Everyone's Fighting to Survive, and the Last One Standing Wins

He Huan and who, He Huan and who!

Who, who? Which man has such a good life [lemon][lemon][lemon]

After a while, I suddenly remembered that there was a blue fox!? It's been 24 hours, don't die in the package, right? Or the author forgot

There are many typos throughout the text, as well as some sick sentences that affect reading. I don't know why I can't catch the bug yet. The overall story is enjoyable, with a hasty ending, and most of the foreshadowings are not recycled. It is a book that can be read, but not recommended for logic lovers. The beginning is very interesting. It would be great if the author is willing to expand the number of words to polish the details and describe the world in detail. The heroine begins to feel like a lone wolf, cold and powerful. In fact, she is not completely separated from the crowd. When it is essentially profitable, she is very willing to contact people and complete tasks. Due to the nature of the world, humans have no status, and she has no way to stay out of it, so it is not a story of fighting alone. (The following contains spoilers, so don't read if you don't want to be spoiled. In the mid-term after changing the map, there is no sense of stocking up at all, the treasure chest is gone, the system has a weak sense of presence, and the bracelet has a weak sense of presence. Even when encountering a new settlement, the previously obtained or new equipment and food formulas are no longer described (even if there are no treasure chests, but when encountering several waves of new people, the novel formulas in their hands are not described). There are fewer numerical descriptions, basically (the enemy is strong, but the heroine is strong + skills, scrolls and other assistance, perfect kill), the numerical system is broken, and the heroine seems to have never used the short-term strength-increasing items obtained, the Angel Fountain taken from the Taishan Mutual Aid Association has not appeared again; it is a pity that the boxes taken out of the enemies are not written. The occupation and organization of backpack compartments have not been mentioned; The secret compass is useless; what about the identifiable picture frame? The scroll skills have not improved; where is the blue fox? The resurrection scroll has never been explained; when the Taishan Mutual Aid Association was destroyed, many of them were used, and there were none in other camps? After obtaining the hyena whistle, there is no detailed description of the significant role it could have played; The heroine took a nap in the middle, and the city of dignity was destroyed like a dream? (Furthermore, why didn't the hostess worry about the stone house that was taken care of by Bill in the rat settlement? She didn't care about the property when she built Dignity City) Without returning to the Rat Clan, the story of Big Teeth and Dori would not be further expanded; Elves and trolls have few specific roles and have a weak sense of presence; There is no explanation of the dragon clan and the red dragon at the beginning. It is only mentioned that the trolls, elves and humans existed at the beginning. In the end, it was rushed and pushed quickly, but it still had a cool text feel even under the quick push, but it lacked foreshadowing and the coolness was a bit superficial. The dark skills drawn by the original owner can be upgraded with void energy. What is the specific relationship between the original owner and the void? A lot of foreshadowing was not recycled. In the end, an unstable and seemingly grand world view was used to sublimate it, and the outline was rolled out without enough foreshadowing and narrative. It seemed a bit empty and I didn't like it. It is a story of 800 words, 600 of which are very well written, and the last 200 words are stuck in the 800-word horizontal line, which ends in an anticlimax. It's a pity that I didn't arrange the word count of the article structure or I was too weak in the later stage to continue writing properly. If it could be completed and polished properly, it would actually be a very good story. (In the later period, I sometimes felt that the heroine was too pretentious) The above complaints were compiled while I was reading the article, so I'm sorry if it's a little messy. I really like the tone of this book at the beginning. The author writes it very well. It's a pity that the follow-up seems to be weak. I hope the author will get better and better. I want to read more excellent articles. I would like to encourage you.

Did the other fox forget (should he be dead)?

The "latest rights" are a big thorn in the side of the author~ "Drunken with power"

So fast! It's finally over. There are so many extras. Please write more apocalyptic stories. It's very interesting.

"Isn't it impossible to do this?" This is a big bug for the author~ this is not

"It takes too long" is a big bug for the author~ Live too long

"Mingxin doesn't know" is a big bug for the author~ obvious