Completed fluffy romance: Scum Alpha? No, the Soft Alpha Fights the Actress Every Day Over Who Tops and Who Bottoms
Coming soon: 1. The Maid Who Has Secretly Loved Me for Years Is a Gloomy Villain, please add to your reading list! 2. My Game Connects to the Cultivation World, Where I Farm, Raise Chickens, and Find a Wife. I really want to write this one, please add it to your reading list!
Synopsis:
Shen Yuanyi, the sexy standout of a girl group, transmigrates into an ABO yuri novel as a vicious minor character.
The original character resented the villain for grooming her, thinking the villain was humiliating her with money and resources. So she decided to drug her.
Shen Yuanyi transmigrates at this very moment. Thinking of how the villain in the book is a thirty-year-old career bureaucrat already nearing retirement, she can't help thinking the original character deserves to die for picking on an old lady.
Though drugged and breathing heavily from the heat, Qi Ning'an still manages to drink a cup of tea to clear her mind.
Shen Yuanyi immediately feels sorry for her.
With the evidence undeniable, Shen Yuanyi drops to her knees and begs for mercy. "Please spare me, big sister."
Qi Ning'an sets down her teacup and sighs. "So you're saying I was drugged, and you really want to sleep with me?"
Qi Ning'an is the most normal person in the book, described as having a heart as pure as a blank sheet of paper.
Shen Yuanyi nods, bluffing her way through. "Yes, I really want to sleep with you, big sister."
After all, with someone as innocent as a blank sheet of paper, just holding hands or kissing her cheek counts as sleeping together.
Qi Ning'an tilts her head. "???"
"Why do I still feel so hot?"
"Just hold my hand, and you'll be fine."
"Is that really all it takes?"
"Then I'll kiss your cheek, too."
Shen Yuanyi is backed into a corner. Qi Ning'an rises onto her toes and blows against her neck. "Is that really all it takes, puppy?"
Everyday life:
The clueless big sister keeps Shen Yuanyi constantly worried.
When bad people bully her, Shen Yuanyi helps her get even.
When her big sister has too many admirers, Shen Yuanyi tears off the masks of those cheating, awful women.
When her big sister gets emotionally manipulated by her elders, Shen Yuanyi speaks up for her.
In short, her villainous big sister is far too pure and kind, and it keeps the puppy on her toes.
The truth:
The puppy falls asleep, and her perverted big sister sneaks into her room in the middle of the night, panting beside her bed.
The bad big sister's photo album is filled with pictures of the puppy, and her room is plastered with them, too.
The moment the puppy takes off a piece of clothing, her big sister picks it up and saves it, instantly turning into a lovesick stalker.
Coming Soon 1:
Weak top, strong bottom.
Jiang Shuzhu is a notorious rich girl and playgirl in Jiangcheng. One night, she's drinking at a bar with friends when a long-haired woman in a sexy qipao dress passes by. She and her friends are captivated, the woman's woody floral scent lingering in their noses.
Egged on by her friends, she, a supposedly experienced heartbreaker who has juggled many people's feelings, is actually a complete novice who has never even been in a relationship.
She decides to toy with the feelings of this woman, who clearly has plenty of romantic experience.
Jiang Shuzhu works up the nerve to ask Li Xinyu for her contact information, putting on the devoted-lover act and rescuing the older woman, who is drinking her sorrows away at the bar after getting her heart broken.
But then...
"Um, um... Could I have your number? I, I like you, woman."
Li Xinyu, drinking at the bar, looks at her. Jiang Shuzhu's heart pounds, and she regrets bragging to her friends about how good she was at this.
Unexpectedly, the woman really does give her number. "Don't use it to get up to any mischief, okay?"
Jiang Shuzhu nods, blushing as she runs off, then goes back to brag to her friends.
Li Xinyu watches her secretly, unable to hide her excitement. "The young miss has grown up."
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Jiang Shuzhu has a maid who has been by her side since childhood. On her eighteenth birthday, she suddenly learns that the maid who raised her has quit.
She can't imagine where a girl with a disfiguring scar on her face could go. Was it her fault the maid quit?
What she never expected was that her former maid, who had been disfigured, would get plastic surgery and become an executive at a publicly traded company.
To toy with someone's feelings, you first have to make them fall for you. And how do you do that?
Every day, Jiang Shuzhu drives her sports car to pick the woman up and drop her off at work, buys her clothes and bags, and brings her steaming porridge when she collapses from her stomach condition...
She's done so many good deeds she can't count them. Has she won Li Xinyu over...?
Jiang Shuzhu tries to steal a kiss from Li Xinyu, but the woman grabs her by the collar, pulls her onto the bed, and pins her down. "What's the point of a simple kiss? Don't you want to do something else to me?"
