[End of the text, pre-collection of "The Wallflower", "Monsters", "Gecko" and "My Husband is a Beast" in Laolao]
ruler∽orphan
The cold dictator and his sticky love
Totalitarian background, robbery and robbery, chasing his wife in the crematorium,
Pseudo double, brother war, second male lead,
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As the man behind the empire, Jose has always believed that his only canary loves him very much.
Although she never expresses this kind of love,
But as long as someone dies somewhere,
She would ask if that person was him.
She was stuck with her professional classes all day long, flirting with her homework books, and didn't come to accompany him until late at night. He didn't blame her, it must be because she was too busy with the college courses;
It doesn't matter if she calls her brother's name in the dream, it's just a young person's ignorant game;
He doesn't care, (gnashes his teeth) not at all.
Until later, she concealed the truth and escaped.
He left a letter containing hundreds of words, not a single word about him.
Not one.
She could call him a pig, curse him to die, and scream for revenge, but why didn't she mention him a word?
How could she ignore him?
How could she never care about him?
Jose has a pair of piercing and unpredictable blue eyes, whose calm gaze can melt the strongest metal in the world.
But at this moment, the hot human emotions made him feel puzzling and sour.
The supreme ruler of District 1 was filled with unprecedented confusion and anger at this moment.
Holding the letter, his fingers were trembling.
Why?
Why?
He just wanted her back, captured her.
"Find her at all costs!"
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Demining:
Ⅰ: The male lead is c, the second male is c. There is a conflict between the two. No spoilers will be given regarding the follow-up (non-corruption), but there is a conflict... If you don't mind, don't enter.
Ⅱ: The time span is very long, and the subsequent doomsday wasteland background.
III: Inspiration source Angela Carter's "Heroes and Villains" (the story of civilized people and barbarians after nuclear war)
The background of hierarchical order is similar to utopian and dystopian theme settings: "Divergent", "Battle Royale", "The Hunger Games", "Maze Runner", "Mad Max", "Snowpiercer"... Generally fall into this category.
[Cat's Claw] Happy reading.
Intention: Optimism and embracing love
Reader comments
After reading it, first of all, I would like to thank the author for creating this story.
Then let's talk about the advantages:
1. His writing skills rank among the ten Jinjiang Golden Lists. The discussion about love, death, life, rule, power, and faith in the article is very interesting. You can tell that the author has read a lot, from Heroes and Villains to The Hunger Games, and from Oscar Wilde's poems to The Phantom of the Opera. I admit that I was attracted by the label of forced love at first, but as I read it, I became more willing to follow the heroine, Mike and others to think, feel, and feel lost than the male protagonist's emotional line of robbery.
2. From beginning to end, there is no plot where the heroine suddenly falls in love with the hero. The essence of forced love lies in the dislocation and asymmetry between the sexual and spiritual aspects. The male protagonist is the superior person physically, while the female protagonist is spiritual.
3. The heroine is very smart, adaptable and adaptable, kind but not a virgin. From a personal preference, she is not my favorite type of heroine, but I couldn't help but be moved by her and respect her while reading the novel. Also, the women in this article are all people with distinct subjectivities.
Let's talk about the shortcomings:
1. The biggest problem is the homogeneity of the characters. This is very obvious for the male characters, especially the two kings in the later period. Their love and struggle are too flat and have no characteristics at all. At the same time, the similar plot also reduces the charm of the male protagonist.
I am barely satisfied with Lorca's ending. Unlike Mai's conflict between centralization and true love, he explores the conflict between faith and true love. But it is a bit regretful that the author just ended it quickly where his highlight should have been, and the emotions did not burst out in the best way.
The best male characters created in this article are Hein and his brother. Hein is innocent and cruel, while McClatt develops a line that is similar to Jose but different. He personally experienced the hardships of the people at the bottom and the oppression of the superiors, understood love, and participated in the sacrifice game... I saw that later on, he completely changed from the Jose Party to the Brother Party. Fortunately, the nascent love, selfless love, and true love were not killed. After learning that the heroine did not love him, he still couldn't help but painfully protect and respect her choice. This character has completed the sublimation of the true meaning. He has since become an individual independent of Jose.
2. There are big problems with the plot arrangement, the rhythm is problematic, the details in the later stage are seriously inappropriate, and the ending is not done well, which makes people feel that the story started high and started low.
