The Demon King

Enn strange ending

Go ahead, I love it!

Forehead. . Change the male lead? ?

Article on the 10th floor, I saw Chapter 7 published ①The dialogue in the copywriting is very comic-style, but it shows tragedy and has a strange sense of contradiction. Also, the text is too small, so I suggest you enlarge it appropriately. ②When I saw the aristocrats, the mayor being the richest, etc., I thought it was an imaginary modern novel, but then the primary stage of socialism appeared later = = When I thought it was a normal modern novel, I accidentally saw the word fantasy in the upper right corner. I want to say, girl, it's best to set the tone of your article at the beginning. If there is no fantasy element in three consecutive chapters at the beginning, many fantasy readers will leave. In Chapter 7, normal fantasy characters finally appear, but why does this scene look so like the Twelve Kingdoms... On campus, on the roof of the building, a girl saw a man taking out a sword and killing a giant bird... It is recommended that the first few chapters be condensed and the text that is not helpful to the main plot be deleted. Try to include the text that readers are interested in within the first three chapters, such as the one about the giant bird and the divine horse.

Poor Wen Qi. . .

So full of personality~~ Waiting for the next part~~^_^