*V announcement
This article will be posted on V on August 30th, and will be uploaded on September 2nd
The completed V chapters are chapters 26 to 92
Thanks to my wives for their support these days (wiping away tears) Thank you all
Also known as "Fragile"
[The commentary is now open and everyone is welcome to play]
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[Wasteland/Apocalypse/Growth/Superpower]
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The wild dog-type Shou who is riddled with bad luck but has tenacious vitality × the calm and powerful guided Eternal Attacker
Qu Cheng's luck has always been bad.
He tripped over things while walking, drank water stuck in his teeth, and encountered a famine in the underground city and a once-in-a-century dust rain the year he was born.
The decision he regretted most in his life was to go to the station to steal food when there was no food at home.
Regardless of whether he got the food or not, he was now trapped on a train leading to the irradiated ground, and was close to death.
Unexpectedly, there was someone in the car who didn't know where he came from.
The opponent subdued him three times, five times and two times. Qu Cheng saw that the train was about to leave the shelter and had no choice but to beg for mercy from Shen Lanshan.
"Brother, I don't want to die."
Shen Lanshan pinched the back of his neck, pressed on the operating table and said: "People must be responsible for the choices they make. If you want me to save you, you have to show me that it is worth the money."
Qu Cheng nodded desperately.
This countdown to death completely shattered Qu Cheng's rules of survival:
He grabbed supplies, and Shen Lanshan blew up the entire transportation hub;
He escaped from prison, and Shen Lanshan opened all the prison doors in advance;
He was seriously injured, and a trace of emotion finally appeared on Shen Lanshan's face.
Qu Cheng felt that he had accidentally discovered another side of Shen Lanshan that was unusually soft.
"What's the price you want me to pay?"
Disaster is approaching, and Qu Cheng can't help. If he were asked to fly separately, he wouldn't even be able to run fast.
Following Shen Lanshan like a pendant...
Shen Lanshan patted the dust on his clothes and stood up: "That's nonsense."
He glanced down, looked at Qu Cheng from top to bottom, took off the iron ring from the zipper of his clothes, and put it on his ring finger.
"This is the price."
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Shen Lanshan hates dealing with children.
They were ignorant, stupid, and messed up everything he had planned.
But as luck would have it, when he was secretly transporting supplies from the underground city to the surface, a child appeared on the train carrying the supplies.
Qu Cheng seemed to be possessed by bad luck.
He touched the train control panel and the train lost control the next second;
He was standing next to the train's glass, and something must have hit the window;
As long as he is more than two meters away from Chen Lanshan, he will definitely be targeted by other things.
Shen Lanshan helped his forehead, but he couldn't ignore it.
So, when the train was scrapped, he took Qu Cheng on foot. When the glass broke, he pulled Qu Cheng to avoid the broken pieces. When something spotted him, he ran with Qu Cheng.
As long as Qu Cheng is unlucky, Shen Lanshan will solve the puzzle and make new discoveries.
He seems to have found another way to deal with bad luck...
So Shen Lanshan taught this heartless fool step by step how to save his life in the apocalypse, but Qu Cheng didn't seem to learn it at all.
When disaster struck, he asked Qu Cheng to run away, but Qu Cheng wanted to save him and treat him, dragging him along with difficulty.
"We must die together..." Said the fool.
Disaster. Shen Lanshan thought with a smile. The harm will last for thousands of years.
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Recommend articles of the same type that are being serialized "I want to be an astronaut when I grow up"
In 1999, the last day of this century, Lin Ran was about to enter the spacecraft.
The live broadcast with snowflakes was projected on TV sets around the world.
The leader patted him on the shoulder: "When you complete your mission, you will be a hero for all mankind."
Lin Ran actually never wanted to be a hero.
His reasons for wanting to be an astronaut were very, very childish and simple.
His brother said he would turn into a star after he died...
In order to see his brother again, he actually went into space.
Before stepping into the rocket, Lin Ran thought about the reason why he wanted to go to the universe and found it funny.
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He didn't expect that there would be an accident in the mission...
When two suns appeared in his field of vision from the porthole, Lin Ran fell straight down facing the hot blue sun that no one had ever seen.
After opening his eyes, Chen Shuangjiang, who died in the line of duty when he was seventeen, appeared in front of him.
His brother was calling him to get up.
Lin Ran thought hard and couldn't think of what episode he was dreaming about that they had experienced before, so he simply didn't think about it.
I really want to kiss you.