It is completely unnecessary for the female protagonist to leave many times in the later period, because except for the last time, she knew that she could not really escape the control of the male protagonist, but it seemed repetitive and redundant. I personally think that it would be more appropriate to design one or two departures. Similarly, the male protagonist's pain in the later period is also very exciting and twisted at first, but becomes boring after repeated repetitions.
The story of the two kings and their descendants is a plot that is really suitable for being written in one go. It is really easy to abandon the text in the later stage. Many things that can be explained clearly in three or five sentences have to be detailed in a chapter and a half and have little to do with the main plot of the male and female protagonists, which greatly affects the viewing experience.
In the end, the outbreak of zombies was too sudden, with almost no foreshadowing. The heroine's biological parents, the original group of intellectuals who established the Oisinlong Temple, the truth about Rosamund, and other plots that could have been the climax were all hastily passed over. It can only be said that it could have been handled better.
In fact, I can probably understand that the author wanted to explore too many things, but in the end he couldn't take them back. It can only be said that cramming anti-totalitarianism, anti-war, dystopia, etc. All together requires too much writing power. From the fact that the plot deviates from the original intention of the copywriting, it can be seen that many places are no longer rounded out.
At the end of writing, I don't know if this article is the author's Virgo. It has some obvious low-level mistakes, but at the same time, it is also filled with the author's talent and sincerity.
Although I have made so many nitpicks before, I still admire the author overall. I hope you can continue to create and I look forward to your next work!
Alas, when the protagonists reunited decades later, it seemed like everything had changed and yet nothing had changed in their way of getting along, like a return of fate and a continuation of mistakes.
In a few decades, you will no longer be you and I will no longer be me. You will all be immortal anyway, so go ahead and give it a try.
What does it mean? Is this all a dream...? Can someone explain it to me? Although I was dizzy after reading it, I will still love you, the author, for your next book. I look forward to it [changed] [changed]
Why drink blood? You are a zombie and not a vampire. Shouldn't you just eat human flesh? It's so disgusting. The author really has a cruel heroine who has turned into a zombie and still has to struggle with this disgusting thing of the male protagonist. It's euphemistically called zombie instinct.
This article is so cool, it feels like reading extreme Japanese comics when I was a kid
Great, after the species evolved, a new play was unlocked [Like] When both parties are inhuman, they can continue to entangle and twist without any scruples.
Woo woo woo woo [crying] I've finished reading. Will there be any extras? [Crying]
Oh oh oh, the long-lost threesome! Mai, Mai, let me tell you something good. I just commented in the last chapter that you have become more serious, but in the end, you still showed your true colors in front of my sister.
I opened it three times a day and got scared three times. What a good day.
By the way, will my brother have a side story? At that time, I didn't expect that this character would be so cold all of a sudden [covering face, laughing and crying]
After reading it in one day, it is considered a masterpiece?
It's so beautiful, but I felt so sad after watching it😭
What a mess. . Abandoned. . I don't really like the heroine's character. .
Teacher, the book "Husband is a Beast" in the book to be read is very interesting after reading the introduction. Please read it as soon as possible.
The bonus extra is coming soon! ! ! !
Could jj write this? Oh my God
It smells so good, I want to see my husband be a beast
Hey hey hey hey hey hey
Masterpiece
? ? ? [Changed] what happened?
When will the author publish a new article?
Why does the heroine say they have known each other since childhood and are still engaged?
Xiao Ling is a growth type. TvT, curious +1
The author will update it soon. Please stop cooing,?
