[Stubborn Barbarian Girl x Sweet-on-the-Outside, Dark-on-the-Inside Merfolk]
When Jiang Yuhuo was young, she found a fish. It was a strange merfolk, half human and half fish.
That suited her just fine. She wasn't exactly normal, either. Monsters helping monsters, she kept him company, tended his wounds, and even gave him the last half of her life-saving medicine. She thought they would stay together for the rest of their lives.
Who could have known that when disaster struck her tribe, the merfolk would recover his spiritual power and leave without a word?
Without the life-saving medicine, Jiang Yuhuo was powerless to fight back. Her spiritual power was stripped away, leaving her a half-dead cripple.
Later, she changed her face to avenge her blood relatives, fighting her way forward and constantly climbing to new heights of cultivation. As she lay in a pool of blood, she saw the merfolk who had once sworn an oath to her standing on a high platform, effortlessly rendering their enemy helpless. It turned out he was an immensely powerful figure.
Gazing up at the figure above, Jiang Yuhuo felt nothing but ice in her heart.
If only he had used that power when she begged him for help. With a simple wave of his hand, her kin could have been spared.
*
Everyone in the Immortal Realm knows that the lord of Xihua Hall is a member of the merfolk, born with a spiritual body and a noble bloodline, and is the Immortal Realm's hope for ascending to godhood. But he once had a lover who died young, because he became male at a young age, and merfolk only develop a sex after meeting their beloved.
Jiayue also knows that he once had a lover who died young. She had a pair of golden eyes, and in his dreams she gazed at him with the warmest of looks.
But one day, he discovered that his former lover was right beside him. The joy of finding her again nearly knocked him off his feet.
He restrained himself, approaching and tempting her without giving himself away...
She must have forgotten, too, but it didn't matter. They could start over.
Only later did he learn that she had never lost her memories.
She had recognized him from the very beginning.
She simply didn't want him anymore.
She had even entered into a marriage pact with someone else.
Jiayue split open his palm, enduring the piercing pain as he slowly wove the blood into the most magnificent wedding robes of merfolk silk.
Wearing the blood-red wedding robes, he smiled cruelly.
How could she simply decide she didn't want the male form he had taken for her?
Note:
1. The female lead is not an ordinary mortal. Her identity will be revealed later.
2. SC.
3. Contains melodramatic tropes including amnesia, face-changing, identity reveals, a male third party, and fish pregnancy.
Check out my upcoming novel in the same style: Master and Disciple
I have a master. Ever since I was brought from the mortal world to Congwu Mountain, he has been the closest person to me in the world.
My master, Immortal Wuzhen, slays evil gods and quells demonic chaos. He cares for all living things and is revered by the world. Like everyone else, I respect him and long to become someone who protects all living things as he does.
Perhaps I had a little talent. At my first Immortal Sect Tournament, I won first place. My senior brothers and sisters said I had done the sect proud. I searched the crowd for my master's approving gaze, only to find those familiar eyes full of hatred.
My master, pure as snow atop a lofty mountain, sometimes... doesn't seem much like a master.
When I accidentally cut my finger on sword energy, my master stared at the wound and silently licked the blood from my fingertip.
When thunder woke me in the night, I opened my eyes to find my master lying beside my pillow, wrapped around me like a vine, whispering, "Don't be afraid."
He held me so tightly I couldn't break free.
A new junior disciple asked me to go down the mountain with him on an adventure. I was a senior sister now, so I ought to look after him. I agreed without hesitation. But the next moment, someone stepped out of the shadows behind the door. My master...
I had never seen my master's face look so terrifying.
My junior disciple went down the mountain alone. The next time I heard about him, he had been killed by demons, his handsome young face eaten away completely.
I thought that no matter what, I should go down the mountain and gather my junior disciple's remains.
My master blocked my way.
"Have you forgotten your master's teachings?"
I didn't know which one he meant.
With a click, the spiritual restraints locked into place.
Looking at my master's bloodshot eyes, I remembered the first rule of my initiation.
You must never leave your master.
*
Many years ago, Bai Wuzhen knelt in front of the sect for ten whole days and nights, begging his master not to cast him out. But the hard-hearted female Sword Sovereign still ruthlessly expelled him from the sect.
Many years later, Bai Wuzhen sat in a warm bed draped with hibiscus curtains, holding the slender, pale ankle he had once glimpsed beneath her skirt whenever he knelt. He dragged the struggling disciple who tried to flee into his arms.