He was going to die soon anyway. Just indulge.
So he kissed his brother like this...
Lin Ran had a bad heart but no courage, and was afraid that his brother would react and beat him up. After the kiss, I turned around and ran away, only to find that the windows in my home were sealed.
Chen Shuangjiang slipped his collar and turned him around.
Lin Ran turned around and said: "Brother..."
Completed the direct "Ghost Strategy Guide"
Collect columns to avoid getting lost
Pre-collection of the next book "Yao Yao Zero"
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Intention: Study hard and make progress every day
Reader comments
It would be great if it could be adapted into a comic book. I feel that it depicts a very strange "outside world", but I can't imagine it, so I can only put the scenes from "Dune" into it.
I always have a bad feeling... The author doesn't want to sacrifice the little flower to the sky, right? [Hold up the chin]
Oranges have grown (wipe away tears)
It's okay if they're not brothers, let's knock together
You get rich by laughing, right? The fortune teller on the roadside? Then I have too much say. What I said doesn't count. I know it myself, but I still insist on saying it. Not only did I say it, but I also said a few words. In the end, the calculation was not accurate, and then I asked for money.
There's nothing wrong with the writing. I suggest you polish it at the beginning. What the reader sees is different from the author's perspective. Come on.
Woo woo woo woo, I really cried to death
I was just about to exaggerate that I have been working harder recently, but in the blink of an eye I saw Zuo Hua [Clown]
Pin it, stay and write the article (dog head
How old is Cheng Zi... The old cow in Shenlan Mountain eats young grass!
Why does this religion feel so evil?
After seeing Zuo's words, he turned forward again and turned [changed]
You can actually draw little people by hand [Like]
Give a high emotional intelligence evaluation: Husband and wife look like each other
Don't be anxious, the collection is good, but the subject matter is a bit cold. And the plot line probably hasn't been fully developed yet, so the popularity won't increase.
Writing is something that makes people happy. If it doesn't work, just take a break. I'll wait for you to come back. If you are really sad, change the next article to a hot meme to boost your confidence.
To me, Xiaohua's death was a bit more brutal. Maybe the character wasn't foreshadowed enough (?
When Da Da said it was so hot, I had a vision of Xiao Hei sticking out his tongue and panting like crazy [melted]
[Orange Candy] Got it
Hahaha, after reading the new article next door, I suspect that the teacher's
"Change the topic." This is a big bug for the author~
"How many people are there in Xiaohei" is a big bug for the author ~ there are more people
Is Meizi Fu Rongjing? Why is he called Meizi?
"Chen Zhe and Xu Hua move on" is a big bug for the author~
I almost thought Xiaohua was resurrected orz
When I saw this sentence, I thought it was meant for me [dog head]
[Cat's Claw] It's so beautiful ~ It's so awesome!
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl
Ah, why did we suddenly kiss you? I understand Shen's feelings. What's the matter with Xiaoqu?
Ah ah ah, I think Orange is underage.
I'm lucky enough to have finished reading this story.
I was attracted by the copywriting, and my favorite and most anticipated content, the "iron ring", was not described in the article, which is a bit regretful. However, looking at the full text, I am still willing to give high praise to the characters created by the author, the emotions and plots depicted. I generally hold the idea that no matter what I do, I need encouragement and support. This idea became stronger after reading it, so this comment appeared.
Before talking about this article in detail, I want to give the author a hug and hold you for your tears and grievances. At the same time, thank you very much for writing these words and presenting this story before our eyes.
In terms of plot: First of all, praise the author. A 300,000-word apocalyptic-themed novel is considered a short story to me personally, at most a short or medium-length novel. (I'm talking about reading here. If I were to evaluate it in terms of writing, 300,000 words is definitely not a small amount.) Since it is a short story, it must be "streamlined". Otherwise, the writing will be complicated, difficult to finish, and it will be easy for people to miss the key points. There will be more minor problems, after all, the word count is there. After looking at the column, I saw that the author is a new author and it is his first time trying this kind of subject. As a newcomer, it was already great to finish writing this story, and the author also gave me more surprises. As I mentioned in the preface, the minor flaws basically did not appear in this article.
