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After reading this article, I just feel that the protagonist Ares is really stupid. It is rare for someone to be so stupid. There are only seven people outside. Harry and the trio have been excluded. It is impossible for him and Draco. Asher came with him or is a good friend. The most suspicious thing is Lisa. He didn't even doubt her until the end. What about her IQ?! It was promised that Merlin's IQ and strength would be greatly improved after becoming Ares. I have never seen his IQ improve. Is it really okay to write someone so stupid? And Dali disappeared without noticing.

At first, I thought everything was fine. Whether it was Harry's bravery or Draco's arrogance, the language was in line with the character's personality. Merlin was a girl who fit the usual protagonist image of the article. Apart from the fact that the monster was clichéd and made me feel nothing at all, it was a good article [the background setting is actually very attractive]. But I always feel that some plots are boring and childish. [Starting from Shepherd Town School] The appearance of ghosts makes people unable to complain, and the horrific descriptions also make people feel indifferent, such as "his brains flowed down" and so on. The heroine's sudden awakening is like cheating. Let's talk about cp, if the male protagonist is Draco, I have no problem, but can you not put Harry and Draco together first and then let the female protagonist play Draco? Later, when the heroine secretly listened to Draco and Harry's quarrel, I felt like I was watching a mistress robbing a man [especially the mistress kept saying that I was sad to see them quarreling and that it was all my fault]. Then Draco seemed to have turned into a beautiful and weak woman, and his performance after being neutralized by sex was very unreal. I just couldn't stand it anymore and kept watching. And Merlin's face should not have been seen when she met Draco, right? Why did Draco recognize Merlin and become that man later in the Snow White fairy tale? After I came down, I skipped to the end and saw that Draco was fucked again! It was Voldemort who did it. Girl, what are you thinking? Do you really think that the kind of person who loves others is the kind of person who is full of ambition, treats others like ants, is cruel and cunning, and prefers to use fear to make others surrender instead of hiding a knife in a smile? And Ares has directly become a heartthrob. What kind of trouble are you going to make, girl, with that kind of annoying description! There are still many complex feelings that I cannot express in detail [you can see that I am really incoherent]. I just can't stand some of the things you express. If you can't stand it, you can just click the red cross and leave. But I still choose to spend time typing these words. There is no reason. If you hate me, there is nothing you can do about it. I asked for it.

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I want to say what's going on with Ah Xuan who slipped away from Overlord, hahahaha (ಥ_ಥ)

After reading this article, I just feel that the protagonist Ares is really stupid. It is rare for someone to be so stupid. There are only seven people outside. Harry and the trio have been excluded. It is impossible for him and Draco. Asher came with him or is a good friend. The most suspicious thing is Lisa. He didn't even doubt her until the end. What about her IQ?! It was promised that Merlin's IQ and strength would be greatly improved after becoming Ares. I have never seen his IQ improve. Is it really okay to write someone so stupid? And Dali disappeared without noticing.

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I watched it a long time ago, and I have almost forgotten the plot. I only remember that some parts were very scary. Since I am watching the second part, I might as well re-watch the first one to keep the plot coherent.

When I was reading this article with my gay friends in the self-study class today, I felt that my moral integrity and lower limits were being brushed over and over again. In fact, what you wrote is really a horror novel. My little heart was scared to death by you. Your characters and plot alone scared me so much that I couldn't help but complain. The story was good at the beginning [before "I" met the people in HP], and then the bickering between the two of them was quite in line with their characters. "I" took the lead from time to time, which was okay, but when I saw a group of people starting to tease Brother Yan, I was I feel a slight tightening in my anus. I can't say anything about it. After all, everyone's view of the world is different. I'm a member of the Deha Fuha Party, so it's a bit painful to see Brother Lao suffer. But I don't blame you. Again, everyone's view of the world is different. We still jumped after watching a tenth of it, when I saw female [male? When the master fucked me, all I could think about was this!!!!!!!!!!!! When I saw clearly that "I" was actually male and female, all I could think of was this: "What the fuck!" !!!!!!!!!!!! . Then I danced a little more, until Brother Yan felt hurt [probably? Recognized "me" as Harry, and then slept on "my" lap, and Harry was extremely jealous!!!!! I felt like my dead body was pulled out to whip the corpse again... Finally I watched the finale, and all I could do was hehehehe. Actually, I think what I want to say is similar to the people before me. If you think there are too many words, don't read it. I am just complaining because I feel intolerable. Haha. But it's really not easy to hit me with two surprises at once. Women's wear [change? Simultaneous? I don't know which word to use... Male, I'm having sex with Draco. Hey, I'm sorry that I took up such a huge opportunity to vent my grievances. Anyway, I'm kneeling down. Speaking of which, this is my first time commenting XD~ It's my first time to give you a big thank you~ This article is reproduced from Jinjiang Literature City, original address: □//www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=951267&chapterid=124

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