"Why are you trying to run? Did I not learn it well? I was only imitating you..."
Her ankle was tightly bound by chains forged from black iron. Bai Wuzhen caressed it, slowly moving upward as he murmured in her ear.
"You can't get rid of me, Mas-ter..."
"A saint who cares for all living things and a dark obsessive who insists on claiming her for himself"
"A highly principled, compassionate female master x an amoral, sinister male ghost"
Theme: Reborn through love and hate, emerging from the flames
Stop, stop, stop! Teacher! Will there be a side story about Qin Yuqi and his parents? 😳 If Qin Yuqi were not the emperor, would he be a good person? [Peeping face covering his face] He is just too determined to have his own way. He was born in a royal family and doesn't take his fate seriously, but his character is quite delicious... (Whispering) He is humble and aggrieved in front of the heroine🥹 Or just forget it if he doesn't write it. Can you tell me more about the parents? Is the heroine's father really a substitute? It's so miserable. I originally loved reading novels about widowers raising children, but this book really feels for the father...
Wow wow wow wow~ I can't bear to see it end~~ I have been chasing it for eight months, and I have also found my feelings in the paper article 🥺. The first time I clicked on this article was because I really liked the setting, and I wanted to give it a try. I read more than 40 chapters in one go. The story line about Li Yue Village is really wonderful. I think it is super exciting!! I was surprised that Da Da's writing style was not like that of a new author for the first time. I was also surprised that the number of collections was only over 100. I was afraid that Da Da didn't encourage me and I didn't want to continue writing, so I started to bubble up in the comment area 😏 🐶. After that, the collection slowly increased to more than a thousand, and I was very happy for Da Da. I felt that a good article was discovered!! It's convenient to abuse girls... I also think Xiao Jiang is really pitiful, but I didn't complain that Xiao Jiang was written in such a sadistic way. At that time, I guess it was just because of the setting. Xiao Jiang is really a very, very kind and lovely girl 🥺. I feel sorry for her experience, understand her plan, and lament her kindness and softness again and again. I still see the shadow of that ignorant girl in my bones. As for the fish that led me into this trap, he is really a stinky fish. . Well, he is a moon in the sky. I really think that he has no chance to be with Xiao Jiang again. Compared with the suffering that Xiao Jiang has suffered, loving one person in his life seems so weak. I often think that after he knows what happened to his lover, he will feel regretful and wishful that he can immediately self-destruct to atone for his sins. Only then can I calm down. . . Fortunately, this is a fish that knows how to make amends. The collision of ice and fire, and the reflection of the high moon on the small river made me a firm henchman. . I also hate Li Mengbai... I skipped him in part, but thinking about his experience carefully, he is a sinister butterfly beauty, a bad guy, so I can't say that I understand everything he does, but I understand half of it. I still don't like him. Hehe, I don't know why. I felt sad for him when he finally went offline. It's strange that I hate him, but I also feel sorry for him. From God's perspective, I feel more pity than Xiao Jiang. I can only say that he was not saved in the end. . . Of course Senior Brother is the best Senior Brother. If I hadn't come here because of Yu, I would really want Xiao Jiang and Senior Brother to be together. Xiao Jiang and Senior Brother are alike. They are both so considerate and considerate. 😭 Because I really like the setting, so some people have great ambiguities. The place will be very tolerant, and it is like this throughout the whole article (the most important thing that retains me is Dada's writing style). I finished Dada by having a good rest, studying hard, and summarizing well. [The Dog's Head Holds a Rose] The article has flaws but there are also highlights. I still have great confidence in Dada!!! Finally, I still have to make a wish, hoping that the extra chapter will be productive 🥺🥺🥺
Big cheers. With the first book written like this, the star of tomorrow is just around the corner.
The ending of Spreading Flowers, Ah Dada [Spreading Flowers] I am very happy to meet Xiaojiang and Xiaohai during this summer vacation. The early stage is really very interesting, but the plot line is a bit too long. The writing style of Dada is absolutely fine 🤩 🤩 Looking forward to meeting Dada in the next book.