Generally speaking, the main plot of the article is very clear, the branch plots are also well distributed, and the characters introduced have their "reasons" for appearing. Here is an explanation of the meaning of the word reason: Sometimes, the appearance of some characters gives me a feeling that it is completely unnecessary, and it also makes me wonder what the author means by writing this character. Is it just to improve the word count? This article is fine, but since this aspect has been mentioned, I also make a suggestion: group portrait articles are good, but if the plot is not completed, it will easily make people feel that the main characters are hollow. For example, Xiaohua and Uncle Ming in the article have a family line. Later I saw the importance of Xiaohua to Xiaochengzi, but I actually didn't feel Uncle Ming's influence on Xiaochengzi. Most of the time, little flowers are mentioned. As for Lin Ling, who is considered the villain boss in the article, I don't think her identity is just an ordinary supporting role in this article, so I think she lacks shaping. She is a ruler and a dictator, so I think such a person must be cold and cruel. But her writings always give me a sense of immediacy, as if she is always letting things slip and leaving trouble for the future. This makes the plot look a bit strange sometimes.
Of course, in the final analysis, this article only has 300,000 words. Being able to construct a complete story with 300,000 words is already amazing. But what surprised me the most was the relationship between the two protagonists.
In plot-oriented articles, I really like looking for "love". Qu Cheng is just a seventeen-year-old boy who has lived in a harsh environment since he was a child. He has not learned "bad" and does not know what "good" is. He is sincere, pure and brave. Looking back on this article, it is like his growth history. Shen Lanshan and I witnessed his growth together. As for Shen Lanshan, the first feeling he gave me was actually heavy, just like his name. He carries a hundred years of history on his back, has witnessed the deaths of countless people, and endured all kinds of emotions. When the two met, it was like a spark igniting a dead tree. The elderly man's emotions, which had long been numb, finally fluctuated again. Shen Lanshan took Qu Cheng on a train to cross the boundary between upper and lower. A rope connected their bodies and walked in the desert. Qu Cheng saw the real sky for the first time, and breathed the real air for the first time - even if it was thin, even if it was painful, at least it was all real. The hand of fate pushed them forward, crisis after crisis, and saving each other again and again. In Qu Cheng's heart, Shen Lanshan saved him many times. Without Shen Lanshan, his life might have come to an end. But in Shen Lanshan's heart, isn't Qu Cheng always saving him?
I really like the interaction between Qu Cheng and Shen Lanshan... The two of them made me feel soft. I really couldn't bear to leave it after reading it. Looking forward to the follow-up extra QAQ Shen Lanshan's eternal life setting feels so cruel. Will Little Chengzi be able to stay with him in the future? Hope everyone is doing well. Not only everyone in the article, but also the people who created this story, should do well.
Finally, I wish the author will no longer use pain as inspiration for creation and live the life he wants.
It would be great if it could be adapted into a comic book. I feel that it depicts a very strange "outside world", but I can't imagine it, so I can only put the scenes from "Dune" into it.
I always have a bad feeling... The author doesn't want to sacrifice the little flower to the sky, right? [Hold up the chin]
Oranges have grown (wipe away tears)
It's okay if they're not brothers, let's knock together
You get rich by laughing, right? The fortune teller on the roadside? Then I have too much say. What I said doesn't count. I know it myself, but I still insist on saying it. Not only did I say it, but I also said a few words. In the end, the calculation was not accurate, and then I asked for money.
There's nothing wrong with the writing. I suggest you polish it at the beginning. What the reader sees is different from the author's perspective. Come on.
Woo woo woo woo, I really cried to death
I was just about to exaggerate that I have been working harder recently, but in the blink of an eye I saw Zuo Hua [Clown]
Pin it, stay and write the article (dog head
How old is Cheng Zi... The old cow in Shenlan Mountain eats young grass!
Why does this religion feel so evil?
After seeing Zuo's words, he turned forward again and turned [changed]
You can actually draw little people by hand [Like] Give a high emotional intelligence evaluation: Husband and wife look like each other
Don't be anxious, the collection is good, but the subject matter is a bit cold. And the plot line probably hasn't been fully developed yet, so the popularity won't increase. Writing is something that makes people happy. If it doesn't work, just take a break. I'll wait for you to come back. If you are really sad, change the next article to a hot meme to boost your confidence.
To me, Xiaohua's death was a bit more brutal. Maybe the character wasn't foreshadowed enough (?
When Da Da said it was so hot, I had a vision of Xiao Hei sticking out his tongue and panting like crazy [melted]
[Orange Candy] Got it Hahaha, after reading the new article next door, I suspect that the teacher's
"Change the topic." This is a big bug for the author~
"How many people are there in Xiaohei" is a big bug for the author ~ there are more people
Is Meizi Fu Rongjing? Why is he called Meizi?
