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Blurb:
Leng Junzhu was once a cultivation prodigy, the likes of which the Nine Provinces Sword Pavilion had seen only once in a thousand years. Sadly, she died in an obscure secret realm while saving her junior sister.
When she opened her eyes again, a hundred years had passed in the mortal world.
The junior sister who once could barely hold a sword had become a notorious Sword Immortal across the Nine Provinces. Leng Junzhu, meanwhile, had lost all her memories and become the new Demon Venerable of the demon realm.
At their first confrontation, Leng Junzhu was outmatched and captured by her junior sister, who brought her back to the Sword Pavilion and kept her by her side.
"Do whatever you want with me."
"Senior Sister, I won't hurt you."
Leng Junzhu glanced at the chains on her body and cursed Chu Zhiqin for being a lunatic.
But the lunatic treated her wonderfully, giving her high-grade spirit fruits and handing over pills as casually as candy.
Whatever Leng Junzhu asked for, Chu Zhiqin gave her.
Staring at Chu Zhiqin's radiant, porcelain-smooth face, Leng Junzhu had an idea.
She seduced Chu Zhiqin into sharing a bed with her, pulling her down from her altar.
The coldest, most peerless Sword Immortal in the Nine Provinces writhed beneath her, eyes brimming with tears as she called her Senior Sister.
Senior Sister. Senior Sister.
She, Leng Junzhu, was not Chu Zhiqin's senior sister.
She began to envy the senior sister. She wanted to take her place.
She took her revenge.
At their second confrontation, she was outmatched once again.
The sword named Wuyou pierced her heart. Its wielder looked utterly disbelieving, her hand trembling uncontrollably around the hilt.
Leng Junzhu smiled.
"Junior Sister, don't cry."
And so, she watched with satisfaction as Chu Zhiqin fell apart before her eyes.
She won.
Reader's notes:
1. Scheming Demon Venerable (Senior Sister), gong x devoted righteous Sword Immortal (Junior Sister), shou
2. 1v1, happy ending, switches
3. Written in plain, straightforward language throughout
4. Cultivation realms: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Spirit Transformation, Integration, Tribulation Transcendence, Great Ascension
Theme: Treasure the person by your side.
Why does Chu Zhiqin keep apologizing from the beginning to the end? What did she do wrong? She keeps asking her to apologize.
Chu Zhiqin was so miserable, with a miserable life experience. No one stood by her side along the way. The senior sister who loved her at first died, but the person she loved later did not love her, stabbed her in the back, and took revenge on her. Instead of experiencing such a love disaster, she would rather be that glorious swordsman.
Damn HE, because of your promise, you have been saving for so long, waiting for so long, and finally told me that the demon king died and then regenerated? You told me that the person behind is still the original senior sister? I think there are two people. It would be better to write them both to death or the Demon Lord to directly destroy the world of immortality. What are you doing? I was so disgusted after watching it that I no longer believe you who force him to do it under the guise of he.
