Author's note: This is the author's first novel. Although it is complete, many things are still immature. It's less a novel than a first draft recording the things the author likes. If you don't mind the rough edges, give it a try~
[Plainspoken, resilient, honest, adorably clueless heroine × fake bodhisattva, real evil ghost, gloomy yandere]
1. Le Jin, a young woman who dies unexpectedly while working, transmigrates into a book where every character meets a tragic end. She becomes the male lead's... little eunuch sidekick, and her task is to turn around the tragic ending of the male and female leads.
Well, a job is a job, wherever you do it, right? Le Jin quickly accepts the mission. While rushing around, she meets the novel's number-one moonlight: the second male lead, Meng Shutai.
A hand warmer on a rainy day, lotus seeds carefully stripped of their bitter cores, a sandalwood handkerchief to wipe away tears... Though he was born into wealth and privilege, this great person shows the most compassion for a lowly nobody like her.
Grateful for his kindness, Le Jin gives him a little "spoiler": Don't! Get! Married!
Your future wife is a wanton villainess, a licentious, poisonous woman.
After spending time together, she comes to think of them as good friends.
But then a cold dagger plunges into her chest, and Le Jin trembles all over with pain.
"Young Master Meng... why?"
Meng Shutai grips the dagger, letting her heart's blood lick his fingers. His jade-like hands glow with a bewitching radiance.
She went back to the desolate mountain bandits' hideout to save him, only to die by the gift she herself had given him.
Looking at the little eunuch's corpse at his feet, Meng Shutai furrows his brow.
For a fool as lowly as mud to be granted the honor of Meng Shutai lowering himself to tease them is a blessing earned over three lifetimes.
The little eunuch dies just like that. He lets out a long sigh of frustration.
"How boring."
2. Everyone says the eldest son of the Meng family, the imperial merchants of the capital, is the finest husband under heaven.
A face as lovely as jade, a heart like Guanyin's.
It's a pity that beautiful things don't last. As if it weren't enough that he is a sickly beauty, his fiancee is a domineering, poisonous woman burdened with countless illicit affairs. Before they are even married, she stabs Young Master Meng!
This is attempted wife-murder!
Everyone thinks the Meng family will surely break off the engagement and let the poisonous woman suffer the consequences. But Meng Shutai covers his wound and begs his ruthless, heartless fiancee to smile at him:
"If Jin Niang is happy, Shutai would gladly offer his neck to the blade... But don't break off our engagement. Don't abandon me."
"Since you hate me, why not watch over me and torment me for the rest of our lives?"
"A Jin, my darling..."
He calls to her tenderly, as if the fierce pain were a potent aphrodisiac.
The villainess who attacked him is panic-stricken. The pale, jade-featured man gives a quiet laugh.
"It was Shutai who got stabbed. Why are you the one trembling with fear?"
Le Jin is a wanton villainess, a licentious, poisonous woman?
She's clearly so sweet that his heart melts for her.
Meng Shutai wishes he could worship Le Jin's soul, which came from who knows where, bowing down to become the most humble, most devoted believer at her feet.
3. Le Jin gets a new mission and transmigrates into a book for the second time. She has only one reason: to stab that lunatic back!
She can't accept it! She's a perfectly decent young woman, so why should she let a yandere bully her?
But she never expected the boomerang to come flying back at her: the "villainess" wife she once told Meng Shutai to beware of and stay away from was none other than herself.
[New mission: Destroy Meng Shutai completely, by any means necessary.]
"You should experience for yourself what it feels like to be stabbed and bleed!"
The bloodstained ivory dagger clatters to the ground. The two of them were supposed to become a bitter couple, just as in the original story, but Meng Shutai's frenzied love blazes on, sweeping everything away.
Fierce as a monstrous beast, impossible to tame, doomed to endless suffering.
Le Jin feels as if the sky has fallen. Can she still go home and keep working?
Meng Shutai's long hair lies loose as he rests his head on her lap, reverently kissing her pulse. Beneath his long lashes, his eyes tremble with infatuated desire.
"I beg you, my wife, have mercy on me."
"I beg you, my wife, love me."
He humbles himself before her, making her skin crawl.
Swallowing nervously, Le Jin remembers that damned wanton-woman plot...
"What about all my lovers on the side? You don't mind?"
Half his face buried against her abdomen, Meng Shutai looks up at her with a beaming smile.
He says nothing, but his arms coil around her waist like a white snake, tightening and tightening until their flesh and bones press together.
Author's note: 1. A yandere male ghost story. The male lead is born bad, cold-blooded, ruthless, and a master of disguise. He will not be redeemed.
2. A couple who are pure hatred! The heroine gets a horror-movie script, while the male lead gets a bloody romance script.
3. This is an emotion-driven story, with angsty, melodramatic push-and-pull, fake deaths, and other plotlines that go against the protagonists' wishes. The ending is 1v2!!! (I'm very sorry that when I wrote the blurb, my thoughts weren't mature yet, and I didn't make this especially clear. I've explained it on my personal Weibo. Sorry again.)
Blurb for Red Hatred:
Xie Jilian, the prized son of an aristocratic family, is dazzlingly beautiful, radiant as the morning sun.
In the eyes of the world, he is the splendid, godlike scion of the Xie family. But Xie Jilian knows...
