Announcement: Following everyone's suggestions, I've revised "Cailing Song" to address its shortcomings. Thank you.
The younger brother of He Yuchen, the golden boy of a prominent company, is kidnapped. The biggest kidnapping case in the city is swiftly resolved thanks to a tip-off letter from a mysterious woman.
But as Detective Lin Bo investigates further, the old romance between He Yuchen and Xu Ruqiu gradually comes to light. At the same time, the mysterious woman behind the case turns out to have a startling connection to them!
Former lovers, current lovers, an onlooker caught in the gray area, a carefully plotted revenge, and a trap of extravagance and excess...
There is a kind of woman in this world who is both angel and demon.
New story:
Recommended story: So steady, so easygoing, such a fresh little romance by Nange.
My own stories: historical romance, martial arts, scheming men.
My own stories: Featuring cameos from people connected to "Cailing Song."
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Xiao~~Happy New Year... Say it again Sprinkle flowers by the way~~
If there are poems in the copy, most of them will be skipped by me. In fact, poetry doesn't play much role in explaining the story; And if it is not placed well, it will affect the reader's interest. The following paragraph can still outline the gist of the story, but the wording seems a bit excessive. It looks awkward. The plot of the first chapter is well laid out. It's plain but makes people want to watch it. It's just that the author needs to pay attention to his word choice. For example [Blessing in bright silver Dutch], It just doesn't read smoothly here. The plot of Chapter 2 is obviously a bit confusing; The author seems eager to let the characters appear; So that the plot is unnaturally coherent. And the place where Yao Hao and Lin Bo talked on the phone, The point of view keeps changing, making it difficult for readers to adapt. It is recommended to add a sentence or two of text description when changing scenes. The plot of Chapter 3 is suspenseful. Very attractive to readers. But the author still needs to pay more attention to the use of sentences. For example, the order and wording of sentences. Also, the description of the main content and side branches should be clear. Otherwise there will be chaos. All in all, the author's story is interesting, But the writing style is a bit jerky, It is recommended that the author read more descriptions by others and pay attention to the usage of words. It is best to read a chapter one more time after writing it. To increase the flow of the article. Please keep up the good work, author.
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It turns out that stories in the real world are more convincing than those on the Internet, and the ending of the story is so beautiful. Come on, Xiaochi, you will gain wisdom after eating. If you cheat, you will cheat. It's just a matter of making some money. Don't take it too seriously. It's more important to take care of yourself. Waiting for your new article!
Come on, Xiaochi, everything will be fine!
I like innocent and beautiful things. It seems that because I am not deeply involved in the world, I began to feel that reality is really scary after seeing the darkness of society a few times. From then on, I began to carefully treasure those innocent and beautiful thoughts in my heart. That is the last and most precious treasure in my life that cannot be matched by others. Just like in "I Really Want to Tell You", love can actually be so pure. When I read Xiaochi's article, I felt that it was as exciting as reading a detective novel. The layers of mysteries are being solved, and the real manipulator behind the scenes is our lovely Rongrong. The article is so exciting that I couldn't stop reading it. I saw where Xiaochi updated it in one breath, and then followed it until the end. All the mysteries are revealed and Rongrong's revenge is completed. However, Xiaochi did not tell us that by doing this, she felt relieved and had an outlet for her hatred. Was he really happy from now on? I think no one of us can tell except Rongrong himself. Brother Nan likes Rong Rong's character. It can be seen that even if Xiao Xu likes her, she still cherishes their friendship. She is independent, smart, and has her own principles. Perhaps it was the tragedy of fate that she also had psychological defects, including suicide and anorexia... More than once, she thought about how wonderful this girl's life would be if fate were kinder to her. Helpless, she finally embarked on her own path of revenge. Xu Ruqiu, she is beautiful but also sad. Such a beautiful girl fell into the abyss of incest and fell in love with someone she shouldn't have loved. All you get is sadness. He Yuchen, even though he is recognized as a perfect person, is a proud man of heaven. But I still have to pity him and sympathize with him. Such people always live under a halo and mask, just like stars under the spotlight, always wearing a thick layer of foundation. He cannot live his true self. Such a person will never gain true happiness in life.
Finished? Sharp!!! A lot of flowers~~·