[Adults, my next novel is a column titled After Becoming the Good-for-Nothing Widower of the Top Omega Commander. Please add it to your reading list QAQ]
[Main story complete. Revising the manuscript now; once it's finished at the end of February, I'll start writing the bonus chapters.]
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At eighteen, Chen Jiashu fell for a boring, dull, broke nobody. Arrogant and self-important, he treated the other man like a cheap man, planning to kick him to the curb once he'd had his fun.
Near the end of his eighteenth year, Pei Zhan said goodbye to his unrequited love, ending two years of being a lovesick doormat. At last, he stopped trying to make Chen Jiashu fall for him.
The day Pei Zhan left, he was perfectly at ease. He said, "My love is precious. No one is worthy of it."
The Chen Jiashu of the past missed his chance, and the Chen Jiashu of the future won't get one either.
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Ten years later, during rush hour in Ninghai, Pei Zhan was driving home when he turned down an invitation to a class reunion.
Chen Jiashu, sitting in the back seat, asked hoarsely, "Are you really that unwilling to see me?"
"Pei Zhan, do you know I've been looking for you for ten years?"
This is the tenth year I've loved you.
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Pei Zhan: sensitive, insecure, honest bottom
Chen Jiashu: favored son of heaven, young master top
Older top | unrequited love | turning a straight man gay | rekindled love | from school to the workplace
Originally titled Empty
A bittersweet story.
I think the groveling arc is pretty extensive.
Readers who are attached to either character, beware: both the top and bottom have flaws.
If you don't like it, click the X. No writing advice, please.
Please, everyone, take a look at my upcoming novel QAQ. Delicious, melodramatic substitute-bride, marriage-first-love-later, and running-away-while-pregnant fiction, with a beauty taming a dog. Don't miss it, folks!
The Substitute Bride Angers a Gloomy Tycoon, Then Runs Away While Pregnant
Lin Yanshen x Jing Lianyi
North American daddy tycoon top x genius undocumented painter bottom
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A:
Gloomy, twisted, unhinged top x two-faced undercover bottom
Lin Yanshen x A Ran
A Ran's parents are both dead, and he has no one in the world. He survives by taking under-the-table jobs in a New York slum, where each day brings fists and sexual harassment.
As he struggles on the brink of death, someone offers him a way to live: take the place of a powerful man's gentle wife and become the Chinatown prince's spouse.
Lin Yanshen has a mental illness. He cruelly caused his father's wrongful death, sicced dogs on his older brother and crippled him, then slaughtered his way through the family and seized power shortly after coming of age.
On their wedding night, A Ran has been drugged. His sweat-slick fingers clutch the hem of Lin Yanshen's suit pants as he struggles. "Please."
Lin Yanshen's leather shoes gleam as he pushes A Ran's devastated face aside. "Climb on."
After the wedding, Lin Yanshen deals with family traitors who covet his wife. Blood fills the warehouse, and A Ran's toes can't reach the floor. He pleads, "Sir..."
The cold HK USP pries open his lips. Lin Yanshen caresses his back. "Little monster, cry for me."
A Ran trembles all over. Lin Yanshen grips his neck and sneers, "You little monster, neither man nor woman."
An accident takes the life of the Lin family's wife.
Lin Yanshen's illness flares up. He grows irritable and volatile, his nerves on edge. The only place where he doesn't lose control is the old house where A Ran once lived. Everyone at the Lin family estate knows that Sir is always holding one of his wife's unfinished works and calling over and over, "Darling, come back."
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B:
Devoted, possessive, simple-minded top x gentle, resilient wife bottom
A Sen x Jing Lianyi
He's a fool.
When Lianyi found him in Qianzhou, he was fighting with wild dogs over scraps. Lianyi took him home and cleaned him up, then saw a face just like his ex-husband's.
Lianyi gave the fool the name A Sen.
The fool knows his older brother once had a husband, had a child, and has long had someone else in his heart. He knows he's just a replacement, but he doesn't care.
