The Cannon Fodder Who Entered a Harem Novel and the Original Male Lead Went One-on-One

I read this somewhere else! Oh my god, I never thought I would have the chance to find the teacher. The article written by the teacher is really good. Whether it is the emotional line or the plot, it completely hits my sweet spot. I am really good at writing. I really like the teacher's writing style and narrative ability. I hope the teacher can continue to write! >

It's a very long-flowing article. I felt so calm and warm while reading it. Both of them are very stable types. The relationship progresses very naturally and smoothly. The upgrade process is also refreshing and reassuring [Orange Heart][Orange Heart]

I watched it for the second time, and I had different opinions at different stages. The first time I watched it, I couldn't finish watching it at the beginning and couldn't stand it. I didn't expect it to be finished so smoothly this time. The more I watched it, the more I liked it, and the more I watched it, the more comfortable I felt. The love between two people supporting each other for the same goal, the emotional line is very natural for Nie Shiyun at every stage. The decisions and actions he made were very smooth. He faced difficulties head-on, and was careful and prudent in every step. He had a smooth personality, knew how to advance and retreat, and knew how to hide his clumsiness. This really made me feel that it was not easy for him along the way, but he always maintained his original intention. Whether it was refining weapons or traveling around mountains and rivers, he knew exactly what to do, and his charisma was really unforgettable. There was no deliberate cheating at every step. I felt that he had suffered a lot and it was difficult to achieve it casually. I have read this book in the past few years and it was really pleasantly surprised. I originally thought they would have a rift because of the part in the painting. Bai Rong's shaping is really good. Even in the first part, he is no longer the same as Duan. Although the relationship is still longing for the old love, this one actually writes out his original character, which is not deliberately written on paper. It really depicts Bai Rong as a person instead of a setting. The part where the two meet again in the demon clan's weapon refining shop is so beautifully written. Even if there are more plots later, I have to say that this part is comparable to Bai Yueguang. I always feel like I can't express myself well, but I really like this article. When I saw Four O'Clock, I couldn't help but feel so excited that I couldn't help but write this paragraph. I sincerely hope that more people will read this book. I also hope that one day when I click on a novel again, I suddenly find that it is written by the same person. This book is really suitable for my appetite. I like it very much [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]

I would like to call the author a pioneer with communist spirit in Xiaolvjiang, a selfless devotee to the letter, and a pure soul holder who generates electricity for love. In short, I found a treasure. [Throw flowers][Come on]

My wife's writing is so good that I can't even throw a tantrum at it! ! ! What attracted me so much at first was Gong Bian Shou. Later, I started to like the two of them more and more, and then I also liked the two younger ones. Watching it really warmed my heart, and the plot was also exciting! !

It is very suitable for the treasure author to write a long cultivation novel. It is a bit too early to end the Mahayana. He can continue to write about the Immortal Emperor, Immortal Sage and even the strongest in the Immortal Realm. The superimposed secret academy apprenticeship and upgrade can be written more completely. The spiritual pet in this book is very well written. It will be very interesting to intertwine the mutual benefits between the strongest person and the ancient clan without adding emotional drama. The author should write more mature and popular masterpieces in the future.

I can't bear to leave Brother Nie, Bai Rong, Qianqiu Shen Yan, and others. It feels like I have spent hundreds of years with them [crying]

Will the teacher still open wb? I looked through my old notes and found that this book was supposed to be published. It's such a pity [crying]

I really like this book. I read it a long time ago and will read it again when I think of it. Why are you so awesome? [Shy][shy]

I would like to call it the most amazing article I encountered when I was young [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]