First of all, the author's writing skills are very good, at least I am willing to spend money. Tell me about the readers' feelings, my personal feelings. Just talking about myself, I feel like there is something wrong with the structure. I am a female protagonist. If the heroine is the absolute center, this article does not give me this feeling. Her story line and growth line are just killing fake sheep. I thought it was too thin. I saw in the middle that it was abandoned at the beginning of the third volume of "Restore the Nation" and was continued after Li Mengbai's interpretation of the contract. Alas, maybe I want to write every relationship well. If this is the focus, it seems that the heroine has been pushed away. She is passive. She has no growth and story line of her own. I would rather see her being her own center from beginning to end and letting her grow. So the previous part of cultivating immortality is quite interesting. After receiving the prize, I felt like I could read it in one go. But later on, I feel that the emotional scene is the focus, which may make the heroine appear to be more intellectual and passive. If the positioning is about emotional flow, then I didn't say that. I like to watch the plot flow. I can accept the mistreatment and misery of the female protagonist as she grows up, but she must grow up and have her own subjectivity. In short, she must be happy, otherwise it will be very frustrating. Later, when Li Mengbai destroyed his body, I wanted to kill him, and I was very angry when I watched it. Anyway, I felt different in the previous and later chapters. In the later stage, I felt that the heroine was being pushed away. Especially the one about Revenge of the Killer King, where you also went to the sea to spend a honeymoon with the male protagonist? The plot is incoherent and seems quite baffling. Isn't it true that they want to kill people for revenge? Why did they go to sea? I couldn't understand it until the end. Of course, this may also have something to do with the fact that I didn't subscribe to all of it. I haven't read part of it, so the experience is not good. If the author is a newbie, he is already very good. At least I don't think there is a problem with his writing skills! Keep up the good work!
Wow, the article I was following is finished. The advantage is that the village in front was destroyed, and the heroine fought hard to express the courage to resist fate, and the sadness of still walking towards the door of destiny. (A bit like Kyushu Piaomiaolu) Don't comment too much on the plot line, after all, it is the first one. The plot of the love line copywriting is a bit of a stalker and a crematorium-heating plot of a boy. But this is very late in the text. Usually there should be a reversal scene in at least fifty chapters. Otherwise, after reading dozens of chapters, the heroine is still miserable and the reversal is far away, so the reader may abandon the article. The author said that he was so cruel when he wrote about Li Mengbai's hair loss that he forgot his feelings. This paragraph does look like a fanfic from Reader Erchuang Lalang. (I personally am quite addicted). By the middle of the text, I was completely speechless for the male protagonist and gave up on savoring the jokes in the text. Unexpectedly, the plot was always heavy. The emperor is resurrected and the enemy is very powerful. The scheming man wants to take advantage of the female protagonist, but the male protagonist just dreams with his pride. In addition, the heroine knew that her body could not carry blood, so it was too heavy. Maybe you still need to adjust the ratio of cool points to sad points. But the first one was written like this and it's amazing, and it will definitely become better and better as it gets written in the future.
Please ask for a Qiandeng extravaganza!! Jiu Min really wants to see the process of getting to know them. It's so exciting!!
Oops, it was really overwhelming at first, but when I got to the end, I even got angry and held my breath while reading it. I was so angry that I had a lot of harsh and unpleasant things to say, but in the end I sighed when the author finished speaking. I agree with what one commenter said. I thought it was acceptable up to the time when I got the Dabi reward. The plot attracted me. The heroine has her own goals and is dedicated to it. The death or exit of a character really shouldn't be capricious. Qin and Jia living life-and-death in this world without reincarnation is even more childish and abrupt. Why don't all the people under the river turn into souls and become possessed by demons without leaving a way for themselves? How could Jia Chongming know that there is a body that can seize bodies and possess people. Furthermore, even if I kill a villain 3 or 4 times without killing him completely, I, as a reader, am exhausted. And the change of body was not only giving hope to the heroine, but also giving me hope. As a result, the male protagonist seemed to have everything ready and was ruined by Li suddenly appearing and stuffing beads in his body. I really raised my eyebrows while watching this part. I felt funny and angry. The feeling of dashed hope is naturally uncomfortable. All I can say is to lay the groundwork or reduce some meaningless frustration. I also sensed the sadistic flavor when I saw it later. Maybe it was because many of the plots were too frustrating (oh, I'm talking about the villain's death!)
Finally!! The chase is over!! There was a time in the middle that I was afraid that I would just stop writing, but by the time I finished writing it, I was already super invincible and explosive!!! It's really beautiful 🤩
Finished spreading flowers [showing hands] But has my mother been imprisoned in the divine realm all this time 🥺 I want to see my parents love 🌈