After reading it, first of all, I would like to thank the author for creating this story. Then let's talk about the advantages: 1. His writing skills rank among the ten Jinjiang Golden Lists. The discussion about love, death, life, rule, power, and faith in the article is very interesting. You can tell that the author has read a lot, from Heroes and Villains to The Hunger Games, and from Oscar Wilde's poems to The Phantom of the Opera. I admit that I was attracted by the label of forced love at first, but as I read it, I became more willing to follow the heroine, Mike and others to think, feel, and feel lost than the male protagonist's emotional line of robbery. 2. From beginning to end, there is no plot where the heroine suddenly falls in love with the hero. The essence of forced love lies in the dislocation and asymmetry between the sexual and spiritual aspects. The male protagonist is the superior person physically, while the female protagonist is spiritual. 3. The heroine is very smart, adaptable and adaptable, kind but not a virgin. From a personal preference, she is not my favorite type of heroine, but I couldn't help but be moved by her and respect her while reading the novel. Also, the women in this article are all people with distinct subjectivities. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. The biggest problem is the homogeneity of the characters. This is very obvious for the male characters, especially the two kings in the later period. Their love and struggle are too flat and have no characteristics at all. At the same time, the similar plot also reduces the charm of the male protagonist. I am barely satisfied with Lorca's ending. Unlike Mai's conflict between centralization and true love, he explores the conflict between faith and true love. But it is a bit regretful that the author just ended it quickly where his highlight should have been, and the emotions did not burst out in the best way. The best male characters created in this article are Hein and his brother. Hein is innocent and cruel, while McClatt develops a line that is similar to Jose but different. He personally experienced the hardships of the people at the bottom and the oppression of the superiors, understood love, and participated in the sacrifice game... I saw that later on, he completely changed from the Jose Party to the Brother Party. Fortunately, the nascent love, selfless love, and true love were not killed. After learning that the heroine did not love him, he still couldn't help but painfully protect and respect her choice. This character has completed the sublimation of the true meaning. He has since become an individual independent of Jose. 2. There are big problems with the plot arrangement, the rhythm is problematic, the details in the later stage are seriously inappropriate, and the ending is not done well, which makes people feel that the story started high and started low. It is completely unnecessary for the female protagonist to leave many times in the later period, because except for the last time, she knew that she could not really escape the control of the male protagonist, but it seemed repetitive and redundant. I personally think that it would be more appropriate to design one or two departures. Similarly, the male protagonist's pain in the later period is also very exciting and twisted at first, but becomes boring after repeated repetitions. The story of the two kings and their descendants is a plot that is really suitable for being written in one go. It is really easy to abandon the text in the later stage. Many things that can be explained clearly in three or five sentences have to be detailed in a chapter and a half and have little to do with the main plot of the male and female protagonists, which greatly affects the viewing experience. In the end, the outbreak of zombies was too sudden, with almost no foreshadowing. The heroine's biological parents, the original group of intellectuals who established the Oisinlong Temple, the truth about Rosamund, and other plots that could have been the climax were all hastily passed over. It can only be said that it could have been handled better. In fact, I can probably understand that the author wanted to explore too many things, but in the end he couldn't take them back. It can only be said that cramming anti-totalitarianism, anti-war, dystopia, etc. All together requires too much writing power. From the fact that the plot deviates from the original intention of the copywriting, it can be seen that many places are no longer rounded out. At the end of writing, I don't know if this article is the author's Virgo. It has some obvious low-level mistakes, but at the same time, it is also filled with the author's talent and sincerity. Although I have made so many nitpicks before, I still admire the author overall. I hope you can continue to create and I look forward to your next work!
Alas, when the protagonists reunited decades later, it seemed like everything had changed and yet nothing had changed in their way of getting along, like a return of fate and a continuation of mistakes.
In a few decades, you will no longer be you and I will no longer be me. You will all be immortal anyway, so go ahead and give it a try.
What does it mean? Is this all a dream...? Can someone explain it to me? Although I was dizzy after reading it, I will still love you, the author, for your next book. I look forward to it [changed] [changed]
Why drink blood? You are a zombie and not a vampire. Shouldn't you just eat human flesh? It's so disgusting. The author really has a cruel heroine who has turned into a zombie and still has to struggle with this disgusting thing of the male protagonist. It's euphemistically called zombie instinct.
This article is so cool, it feels like reading extreme Japanese comics when I was a kid
Great, after the species evolved, a new play was unlocked [Like] When both parties are inhuman, they can continue to entangle and twist without any scruples.
Woo woo woo woo [crying] I've finished reading. Will there be any extras? [Crying]
Oh oh oh, the long-lost threesome! Mai, Mai, let me tell you something good. I just commented in the last chapter that you have become more serious, but in the end, you still showed your true colors in front of my sister.
I opened it three times a day and got scared three times. What a good day.
By the way, will my brother have a side story? At that time, I didn't expect that this character would be so cold all of a sudden [covering face, laughing and crying]
After reading it in one day, it is considered a masterpiece?
It's so beautiful, but I felt so sad after watching it😭
What a mess. . Abandoned. . I don't really like the heroine's character. .
Teacher, the book "Husband is a Beast" in the book to be read is very interesting after reading the introduction. Please read it as soon as possible.
The bonus extra is coming soon! ! ! !
Could jj write this? Oh my God
It smells so good, I want to see my husband be a beast
Hey hey hey hey hey hey
Masterpiece
? ? ? [Changed] what happened?
When will the author publish a new article?
Why does the heroine say they have known each other since childhood and are still engaged?
Xiao Ling is a growth type. TvT, curious +1
The author will update it soon. Please stop cooing,?