Long ago, he twisted into a mad, hellish demon in the throes of desire.
He loves until he is utterly ruined, carving into bone and scraping out marrow. He wishes he could stitch himself and Xu Qiaoxi together, becoming an appendage to her flesh and bones, becoming the skin covering her whole body.
But Xu Qiaoxi says, "We were never together. We never loved each other at all. He's a lunatic. What does that have to do with me?"
Xie Jilian is nothing more than an old aristocrat from a feudal age, while she is a college student who transmigrated here. She needs to survive and find her way home.
Yet Xie Jilian spits blood, the scarlet, sticky liquid binding his lips, teeth, throat, and tongue, along with every word of hatred threaded with love and every word of love hiding hatred.
"Qiaoxi, don't leave me... I'm begging you..."
"I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you..."
"Why are you always so heartless to me? Pity me, please, pity me..."
"Xu Qiaoxi, go die! Die, die, die! No, no, let's die together."
"Don't be so cruel to me, Qiaoxi. I hurt so much. Touch me..."
"Your soul, flesh, marrow, bodily fluids, organs... I'll protect every part of you inside my body. Qiaoxi, let's stay together forever like this, all right?"
Author's content warnings: 1. This is pure personal-fantasy indulgence. The male lead is the ultimate male ghost, Pro Max edition! There will be lots of bizarre, inhuman (emphasis on inhuman) behavior!
2. Detailed content warnings will be in the author's notes after the story begins.
Theme: Keep kindness in your heart, love yourself, and grow strong.
I have to say that this is one of my favorite books that I have read recently. Many synesthesia metaphors are very clever, including the portrayal of the heroine and the male protagonist. I especially like the portrayal of the male protagonist's psychology during the second encounter, which is very dank. Flaws are not concealed is the treatment at the end. I always feel that the heat is a little bit off, like a yawn held in the throat.
I really like what the author wrote. The xp of the two is so similar. . Ask when Chihen will open.
There is no reason to argue with a madman who wants to cut himself into pieces and give them away, so this is already a better ending. It would be great if there were extra chapters to write more about the heroine's happy daily life 😳😳
Congratulations on the completion. This is a great first book, keep up the good work. No more extras? I feel that maybe Yuan Fang appeared too late, so he and Lok Jin didn't have much description of their happy moments.
It is a rare setting for the wife to set the male protagonist as a mistress from the beginning, and it feels like a point in the tweet. The death of the male protagonist in the end was a debt that he had caused to harm so many people. It was good to have a beginning and an end. But is the plot going to be written to be, or will the heroine and the male supporting actor end up together? But the strong emotional portrayal was all before Le Jin jumped off the building. Personally, I think the male co-star and I can only be good best friends. If my wife had written a popular plot where the male protagonist rapes, robs, and has sex, and the male protagonist is strong in martial arts and resourceful, while the female protagonist is brave, decisive, and has more systematic help to resist and resist, the two people confront each other and spark love, and then the love becomes more and more sad, the data may actually be better. But I feel that my wife is very insistent on the direction of her characterization. For example, if the male protagonist thinks intercourse is disgusting, then he can't do it, and the female protagonist is not a character with the strongest system to save the small world. They all have their own character background, and there is really no OOC. But this makes me personally feel that the whole article has a sense of blandness and powerlessness, which comes from the family environment where the heroine's perspective is not good (I know that the wife wants to show the female power of the heroine's sister, but this article is a love story in Jinjiang after all, and it may need more space to write more profoundly), and the system is useless (?) , The original female supporting character was framed, the heroine was helpless against the male protagonist's evil deeds, etc. Before the heroine jumped off the building, we couldn't see the real changes the hero made for the heroine (the hero still wanted to kill everyone he saw). After rebirth, the hero suddenly died in the fire too quickly, which may be one of the reasons why the sourness was not enough. My favorite part of the whole article is at the beginning, the middle is okay, but towards the end (in my opinion) the details of the heroine's rebirth, such as the reason and psychological description of how she accepted the male partner, the hero guarding the corpse from madness to death, how to recognize the heroine after rejuvenating overnight, and then decided to let the heroine go and die - etc. There are few descriptions, and there is no sourness and excitement of violently torturing the hero, so I was a little weak in chasing after her. Maybe my wife hasn't found the balance between what she wants to eat, what readers want to eat, and what the author and readers want to eat, right? My grades in liberal arts have always been poor. This comment cannot express my complete feelings. I just feel that this article can be better. I wish my wife's next book will have better data!
Both Love and Hate are well written, but the origins of Love and Hate are so shallow that it's hard to immerse yourself in and believe, so I felt very disconnected while reading it.
There must be a side story of Yuan Fang and Le Jin [ bursting into tears ]
The last chapter is locked. Save, save, save, save, save, save, save
It's nice to watch, but the ending where Yuan Fangsui doesn't know anything is a bit unsatisfactory. It would be great if they knew, otherwise wouldn't the heroine feel guilty as a modern person? The ending is a bit weird??
It's a pity. In fact, I can accept 1v2, but that is when everyone knows and accepts it. But in the ending, didn't the heroine cheat on her husband without telling her husband? And I think the part where the heroine accepts the hero is a bit hasty. Maybe she is tired from struggling with the hero for too long. I think this article can be more perfect.