The Straight Guy Who Became His Cauldron Master's Shizun

I finally finished reading it, and I can give myself an explanation for my money, time, and some of my expectations for this article. It's a direct show of cards. The one-star long review is from me. I have never seen a novel that made me so angry that I wanted to bang the table to vent my anger. I won't say too many repetitive things. I will write whatever comes to my mind later. I just want to ask the author, what exactly is Diwan? After all, his death in the original world was for Bai Qinghuan. He could not hate Bai Qinghuan because of his previous devotion to Bai Qinghuan, but he said, "But why do you have to put all the victory or defeat in the world on Bai Qinghuan alone?" If you look back at the full text, who is really hurting and paying the price? For Bai Qinghuan in this life, Di Wan blocked all the injuries he should have suffered, and even shared some of them. The bad consequences brought about by his identity as a furnace are just a dream in this life. He has never been really hurt. He has been complaining about himself, and let Di Wan bear the consequences of his self-pity. He hates himself and "revenges" himself. Di Wan relented too easily. I saw a chapter review before, and I went back and took a look at it. It must be because I came late and it was already a changed version, and I didn't think he was much better. This part is the emotional explosion point in the entire reading experience. There was also the choice of leaving given to him by the consciousness of the world. He actually had no choice. It was just a thing on paper. In fact, he had no choice at all because he was immediately pulled back by Bai Qinghuan and was arranged to stay before he could make a decision. His reactions after coming back all seemed cheap to me because he was shaken too easily. Even though he felt sorry for Bai Qinghuan, after being treated like that and given the opportunity to leave by Bai Qinghuan, he didn't even think for a second that he could leave, but felt "empty." Even if he is on the verge of death this time, he still wants to slay Bai Qinghuan (it doesn't matter what he thinks, the narrative result is like this, he is still trying to help Bai Qinghuan) The humiliation he suffered in captivity was so easily forgiven by you. I am not the protagonist. If you carefully consider the difference between the same thing happening to Bai Qinghuan and Di Wan, you will understand your double standards in narrative. The body of nine yin, the reaction after being hurt (or thinking that it was hurt) and the corresponding compensation, what you did and the price you paid If Di Wan is really a selfish person, this arrangement makes sense, but he is not. He is too good to Bai Qinghuan, so experiencing those things again will make people feel that his efforts have been trampled on, or that he himself is a tool that exists for Bai Qinghuan, rather than an independent role. If you deprive him of the ability to hate Bai Qinghuan, you actually deprive him of his autonomy as a character. Just like the Nine Yin Body does to Ji Wule and Luo Qingxing, it is a kind of dimensionality reduction for the character. I'm tired. It's too late. I won't talk anymore. I'm going to bed.

It's so good to watch, and the ending made me feel warm inside. I love it! The characters are all very three-dimensional. The so-called bad guys actually have their own personalities. They are neither purely evil nor purely good. I like it very much! !

This is the third Dazai novel I have read [poor], and the progress is really obvious! Unfortunately, the data is not satisfactory. I think it has something to do with the subject matter. Xiaobai's setting is unacceptable to many people (in fact, I can't accept it either, as I am an iron-blooded and pure person!) But because it was a big article, I still tried it [poor]. To my surprise, I didn't feel too shocked. It was handled very well XD! In fact, there is a feature of large-scale writing that I like very much. None of the novels written by DaDa can be called enjoyable novels (the sweetest one is the one by Little Junior Brother...). The final analysis is because the main characters of DaDa are designed to be very three-dimensional: there are no pure good guys, and there are no pure bad guys that can make people hate them, so whoever dies, is deflated, or falls into despair will not feel happy. Luo Qingxing and Ji Wule are all such characters, and even the elder who loves talents is also the same. When Dizi escaped, I really hated those elders and Luo Qingxing. I thought the disciples of Qingyun Island were arrogant, the elders were stupid, and Luo Qingxing was arrogant and could only pretend to be a b*tch (...) And took action without first investigating the cause. I was very angry. But then I also thought about it again. The disciples of Qingyun Island are all among the best, and if there is any danger in the world of cultivation, they will be the ones standing in the front and suffering the heaviest losses. It is normal to be arrogant. For evil cultivators who behave suspiciously, if the elders check first, they will most likely miss the opportunity. What's more, the evidence is too clear in their eyes. From Dizi's perspective, I find them annoying, but to them they are just exorcists and defenders. The same goes for Luo Qingxing. I thought he was a hypocrite, but after reading it, I realized that he is indeed worthy of respect for all people in the world. Uh-huh, having said all that, I actually prefer reading cool novels. This kind of portrayal would make me feel very melancholy. When I read Xian Qingchen's book, I even felt that this kind of portrayal was neither good nor bad. I could understand the character, but I couldn't sympathize with the character. It was very uncomfortable to watch. But with this book, I can clearly feel that I have made great progress, and I can also appreciate the charm of this writing method... I really like this kind of beauty with a hint of regret [poor] All in all, I liked this story very much, and it's over!

I'm looking forward to the next book being released, Ai Tu Chuan Xin~

Is this a straight man? Boys who love to hit straight balls [dog head holding roses]

I really can't stand watching this. Author, are you really thinking about Di Wan's character? From the sunny and cheerful little sun at the beginning to the despair in the small dark room in the middle (actually, I don't feel that much despair, I feel like "Hey, I think this place should be desperate"). In fact, where does despair come from and where does it fall? I can't feel it at all, but I just had an idea. I should run away and then catch him and bite him hard. Although there is an explanation later that the devil's energy has entered the brain, it is actually more like a formula). Up to now, I can't summarize or understand this weird behavior. In the end, what is Di Wan's character portrait? I was so angry that Xiaobai didn't care about his body, so I slapped Xiaobai. I can't imagine this kind of plot even with my split hair. Although the portrayal of despair is a bit stereotyped, it has been described for the time being. From despair, hatred to forgiveness, love actually only spans a flash of inspiration. I thought that the only thing that could be handled so lightly was my favorite cookies that were secretly eaten. Xiaobai's character design is also very weird. I can't imagine that the protagonist in the Rag novel can still be interested in oral matter after being reborn, especially since the previous article spent a relatively large amount of space emphasizing how miserable Xiaobai was in his previous life. However, in his relationship with Di Wan, he became the obsessive one. Whether it's writing about Xiao Bai's respect and paranoia for Di Wan's love, or writing about the logic of Xiao Bai's actions, it's like "the author has a plan, so this episode might as well be played like this". Don't be fooled by formulas. I believe the difference in personality between before and after. You said you called a wave of people to time travel again. Stacked Armor: It's just that I personally see that it's a bit red-hot right now. I don't usually write comments. I just feel it's a pity. Come on, author.

There was a section in the middle that I was particularly afraid of letting Di completely replace Yuan Bai's ecological niche and become a heartthrob. Fortunately, it came full circle in the end. It has a wonderful ending and the character creation feels very successful and three-dimensional. Looking back on the plot, the only small regret (maybe not due to my personal taste...) May be that a lot of blood was poured on it, which made the emotional line of Yuan Di feel a little rushed at the end. In short, it is still very exciting overall!

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it (Thinking) By the way, who is Gong San in the original work, the inner demon? [Loading]

The characters are all well created~ The author's writing is so beautiful!

Wonderfully written! It is indeed a book that I have been waiting to finish on my bookshelf for a year! [Star Eyes]