My Overpowered Ex-Husband Wants to Rekindle Our Romance

I still want to write my review of the article directly here at the end. This article is actually quite interesting just looking at the overall outline of the plot. Every time I can see that my wife has some novel ideas. I'm actually quite satisfied with the relationship line this time. It's better to be able to resolve misunderstandings directly and quickly than to reconcile after a long time of twists and turns. Otherwise, the gap between the two people will be too difficult to bridge. The most unsatisfactory part of the whole article is that a hundred years were stacked on the heads of the two people at the beginning. In fact, although the relationship between the two people in the article quickly warmed up after meeting, there was always this big stone of a hundred years stuck in it, and there was no way to solve the problem of why the misunderstanding was not resolved for a hundred years. Like the previous article about my wife, aside from my favorite part about the emotional line, the characters are much more constrained by the plot line than the emotional line. All the characters are pushed by the plot line. The reversal in the previous article is not so abrupt. The details of this article are completely out of control. All the characters are inexplicably shaped in this plot, and the arcs are complete. The first to bear the brunt is the short section, Long Aotian (Famous Limited Edition). From the beginning to the end, except for Zhang San, Li Si, Wang and Wu who praised his reputation, I didn't see where he was proud. What's the use of suppressing and squeezing my head and feeling deeply? Next is Xiao Ming. His part came too late and was only thrown out at the end. Although he told a relatively sad story, he came too late and left in a hurry before everything was shaped. If it were simply to describe the powerlessness of people in this world being framed by the plot, it would indeed be expressed. The most pitiful character is not the other supporting characters. After all, the supporting characters are not at the center of the description. The person who suffers the most is Li Zhan. I suffered inexplicably for a hundred years and was brushed off with an understatement. I misunderstood for a hundred years without saying anything. "Oh, it turned out that someone else did it." It was revealed again. I have absolutely no idea why someone like Li Zhan, who can avenge his loved ones in a fit of rage, has declined in love. He is just a tool to reveal plot points. I even have the feeling that Li Zhan's formation talent was completely outside the original outline of the wife. Commentators were too dissatisfied with Li Zhan's inexplicable neglect for a hundred years, so they used the formation talent to compensate Li Zhan midway, and the formation talent allowed Li Zhan to play about 0.01 Role in the follow-up. Li Zhan's reputation has not been resolved, and the pain of being peeled off has been ignored. Li Zhan's emotions don't seem to be taken seriously, and the number one hundred years is just a numerical value to create affectionate charm for Xiao Duan. Li Zhan's personal subjective initiative is also pitifully poor. When the main plot goes to the back, Li Zhan plays the role of a camera in the entire world view. It is not seen that Li Zhan has the ability to solve anything. The mysterious camera Li Zhan in the main plot is really not as good as the naughty succubus in the second life and the extra story. In addition, there is no explanation for why the sect can control the famous Long Aotian at will, and the Peisheng incident disappeared afterwards. Dongzhou has nothing left after leaving a mess. The main plot is really unsatisfying. Only a small part of the entire main plot can be enjoyed. To put it bluntly, compared to the perspective of this article, it is actually the main attack. The reason is that since the last book, Madam has rarely described what the characters from the main perspective have to do to change. The synopsis of the character serving Madam is too serious, dragging the arc of the character to the ground. Although they are all issues that have little impact on reading if not studied in detail, it is still a bit strange in retrospect. [Pigeon]

Post your rating review here again. This is the first time I have read such an inexplicable novel in ten years. I usually read it silently. Today is my first time to comment and rate it. The writing is too deceptive, but I really love A Zhan's character so I persisted in reading it. Overall, there are too many flaws that should be included in the ending. I really can't think of the meaning of ending the second life in the final chapter. It's too separate from the ending. It's more like a side story written to give the ending to a he. What about his cultivation when he finally becomes an ordinary person? Has he come back? There is no follow-up on Dongzhou. The overall feeling is that the author wants to write a lot. He wants to have a big picture and a bottom line, but his own lack of ability leads to problems with logic, connection, and character arcs. To sum it up, it was very confusing and frustrating to watch, but the emotional scenes between the two were still very sweet and I liked their characters very much. The whole article was not as enjoyable as the little extras in the last three chapters. I suggest the author stop being obsessed with the big world and write some mindless sweet stories. It feels better.

Madam, I've been watching Qianchenn's story over and over again recently when they first got together. It's really sweet. It's different from the third generation of the extra story about raising a little husband and the modern school fishing system that treats puppies. It has a completely simple and youthful taste of pure love. I'd like to ask if I can have a chance to write more details about that time 😭 I really like it, I like it.

The young couple is quite sweet, but the world view is confusing and confusing. After reading it, I have no idea what the original novel is about...

Just read it as a mindless sweet article, just so-so

It's nice to read, the author's writing is very good, and the writing is full of sexual tension.

??? I didn't see the scene where the sect leader was hacked with knives. I really had ants crawling all over my body. I didn't explain what happened to Dongzhou at all???

It's pretty good. Although the middle and the ending are a bit inexplicable, it's really sweet and the book is very cute. It also describes the feelings of life and other people's emotions very delicately. For an old writer like me who has no brains and thinks I'm jealous of myself and the weird setting is very interesting. Come on, thank you.

Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~

Beautiful, very delicately written