Jiang Shuzhu blushes, her fingers clutching the bedsheets. She only wanted to toy with Li Xinyu's feelings and prove to her friends that she was a skilled seductress, just like the spoiled rich girl she pretended to be.
With no experience and no prior relationships, Jiang Shuzhu is terrified someone will find out she's a virgin. She makes up an excuse. "You've hurt your waist, big sister. I'll come back when you're better."
Li Xinyu looks at her, moved. "You're the most special person I've ever met. You're not like the others."
The kiss lands on her forehead, cool and soothing.
Hmph. This spoiled rich girl is only toying with your feelings, woman!
Coming Soon 2
Weak top, strong bottom
Teng Shan is playing an 18+ game. It opens with the character she created having sex with an NPC. Her cheeks turn red. It's that intense? No wonder it's an 18+ game.
She exits the game and takes a deep breath. Thank goodness she's alone in her dorm room.
When she logs back in, she's in the farming game she wanted: a soothing art style, a pixelated thatched cottage, mountains, white clouds...
Teng Shan controls her character and farms, ignoring the main quest to win over the chosen heirs of various sects. Isn't that the black-clad character with a red beauty mark between her brows the NPC who had sex with the character she made in the opening scene?
Seeing her makes Teng Shan feel a little embarrassed, and her cheeks turn red for no apparent reason.
Text appears on the screen: "Where are you going?"
Teng Shan replies at random: "Outside to farm."
The game is so intelligent that the character responds based on her answer. "If I hadn't lost all my cultivation, I wouldn't have slept with you last night. I won't submit to you, even if you've marked me. I won't become your wife, mortal."
Teng Shan replies: "Wait, I really slept with you?"
The character grits her teeth, gives her a defiant look, scoffs, and angrily walks away.
Teng Shan thinks it's fun to tease the character, but she came to play the game to farm. She goes to the fields, takes a hoe out of her inventory, and easily tills the soil.
The black-haired character in black clothes watches with wide eyes.
Lu Shixue remembers that the person she ran into was clearly a mortal. How can she conjure things from thin air? Unless she has a spatial ring, but even that would require spiritual energy to open.
Teng Shan gets rice seeds in the game's beginner gift pack. She plants them, exits the game, and returns to it whenever she has free time at university. By then the rice is ready to harvest, so she grabs a sickle and spends three days and nights harvesting without eating or sleeping.
She gives it to the person who's practically her wife, then exits the game.
Lu Shixue looks at the piles of premium spirit rice. In the cultivation world, it sells for one mid-grade spirit stone per pound. Just who is this mortal?
Teng Shan goes fishing and pulls up unwanted boots, pufferfish, lobsters... Boots, pufferfish, and lobsters in a river. Perfectly reasonable.
Happily carrying her bucket home, she asks her wife to cook them for her.
Looking at the food with its saturation bar filled to the max, she swallows it in one bite, plate and all.
She happily exits the game.
Lu Shixue is starting to suspect she's met a hidden master, and that this master seems to have decided she is her wife.
Teng Shan figures out how to make barriers, crafts pills by hand, grows premium immortal herbs, raises chickens that are actually fallen phoenixes, and keeps a snow wolf from the demon race as her watchdog...
Someone takes an interest in the little village. The grass on their grave is already a meter high.
The transmigrator, constantly worried she'll lose her body: Sis, are we even following the same script?
Lu Shixue successfully ascends to immortality and finds Teng Shan playing her game in her dorm room. She lifts Teng Shan's chin. "My husband, mark me."
Theme: Strive upward and work hard to improve yourself.
