After My Daoist Partner Forced Me to Sacrifice Myself to the Sword

It feels a little unfinished... I think the plot at the beginning was very well written (Laijia, although many comments say that Gong is ruthless, but Gong is playing a game... I can understand it if I can save it and restart it). The inner activities of the two male protagonists are really well written, but then I can't understand it. , To be honest, I really can't understand what's written in the back. I can't understand either the master line or the senior brother line, and I can't understand the senior brother's Taoist companion. Not to mention the 3.0 Version after the restart, I can't even understand a few pictures. After reading this novel, I just want to see the ending. Of course, when I saw this, I only knew it was he, and other plots couldn't enter my mind. It felt like crap. I don't know if it's because the situation has collapsed and the ending has been hasty. Anyway, when I watched the first small world, and then I watched it as a be, it was actually pretty good, but the rest of it felt like it wasn't very good (I didn't feel it was good anyway, my brain couldn't understand it). One thing to say, this setting is really interesting. It is the first time I have seen this kind of setting. The characters of the two male protagonists are also very good. I recommend it (World 1 version), but I only recommend World 1, and don't read it later. I really feel like Ababa Ababa. (Die Jia, I am the male protagonist. Of course I don't mean to say anything bad about the master, because from the plot line, the male protagonist's setting and the things he does are not considered scumbag. And from the perspective of world 1, the male protagonist has a better chance of winning. The naughty character design is matched with the enthusiastic puppy. I'm going to give it a thumbs up!)

The author is certainly thoughtful in his writing, but can you defuse the issue in the copy next time? This kind of atypical person would really stay up until five in the morning to read a sad article and just want a happy ending. There are obviously many other ways to develop and turn around. Why do you have to study physics to die and become an electronic ghost? It is true that romance is indeed tragic and beautiful, but who will save the readers?

I think the best thing about this book is real death, because there will always be unsolvable knots and estrangements, but because the person is really dead, you can forgive and devote yourself to loving each other wholeheartedly.

I skipped reading, and it felt a bit like a stock buying article. It would be nice if it could be marked in the introduction. Halfway through, regardless of whether you are having an affair with someone else, it is quite disgusting for me who only watches 1v1. I can also understand the character design. I have played this kind of game and can load the save file. It is indeed normal for the NPC with the highest favorability to sacrifice to the sky. Anyway, there is a chance to come back. It is unfair for the shou. It is normal to torture and attack. They are all within the scope of the personality. But there are some shou mothers that I really don't want to talk about. I don't look at the personality or the background. I just call them lame attacks. It's quite speechless.

Emmm, it's pretty good-looking, but I felt a bit disappointed in the later stage. I really liked the master, but it turned out to be a pure NPC, which was a bit uncomfortable.

My overall feeling: I enjoyed watching it at the beginning. After the end of the first life, I started to feel that the rhythm was a bit messy, and there were some signs of buying stocks in the middle. I didn't like it for pure 1v1 people, but luckily it didn't turn into a change of attack text (ノдヽ) The more I read later, the more my imagination opened up. I don't know whether the author had the outline in mind from the beginning or came up with such a design later. But after reading it all and going back to look at it, I found that the logic of the whole story makes sense, so there is still a problem with the rhythm. After reading the big column, it didn't take long to start writing the article. As a newcomer's work, I think it is already very good! The idea is very good and unexpected, and the overall structure is also very smooth. Because I have also tried to write articles myself, and I feel that the most difficult thing is the imagination and structure of a long story. How can I not be clichéd, and how can I make the plot reasonable and coherent? Especially sometimes, I suddenly have an idea and create a favorite character and some exciting plot fragments, but how do I make up the rest to round it out and make the plot move forward? Looking at it this way, I feel that Dada has made a good start. It has attractive characters and a refreshing, smooth and reasonable overall plot structure. It has good writing style. After accumulating experience, the rhythm of the plot will become better and better. I look forward to Dada's new articles in the future~[][]

[Cracked] Okay, okay, this article tells us a few truths: 1. Staying up late playing games will lead to sudden death 2. Technology changes the world 3. Master is so pitiful... (I hope everyone can see my faint sense of death from my calm tone [Cracked]... It's hard to calm down, who understands!!!

I'm jumping to watch it. In fact, there is no need to set Gong to be physically dead... It can be set to a vegetative state, and then Gong wakes up when the two meet again in the modern age. Otherwise, no matter how sweet it is, it will still have a sense of illusion 😭 The most important thing is that Gong's setting is close to reality. It looks so sinful. If Gong's father hadn't appeared, he would have languished and passed away early due to depression. This family is really unfortunate.

Damn it, what the hell is Master [Cracked][Cracked]

Please give me a side story about Master 😭 😭 😭 Master is so miserable, he is a pure tool, so I have feelings for him, right? [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken] [Heartbroken]