He always cuddles up to Lianyi and wheedles, "Big brother should love me more. I'll be even more obedient than he was."
With the ex-husband's arrogant face, A Sen gazes at Lianyi with nothing but love. He obediently curries favor, cooks and mends clothes for him, and proposes with a bottle cap seal.
They embrace on a narrow bed in a Dong village. A Sen kisses Lianyi's forehead. "Will big brother have a baby?"
Ignoring Lianyi's pleas, he cries jealously, "Have a baby with me too, big brother."
Lianyi thought this was how the rest of his life would be. Then one day, A Sen regained his memories. The bird that had flown free was once again a caged sparrow, and Lin Yanshen refused to let him go.
"My A Ran, my Lianyi." Lin Yanshen kneels on the ground and reverently hands Jing Lianyi the chain from around his own neck. "Don't leave me again."
Reader's guide:
1. Both characters are virgins / happy ending / one-on-one romance / the top and bottom are very flawed.
2. The top and bottom have a huge difference in height and age (197 cm and 172 cm / 8 years apart).
3. A wealthy family's caged-bird undercover story combined with a countryside rented-room story.
4. The first volume follows the A and B storylines in parallel; they converge in the second volume.
5. Extremely melodramatic story featuring pregnancy, miscarriage, and childbirth.
6. After the top loses his memory, there's a replacement trope (he gets jealous of his former self).
7. After the storylines merge, the top is a little bit of a father figure.
8. A beauty tames a dog, together forever.
Theme: Create a better life through unremitting hard work.
After Becoming the Substitute for the Good-for-Nothing Husband of the Top Omega Commander
After the Aloof Immortal Venerable Remarries Their Dragon-Proud Nemesis
Snow on Mount Hua [Jian San: Xie Li]
Rewriting in Progress
Waiting to Be Rewritten
Don't Look
After a Frail Graduate Student Was Forced to Marry a Miaojiang Evil God
I finally saw the ending 😭 Here are my thoughts At the end of the year, I happened to have a fever at home, so I pulled out this book to read. I couldn't bear to read it until three o'clock in the morning on the first day. I asked my boss for a day off the next day, and I finished reading it in three days. It's a very, very complete story. The teacher's writing is particularly fluent, the characters are clear, and the sequence is so good that when I clicked on the author's homepage and looked at 17 readers, it was incredible. I am not picky and have read a lot of articles by new authors. Many teachers are good at the beginning but weak at the end, but Teacher Xiaojing starts to write better and better from a certain chapter, especially the second half of the volume, which is so refreshing! When I read certain chapters, I immediately jumped up to help my friend. Unfortunately, our xp was not consistent, so we failed. I remember that when I collected it, the teacher didn't have V yet. At that time, I read 20 chapters. After reading the part that was updated at that time, I decided to finish reading it and my passion was a lot better next door. Later, I saw that the teacher decided to join V! I was very happy! This story is actually not complicated, but you can clearly feel the teacher's control and design of the characters. Although when I posted this, some teachers in plq thought that Xiao Pei had too low self-esteem and didn't like it. But after reading the previous volume, I can clearly feel that although Xiao Pei had low self-esteem when he was young, he was a person who always knew what he wanted and worked hard for it. As an adult, Xiao Pei did not complain about himself or hate anyone, and still maintained his original intention of learning the Fa (for Zhang Xue T T). The bottom line of the principle is very clear. Because of my past work-related work, I really like people like Xiao Pei, and I really understand the sentence that describes him. People who know Pei Zhan will not fail to fall in love with him. It is only a matter of time before they fall in love with him. I still think that maybe I have read too much at a high level before, and feel that Xiao Chen is not as extreme as I first thought. It is just pitiful that he did not know how to love when he was young. But fortunately, the torture of ten years allowed him to cherish the reunion ten years later. Adults should be restrained, but love is often uncontrollable. It is really the moment outside the order that is more