"Chen Zhe and Xu Hua move on" is a big bug for the author~ I almost thought Xiaohua was resurrected orz
When I saw this sentence, I thought it was meant for me [dog head]
[Cat's Claw] It's so beautiful ~ It's so awesome! [Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl
Ah, why did we suddenly kiss you? I understand Shen's feelings. What's the matter with Xiaoqu?
Ah ah ah, I think Orange is underage.
I'm lucky enough to have finished reading this story. I was attracted by the copywriting, and my favorite and most anticipated content, the "iron ring", was not described in the article, which is a bit regretful. However, looking at the full text, I am still willing to give high praise to the characters created by the author, the emotions and plots depicted. I generally hold the idea that no matter what I do, I need encouragement and support. This idea became stronger after reading it, so this comment appeared. Before talking about this article in detail, I want to give the author a hug and hold you for your tears and grievances. At the same time, thank you very much for writing these words and presenting this story before our eyes. In terms of plot: First of all, praise the author. A 300,000-word apocalyptic-themed novel is considered a short story to me personally, at most a short or medium-length novel. (I'm talking about reading here. If I were to evaluate it in terms of writing, 300,000 words is definitely not a small amount.) Since it is a short story, it must be "streamlined". Otherwise, the writing will be complicated, difficult to finish, and it will be easy for people to miss the key points. There will be more minor problems, after all, the word count is there. After looking at the column, I saw that the author is a new author and it is his first time trying this kind of subject. As a newcomer, it was already great to finish writing this story, and the author also gave me more surprises. As I mentioned in the preface, the minor flaws basically did not appear in this article. Generally speaking, the main plot of the article is very clear, the branch plots are also well distributed, and the characters introduced have their "reasons" for appearing. Here is an explanation of the meaning of the word reason: Sometimes, the appearance of some characters gives me a feeling that it is completely unnecessary, and it also makes me wonder what the author means by writing this character. Is it just to improve the word count? This article is fine, but since this aspect has been mentioned, I also make a suggestion: group portrait articles are good, but if the plot is not completed, it will easily make people feel that the main characters are hollow. For example, Xiaohua and Uncle Ming in the article have a family line. Later I saw the importance of Xiaohua to Xiaochengzi, but I actually didn't feel Uncle Ming's influence on Xiaochengzi. Most of the time, little flowers are mentioned. As for Lin Ling, who is considered the villain boss in the article, I don't think her identity is just an ordinary supporting role in this article, so I think she lacks shaping. She is a ruler and a dictator, so I think such a person must be cold and cruel. But her writings always give me a sense of immediacy, as if she is always letting things slip and leaving trouble for the future. This makes the plot look a bit strange sometimes. Of course, in the final analysis, this article only has 300,000 words. Being able to construct a complete story with 300,000 words is already amazing. But what surprised me the most was the relationship between the two protagonists. In plot-oriented articles, I really like looking for "love". Qu Cheng is just a seventeen-year-old boy who has lived in a harsh environment since he was a child. He has not learned "bad" and does not know what "good" is. He is sincere, pure and brave. Looking back on this article, it is like his growth history. Shen Lanshan and I witnessed his growth together. As for Shen Lanshan, the first feeling he gave me was actually heavy, just like his name. He carries a hundred years of history on his back, has witnessed the deaths of countless people, and endured all kinds of emotions. When the two met, it was like a spark igniting a dead tree. The elderly man's emotions, which had long been numb, finally fluctuated again. Shen Lanshan took Qu Cheng on a train to cross the boundary between upper and lower. A rope connected their bodies and walked in the desert. Qu Cheng saw the real sky for the first time, and breathed the real air for the first time - even if it was thin, even if it was painful, at least it was all real. The hand of fate pushed them forward, crisis after crisis, and saving each other again and again. In Qu Cheng's heart, Shen Lanshan saved him many times. Without Shen Lanshan, his life might have come to an end. But in Shen Lanshan's heart, isn't Qu Cheng always saving him? I really like the interaction between Qu Cheng and Shen Lanshan... The two of them made me feel soft. I really couldn't bear to leave it after reading it. Looking forward to the follow-up extra QAQ Shen Lanshan's eternal life setting feels so cruel. Will Little Chengzi be able to stay with him in the future? Hope everyone is doing well. Not only everyone in the article, but also the people who created this story, should do well. Finally, I wish the author will no longer use pain as inspiration for creation and live the life he wants.