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. . . . . I can't understand it at all. . . . Isn't Guo Jia just an ordinary human being? Why is the background so complicated? It's better to explain it.
It made me confused... Firstly, it didn't talk about everyone's redemption, secondly, it didn't talk about the direction of the plot, and even skipped the introduction of the plot. Moreover, the apes have become so smart, the colonel directly disappeared into the background, and his personal reactions were strange, and his thinking also developed in strange directions... Is this preparing for the unfolding of the magic?
Why do I feel so weird?
Hearing this, Zhan Lan couldn't help but give his master a thumbs up in his heart, 'What a great thing to say! What a level! It's obviously a matter of one or two people, but it becomes the credit of all the people! This is probably what the counselors of the Three Kingdoms were like! What matters most is people-oriented! Although Chu Xuan is good and has a high IQ, as long as he observes from a distance, his master is better at close range! '… Zhan Lan really came back later! ! ! By the way, with Guo Jijiu, can Colonel Chu still come in?
What a mess! In other words... Guo Jijiu's true identity... Is also a certain god? ? ? 0.0
It still feels weird, why did the Flame Queen suddenly show such obsequious flattery to Guo Jijiu? Just follow him wholeheartedly? Also, the Flame Queen can indeed hear what they say. I have been complaining about such a big bug in the original work. How can you be so bold and talk about the Lord God Space and other things in front of the Flame Queen? Although attention has been paid to this issue here, there are still loopholes that cannot withstand scrutiny. You must know that the Flame Queen is a program after all and has so-called task priorities. Her task is to prevent the virus from leaking. Why on earth would this place offer to go with them? This is such an unreasonable thing. When entering Biochemistry for the first time, you have to take her away unless you forcibly disassemble her motherboard. At the same time, you have to prevent disassembly. She may prevent data leakage and directly start the system self-destruct program, so the motherboard you get cannot be used when you return it. It will cost bonus points to let the Lord God repair it. You might as well just exchange it for a supercomputer produced by the Lord God. In terms of artificial intelligence, the best way to get her is not You want to get it by force this time, but choose to come back again, clean up the entire hive, let her ultimate mission be completed, and then let her go with you voluntarily. This is the best way... Forgive me for being so long-winded. It's not that I am stupid or that I am a nitpicker. In fact, I am also an unlimited author. I am accustomed to being rigorous. There is no way. If I write too many college essays, I will often be possessed by the college occasionally!
Guo Jia is following the path of cultivation, right?
I can't explain why, but there is always a weird sense of dissonance in this article. From beginning to end, many places are not explained clearly, leaving readers to judge and guess based on the clues between the lines. The author, if possible, write an article Guo Jijiu's extra story, please explain his origins. I'm really looking at all the obstacles. It's not that there's anything wrong with your writing. Guo Jijiu was added to many of the pasted-up plots of the original plot, and it always felt very stiff. For example, at the beginning, Guo Jijiu was He directly asked Zhang Jie how many movies he needed to go through before he could return to his starting point, but Zhang Jie explained a lot and didn't give him any explanation. Then Zhan Lan asked a similar question again and got an immediate answer. It was very inconsistent, and the initial impression was that although Guo Jijiu was a second-person character, he didn't show that he had watched Infinite and knew the plot of Infinite. But in the laser tunnel, he suddenly showed that he actually knew the plot of Infinite... It was really scary
This Zhan Lan... Could it be Zhan Lan who came back in the infinite later period? His nostalgia for the environment and his sneer at Zheng Zha and others, aren't these clues that he has already seen through everything?
Guo Jia evaluated in his heart, had he planned to turn Zheng Zha from an ape into an ordinary person before Chu Xuan came? ? ? ? ... Guo Jia knows infinite terror? Also, as a character who has traveled through the life of an ancient character, he still clearly remembers the events of his previous life as a modern person, the movies and novels he has watched, the abilities of his family, and his own special abilities... How perverted is this ancient man? In other words, such a character can die at the age of more than 30 years old when he becomes an ancient military sacrificial wine! ! !