Aoxinlong Temple

In fact, the author's writing style is quite good. I had a lot of fun reading the first chapters of this article, and it would have been nice to have it as the ending when Rosa escaped. However, the addition of zombies at the end was confusing and fragmented, and the Western medieval movie suddenly turned into an apocalyptic funeral drama. The three women with a rebellious spirit all ended badly. It was inexplicable that Rosa wanted to kill Jose. She had so many opportunities before and just wanted to escape instead of killing. After becoming a zombie, she wanted to die with him. However, the world would still be like this if it were a different ruler. Is killing Jose a revenge for the destruction of their home and the confinement of their body? Later, Rosa actually persuaded another person who wanted to escape and rebel. After becoming a zombie, Rosa's previous positive spirit of participating in challenging games was gone. Her whole person felt depressed and uncomfortable. Although the ending is with McClatt, there is also a sense of sadness that things have changed. Most people only watch Xiao Yan for leisure and relaxation. Life is already very hard, so they still want to watch He Da Pu Ben to dilute the fatigue of life. This ending makes people feel sad. Looking forward to the author's next mecha article.

After reading it, first of all, I would like to thank the author for creating this story. Then let's talk about the advantages: 1. His writing skills rank among the ten Jinjiang Golden Lists. The discussion about love, death, life, rule, power, and faith in the article is very interesting. You can tell that the author has read a lot, from Heroes and Villains to The Hunger Games, and from Oscar Wilde's poems to The Phantom of the Opera. I admit that I was attracted by the label of forced love at first, but as I read it, I became more willing to follow the heroine, Mike and others to think, feel, and feel lost than the male protagonist's emotional line of robbery. 2. From beginning to end, there is no plot where the heroine suddenly falls in love with the hero. The essence of forced love lies in the dislocation and asymmetry between the sexual and spiritual aspects. The male protagonist is the superior person physically, while the female protagonist is spiritual. 3. The heroine is very smart, adaptable and adaptable, kind but not a virgin. From a personal preference, she is not my favorite type of heroine, but I couldn't help but be moved by her and respect her while reading the novel. Also, the women in this article are all people with distinct subjectivities. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. The biggest problem is the homogeneity of the characters. This is very obvious for the male characters, especially the two kings in the later period. Their love and struggle are too flat and have no characteristics at all. At the same time, the similar plot also reduces the charm of the male protagonist. I am barely satisfied with Lorca's ending. Unlike Mai's conflict between centralization and true love, he explores the conflict between faith and true love. But it is a bit regretful that the author just ended it quickly where his highlight should have been, and the emotions did not burst out in the best way. The best male characters created in this article are Hein and his brother. Hein is innocent and cruel, while McClatt develops a line that is similar to Jose but different. He personally experienced the hardships of the people at the bottom and the oppression of the superiors, understood love, and participated in the sacrifice game... I saw that later on, he completely changed from the Jose Party to the Brother Party. Fortunately, the nascent love, selfless love, and true love were not killed. After learning that the heroine did not love him, he still couldn't help but painfully protect and respect her choice. This character has completed the sublimation of the true meaning. He has since become an individual independent of Jose. 2. There are big problems with the plot arrangement, the rhythm is problematic, the details in the later stage are seriously inappropriate, and the ending is not done well, which makes people feel that the story started high and started low. It is completely unnecessary for the female protagonist to leave many times in the later period, because except for the last time, she knew that she could not really escape the control of the male protagonist, but it seemed repetitive and redundant. I personally think that it would be more appropriate to design one or two departures. Similarly, the male protagonist's pain in the later period is also very exciting and twisted at first, but becomes boring after repeated repetitions. The story of the two kings and their descendants is a plot that is really suitable for being written in one go. It is really easy to abandon the text in the later stage. Many things that can be explained clearly in three or five sentences have to be detailed in a chapter and a half and have little to do with the main plot of the male and female protagonists, which greatly affects the viewing experience. In the end, the outbreak of zombies was too sudden, with almost no foreshadowing. The heroine's biological parents, the original group of intellectuals who established the Oisinlong Temple, the truth about Rosamund, and other plots that could have been the climax were all hastily passed over. It can only be said that it could have been handled better. In fact, I can probably understand that the author wanted to explore too many things, but in the end he couldn't take them back. It can only be said that cramming anti-totalitarianism, anti-war, dystopia, etc. All together requires too much writing power. From the fact that the plot deviates from the original intention of the copywriting, it can be seen that many places are no longer rounded out. At the end of writing, I don't know if this article is the author's Virgo. It has some obvious low-level mistakes, but at the same time, it is also filled with the author's talent and sincerity. Although I have made so many nitpicks before, I still admire the author overall. I hope you can continue to create and I look forward to your next work!

It's really over. Two endings and two possibilities are acceptable to me personally, but I can imagine that some readers may not be able to. Overall, even though there are some unexpected changes in the plot, I still enjoy watching it, because personally, I am more tired of today's cookie-cutter correctness templates than some of the somewhat out-of-the-box plots. It's not easy to finish a story according to your own ideas. Thank you for your hard work. I hope that future books can be written according to your own wishes [Like]

Ah, it always hurts to use such calm words to describe the ups and downs of the plot and the scene of life and death. It reminds me of the first time when Mai told his sister that he would take her to escape to Osinlong Temple. He said "You will live for a long, long, long, long, okay?", Which was a blessing but eventually turned into a curse by Jose.

It's getting uglier. The feeling of repeating the same routine over and over again.

I found that I couldn't understand the extra chapter after skipping a few chapters. Why did zombies suddenly start appearing, and half a century suddenly passed? Is this the same book as the main text? It made me feel dazed [turn into]

Alas, when the protagonists reunited decades later, it seemed like everything had changed and yet nothing had changed in their way of getting along, like a return of fate and a continuation of mistakes.

Why drink blood? You are a zombie and not a vampire. Shouldn't you just eat human flesh? It's so disgusting. The author really has a cruel heroine who has turned into a zombie and still has to struggle with this disgusting thing of the male protagonist. It's euphemistically called zombie instinct.

The essence of forced love ah ah ah ah ah ah, my wife wrote it very well, but the tone is a bit sad, qaq, the if line is darker

What does it mean? Is this all a dream...? Can someone explain it to me? Although I was dizzy after reading it, I will still love you, the author, for your next book. I look forward to it [changed] [changed]