First mini-world:
Because of a deep-space vortex, you transmigrated into a turtle in a wishing pond. You had to grant ten people's wishes before you could return to human form.
You: Easy.
The first person who came along made ten wishes.
You: Kid, you shouldn't be so greedy.
After that, people's wishes became stranger and stranger.
The people who came to make wishes fell into two groups. One wanted the world to end, and the other wanted peace throughout the universe.
You couldn't grant either kind of wish, so you were at the bottom of the performance rankings, and regaining your human form seemed as far off as ever.
Until one day, a gaunt figure came to the pond and said devoutly, "I wish I could see Miss Hunter one more time."
You, who had been slacking off, perked up at once. Aren't you Miss Hunter? And that voice sounds a lot like Shen Xinghui.
You looked up and saw that familiar face. He really had crossed several timelines to find you.
Second mini-world:
You became a little princess of the Xia Dynasty, and Shen Xinghui once again came to your world alone.
Unfortunately, you had forgotten him once more.
This time, he approached you under the identity of a hostage from an enemy state and was forced to become entangled in a treacherous struggle.
You: A Hui, mountains don't meet, but people do meet again. Have you ever regretted it?
Shen Xinghui: Once a move is made, there's no regret.
"Even if we are separated by billions of light-years, I will find you."
1. Many story arcs.
2. Supporting characters have original details added.
3. Not entered in rankings and will not be contracted for publication.
4. Written for love, updated whenever inspiration strikes.
Theme: Reuniting again and again across countless mini-worlds
Wow, come on! 💪
There's nothing wrong with it, it feels smoother than Chapters 1 and 2. However, this chapter is a bit exciting and a bit embarrassing. I feel that the progress of the plot is a bit slow and the progress of the relationship is a bit fast. Duang, Miss Hunter restored her memory in a moment, and then kissed her. If I want to watch the plot and chat, emotions take up a larger proportion. The ten wishes mentioned in the copy are less about people with strange ghosts and monsters, but Shen Xinghui is a larger proportion. At the same time, after meeting Shen Xinghui, Miss Hunter and Shen Xinghui have many emotional lines (it feels like it is mainly describing Shen Xinghui's story, not the author's current story). The plot that the author set up has few clues, which is a bit off-topic. There is a sense of missing clues. In short, the flow of your plot is probably better than at the beginning, but the subsequent part involves the past events of Shen Xinghui and Miss Hunter, resulting in the plot not being prominent at first (it may also be because there are few chapters, or because I subjectively feel that the intimacy is not enough (supervisor factor)) I think there are more plot clues in the follow-up, which may make the story flow more smoothly.
Wow, I just watched part of the plot of Chasing the Light some time ago. (Spoilers for the game) Stars are not easy either. My mother was turned into nourishment and she was killed with my own hands. My father wanted to inherit the throne and wanted to turn Miss Hunter into nourishment as well. He was in a dilemma, but he still did not choose to sacrifice Miss Hunter to benefit the entire planet. Xingxing is really of high moral character and has a sense of responsibility.
Am I bad at writing???
Quack, quack, not a thousand-year-old tortoise or a ten-thousand-year-old tortoise. Miss Hunter must stay with the stars for a long, long time.
❤️ The latest update I clicked ❤️ Xingxing's birthday is on October 16th [Rose] Come on, [Compare your heart] [Rose] [Like]
I'm curious, what will happen to the hunter lady who turns into a bastard and the stars? [Compare your heart]