love?
Oh my, please add more 😭