touching. Why I think Xiao Pei is more important to Xiao Chen is because even if a person like Xiao Pei does not meet Xiao Chen, he should be able to grow up very well. He just loses the financial protection given by the Chen family but he will not experience the undue torture for young people. If Xiao Chen had not met Xiao Pei, he could only learn to hate in front of his parents. He would be as dull as dead water and would never be tempted. Redemption is when Xiao Pei redeems Xiao Chen. In addition to the two protagonists, Mr. Lin is really impressive. The teacher's portrayal of the female characters is also very good, and he has not become a tool to simply promote the plot at all. Wasn't Mr. Cheng so frightened after Christmas? Why didn't he show up later? Hahaha, the Xu family couple are so cute!! There is so much to write orz The above are just my superficial feelings, not necessarily what the teacher wants to express. If the same readers read this, I still support everyone to read this book! I will wait for the update of the teacher's new book! By the way, I lament that the teacher is so good at double-playing... Okay, it's four o'clock in the morning, and I will pay the boss for New Year's Eve and the first day of junior high school in four hours. I can still sleep for three hours before going to work [pick my brain] [pick my brain] I saw a reminder in Jinjiang that it is the teacher's birthday week 💪 Then I wish the teacher a happy birthday 💪 Happy New Year's Eve 💪 I will continue to follow you 😭 "It's hard to say goodbye, but it's even harder to meet again."
That Xu is really arrogant. He has nothing to do with the affairs between the two of them. He keeps jumping around like a big eunuch. As Chen's friend, he always looks down on Pei. I can only say that Chen himself still doesn't. After the change, Chen and his relatives and friends did not see any guilt towards Pei. They only wanted to continue to enjoy Pei's love. Chen had done so many ex-sex things and Xu pretended to be stupid when he knew about it. Instead, he came to kidnap Pei morally, which made md's heart bleed🫀🩸. . .
Emmm, what should I say. Xiao Pei doesn't want to be close to Chen now, not only because of the bed photo, but also because of the numerous pains he experienced during their previous relationship. But Li is just like what the article said, pitiful and hateful, but no one will feel sorry for him. The mistakes he made ten years ago brought irreparable consequences to himself and others. Is it interesting that he still has the nerve to go to the rightful owner to tell the truth and ask him to do something? [Covering face, laughing and crying]
I rely on this chapter to be the highlight. The atmosphere at the scene where conflicts broke out and quarreled was well handled. It was so dramatic. . I think Xu's behavior is okay from his perspective. He is one-sided and only knows a few things. In addition, it is normal for brothers to be prejudiced against Pei due to their distance and distance. There was absolutely no problem with the characters. He could have stayed out of it, but when he said it, he felt like his child was being bullied, and it felt like a child protecting someone's shortcomings. It was fun. : My child keeps crying when he comes home.
This Xu is also very annoying
Ahhhh 😭 😭 It looks great. The teacher finally decided to v!!! Great 😭 😭 😭
I was still confused before, how could such a beautiful novel be free🆓, but it didn't stop me from reading it. After I tied it, I started to wait for the update. As a result, when I opened Jinjiang tonight, I found that I had entered V, and I immediately felt that I had made a lot of money, hahahahaha
Bronchitis Mr. Xu is here and wants a child. If you want a child, don't make me laugh to death.
Damn it's so appetizing. I was so scared that I thought it was another bed photo, but it shouldn't be possible at home. Is that about Li Xu? 🤔
Damn it, how many updates have there been today? I ate a lot of [rice rice] [rice rice] [rice rice]! Also, sometimes I actually hate Chu Yan (quietly). Ten years ago, she was able to be with Chen openly, but ten years later, she was doted on by Lin. The comparison is so great. Don't rush to scold me, look at my subscription rate. I didn't dare to look at the group of people ten years ago [changed], so I only read the last chapter about the National Day separation. If you have any other hidden secrets, other babies are welcome to tell me [glasses]