I laughed so hard that I got kicked by a sheep
The first chapter was well written and kept me here, but then um... It had ups and downs, and I could tell that the author had polished the first chapter. Even so, the author has also told a complete story. The female protagonists (two) are slightly lacking in characterization, Leng lacks the psychological description of the transformation, and the sense of morality is a bit subtle (referring to these three lives). In the second life, he did kill many people, but others chose to treat them lightly (?). Suicide can be seen as an apology, but it is hard to say whether it is to impress the junior sister. After all, the sense of morality is indeed low (referring to the second life) (although I think it is also the highlight of the heroine design). I was still looking forward to the moment of the heroine's self-identity crisis, but the author didn't write it (crying). The third life also smoothly identifies herself with the first life with high moral sense and the second life with low moral sense. This is also very confusing. It would be better if the author describes it more. Let me boldly analyze that maybe Leng's essence is just a preference for Chu. In the first life, she was bound by responsibility and identity. In the second life, the survival crisis caused her character to seem to be completely opposite. In the third life, she also had her own ideas after meeting Chu. Before that, she was a "personality" that met everyone's expectations. She was indifferent and didn't care so much about worldly standards. Her anchor was Chu. So does Chu. By the way, I think Chu's life experience is not well written. The author may have wanted Chu to be inherently deficient, so he customized such a life experience to give the impression that the demons do all kinds of evil. I didn't want Chu to be trapped by her life experience and gave Chu Lai a nestling bird seal to make her lose her memory, but it felt a bit wasteful. Such a big life experience could lead to more developments, but the author stopped abruptly. There is also the supporting character Liu, who has little effect on advancing the plot, and is quite pathetic... It feels like it is purely to add interest to the protagonist's emotional development + to take over the mess that the protagonist left after the trouble. But then again, there is no need to single her out. After all, there are many supporting characters who do not promote the plot, such as the new generation of young disciples. I have no idea why I gave them so many descriptions. It is a typical schoolmate relationship. The only function is to make the protagonist look crowded and lively when entering the dungeon. Speaking of the other protagonist Chu, I feel that she has become mentally twisted after losing her lover (in the first life) (although for readers who have read this, I am talking nonsense). The author obviously thinks so too, and gave her a "mad dog" evaluation. He probably thought that the "sword fairy" and "mad dog" combined in one person would have emotional tension, but I didn't feel the tension. This is the biggest problem. The author's description of Chu's "Sword Immortal" is very full. She is a beauty, a goddess, and a junior sister. These are the keywords I can summarize. But for the yandere feeling, it is very strange. The writing of the senior sister is very silky. When writing the junior sister, I stumbled and stumbled, which made me uncomfortable. It was also very abrupt. I felt that a big drama had been staged in the author's mind, so I wrote a few comments with satisfaction. The words were disconnected, without connection or foreshadowing. For example, I have a memorable episode. I forgot which chapter and which plot. In short, it was Leng's routine that stimulated Chu. Chu was so stimulated that he grabbed Leng with a "crazy look". Oh my God, my eyes widened when I saw it. Chu Xianxian was described as very calm. I can't imagine how a very immortal person could suddenly look "crazy". "The author should at least describe her appearance, how her eyebrows are, how her eyes are, what kind of madness is different from before, and how painful she is. She can't control her facial expressions now. Even if she writes "the eyes reveal a hint of xxx, and then xxx", it will be fine. None. They started to go crazy strangely and then reconciled strangely. Is it scary? Yes, it's scary. There is also my personal habit. When faced with the death of innocent people, I would like to see a rigorous response plot. The demons kill the cultivators indiscriminately, and the cultivators fight against the demons. There seems to be a lot of hatred but there seems to be no hatred. Facing the demon king, they can also give face to other sects and tacitly refuse to pursue or hold accountable (yes, there is a description, but it is brushed aside by "the sect leader bears all the pressure"). Later, the demons bloodbathed the city. The author also specially wrote that because the ancestors among the immortal cultivators have not left the mountain, the ancestor has not left the mountain, which means that his interests have not been violated by the demons. What interests they have that can be violated are nothing more than power (the sect), territory, and resources. In other words, there are not enough disciples before the sect can be hit. So in the bloodbath of the demons, whose blood is left? The result is that no matter who wins, all mortals will die. Just like a group show, the more people who die, the more lively it will be. After the excitement is over, a batch will be generated according to the situation, and there will be endless descendants. I haven't seen a coherent response to such a scenario. Yes, the protagonists have helped a lot, but individual power is limited. I haven't found a way to deal with how to deal with the death of so many mortals at the social level. In general, if the article is divided into medium cup, large cup, and extra large cup, this article can be given to a large cup, and the book waste can be entertaining.
I didn't even understand the ending, why did it suddenly become like this?
It is said that all men are cannon fodder, but their presence is still too high.
Good-looking, very, very good-looking
Will the author have any bonus extras [Let me be healthy] I really want to watch it
The plot is well written. It would be nice if there were more female-based words. There are too many disciples and there are some words like "mother-in-law and mother-in-law", which is not very comfortable to watch.