[Reborn!] Sky, Sea, and Clouds

As expected, two birds are hard to find...

A very heart-warming article, it seems that Yui can give up everything for love, humble yet great

The author writes well... I just like this kind of woman.. But I should know Skylark better.. Look at his actions.. I never thought Skylark could say sweet words and promises... Excellent food and clothing, the type of woman I like... Gentle and tough... Love it very much..

Although I know this is normal life for people... I still can't imagine sparrows doing/loving honeymoons...

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... Isn't it Iemitsu? Ieyasu passed away a long time ago, right?

Ah, I really miss the summer of my second year in middle school [touching my chin]... (Hey, you're not in second grade yet, right?)

. . . [Hold face. . . The sparrow has been prostituted countless times. . . Why is Mao still so loving? . .

A short story in which the heroine is Skylark's wife. It happened when Hibari and others were running for San. When I read the first chapter, I wondered why someone like Mao Xiangyunque, who didn't like restraint, would get married, and... Wasn't he going to become a magician? [←Beat her] Well, the author of the first chapter had something to say to explain LZ's problem, so I interpreted it as: This is because of love! Dirt Okay, let me talk about LZ's feelings after reading it. First of all, the heroine's character is not distinct, and she doesn't seem to leave much of an impression on people. In other words, she doesn't understand why Hibari falls in love with her. Personally speaking, this girl is not cute at all. However, the author's writing style is not bad, which makes up for this shortcoming. Then there's the story about the skylark. Hibari Kyouya in Tenkaiun's article gives off a cold and hard feeling. This should be one of Hibari's characteristics, but in fact Hibari Kyouya gives LZ the impression that one moment he is full of murderous energy and ready to play a bite-and-kill game with you, and the next moment he can yawn out of boredom and act cute! ! ←Zongzi Well, it's understandable given that Skylark has already run away from home, and the description of some details in the following article also reflects some aspects of him, but overall Skylark's character still tends to be thin. And regarding the plot, for a short story, the first few chapters seemed a bit delayed. Well, it gave me the feeling that the effect could be achieved by just using narrative sentences, but the author used thousands of words to describe it. Of course, this is just my feeling, just a family opinion. Finally, my blessing to Ms. Hibari Yui: Thank you for your hard work! Crawl away

Hey, it's over? ! TUT That's why I didn't make the comment until I marked this article with red letters. I'm really embarrassed = = What a beautiful ending~TUT Requesting a side story! ~