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A Toxic Woman Wants to Fake Her Own Death? No, I've Fallen for the Girl Next Door
Living with My Online Girlfriend
My Seemingly Chaste Boss Is Actually My Ex-Girlfriend
I Joined a Dating Show and Got Bound to a Romance System
Apocalypse: Summoned by My Scumbag Alpha Wife
This Loyal Dog of Mine Has Awakened to His Cannon Fodder Role
A Wealthy Alpha Was Taken in by an Award-Winning Actress and Had Her Child, Then Went Viral on a Parenting Show
I Transmigrated as a Spoiled, Trashy Alpha and Became a Star
The Actress Wife of This Live-In Alpha Is a Yandere
Scum Alpha? No, the Soft Alpha Fights the Actress Over Who Tops and Who Bottoms Every Day
I Follow the Way of Survival, but the Unfeeling Senior Sister Searches the Whole Cultivation World for Me
Teacher, it's been a while since I read the first article, so maybe it's not very good. As for the second article, I think it may be due to the decline in subscriptions caused by daily redundancy in the later period. (I haven't read many books. The evaluation is entirely based on Chinese language knowledge. The suggestions may not be very professional and objective.) In any case, I hope the teacher can finish it. "Scumbag A?" No, Soft A competes with the movie queen every day" First, the depth of the worldview is insufficient. The social rules in the ABO setting (such as Omega rights and pheromone control) only exist as background and are not fully developed, which leads to doubts about the rationality of some plots (for example, the social consequences of original slag A's drugging behavior are not explored). Secondly, the supporting characters are relatively flat. Except for the protagonist, the motivations and backgrounds of other characters (such as Original Scum A and System) are vague, and they are reduced to tools to promote the plot, which weakens the layering of the story. Secondly, the rhythm control is poor. The conflicts in the early stage focused on the identity conflict of "being forced to attack and suffer", but the emotional transition in the middle and later stages was a little hasty and lacked gradual foreshadowing. For example, Jing Mianfan's psychological transformation from resisting to accepting the mark was completed only through a few interactions, which is not convincing enough. In addition, the repetition of some plots (such as multiple estrus events) leads to aesthetic fatigue and weakens the sense of freshness. Finally, the theme is shallowly expressed. Although the story takes "breaking gender stereotypes" as a hidden thread (such as the subversion of the roles of Soft A and Fishing O), it does not delve into the oppression of individuals in ABO society, leaving the core idea to remain on the surface. If the description of the plight of the Omega group can be added, or the protagonist's reflection on identity, the depth of the work will be even greater. Overall, "Scumbag A?" No, "Soft A Battles with the Movie Queen Every Day" is a qualified sweet novel, but there is still room for improvement in worldview construction, supporting character portrayal and theme exploration. "Cannon fodder A meets the slutty movie queen villain" 1. Role creation: instrumentalization and stereotypes 1. Deputy cp The "slutty movie queen villain" setting in the work has a labeling problem. For example, the villain forcibly intervenes in the protagonist's emotional line to advance the plot, and his motivation is only "paranoid possessiveness" without digging into his career difficulties (such as power struggles in the entertainment industry) or his emotional trauma background, resulting in the character becoming a "tool man" who promotes conflicts. 2. Qi's growth line is broken Qi's transformation lacks credibility, and the character plot needs to be gradually laid out through hook design. Although it is because I have lost a puppy once, there is no detailed description, which makes the character image in this paragraph incomplete. 2. Plot logic: The background of the entertainment industry is exaggerated 1. The description of the entertainment industry as the core stage is superficial and not developed as the main body. As a result, Qi's image as a movie queen and Puppy's dream of becoming a superstar have become illusory, which indirectly leads to incomplete character images. 2. Clues: The puppy in this article wants to be a superstar can be used as an overt line, and based on this, their feelings are used as a hidden line. Of course, the division of light and dark lines does not mean that there are different degrees of severity, but that the whole text cannot only have emotional lines but no career lines that run through the beginning and end. 3. Emotional Tension: Routine-oriented sections dilute the emotional concentration, and the logic of redemption becomes hollow. The protagonist's "redemption" process lacks psychological depth. Qi's killing of the wild cat has always been vague, and there is no specific emotional struggle written. There is no very clear change about the puppy's redemption of the dark Qi, making this aspect very hollow. 5. Rhythm control: weak climax 1. Insufficient foreshadowing of key plots 2. Redundant daily scenes A large number of "sugar-making daily routines" crowd out the progress of the main line, leading to frequent problems such as the background of the entertainment industry being diluted. Summary: In order to cater to the preference of the list, it relies too much on routine elements, sacrificing character depth and theme innovation.
The writing is very good, but the ending is too rushed. Great cheers for the author [like][like] If you stick to it and write more in each book in the future, it will definitely succeed. The writing is very fascinating, and the writing style is quite visual, but it ends at the end. It would be best if the two of them can untie their knots and have a big doo 💪
So Zhou Huan still loves Yan Yue 🤩
I feel like my back is broken 🤔, this change is too big
You can write well, keep writing. The plot has not yet reached a point of strong conflict. Keep writing. You only have 130,000 words. Where are you? 😂 The books in the author column do not exceed 200,000 words. Author, you have to write more.
Wow, I really like this play 🤩
The final ending was a bit confusing, so did Shen Yuanyi come to the world in this book with just a hint of consciousness? Or is she wearing a book? What happened to Zhou Huan and Yan Yue in the end?
No, no, no, no?? I don't allow you to leave!? Come back
Can anyone help sort out the plot? I'm confused.
The emoticons in the comment section of this chapter are so neat [make me healthy]