I Bring About the Spiritual Qi Revival

Kitten revenge, kitty hello! Kitten Shark is bad, Kitty Shark is good! Kittens save kittens, kittens are good!!

How many greasy men did Rao Sning eat to be able to write such powerful dialogue? [Question mark] [Question mark]

The beginning of this article was actually written about 21 years ago. I was bored and wanted to get some writing training, so I wrote a dry horror story (an assessment copy). It wasn't until 24 years that I thought about writing an article here as soon as it came out. I thought that the ready-made beginning would not be used in vain, so I published it here. Unexpectedly, it was approved directly, so to be honest, I still don't know what the beginning is. How to modify it to make it more engaging, because it has a complete structure, but the underlying logic of the story design is too much like a puzzle game guide... In addition, it has been almost two years since I officially started writing. I finally gradually understood what kind of story I wanted to write and what kind of thinking I wanted to express in my subsequent creations, but the initial article was actually quite chaotic. A very important cognitive change is that I am increasingly aware that the subjectivity of being a "creator" is very important - since I have absolute power in the story, of course I should make better use of this power to write the story more pleasing to the eye. For example, in this article, I wrote about someone smoking. What I originally wanted was to present this phenomenon objectively, and then let the protagonist use these real-life rules to achieve his own goals. But in fact, I could completely avoid this phenomenon and not write about it, or add more criticism. After all, why do I have to look for realism in this kind of place? There are also some changes in personal pronouns. The more I thought about it when I was writing this article, the more uncomfortable I became: Obviously my protagonists are all girls, and the supporting characters in the background are also girls. Why do I still use "he" to refer to most of them? Therefore, all subsequent articles will abide by the principle that "she" is the first priority. In addition, when I first started writing, I had a lot of problems that I just wanted to write if I felt comfortable regardless of whether the readers could accept and understand it. For example, I would be self-centered or even deliberately use my flow method to deconstruct some plots that could easily cause misunderstandings. But I later found that most people might not care so much, and my style of doing things seemed a bit daddy when I looked closely, as if I was saying, "Then let me test whether you understand"... In short, it is indeed ready to be re-serialized. The above-mentioned remaining issues such as pronouns will be changed to connect with the cognitive background of other articles I am writing now ❤️. Speaking of which, the collection of this article is still increasing after the discontinuation. Many readers probably read Hu's other articles and then turned to the homepage to find this one. They may have found it interesting and collected it. Thank you very much for your support!! ❤️ I will try to update this article twice a week. After all, I gave the editor a rough outline of the 2K-word copy, which is really a huge project. [Clown] Thank you again for your support. I am really lucky to have readers like you!!! ❤️❤️

This chapter feels a bit strange, the main perspective suddenly changes to Honeysuckle. So it's a double heroine?

"Her sense" is a big bug for the author~ There's more of her

The Shouzuka section is amazing! Teacher Dahu is so good at writing!!!!

I feel that the exploration of the main plot is interesting, but from a reader's perspective, the purpose of the story is a bit scattered, and there is a sense of confusion of not knowing what will happen next and where the initiative will be advanced. Come on, new teacher Dahu! Looking forward to more exciting follow-ups

I didn't understand the sentence "I picked it up with a strange little handle." Did I receive this handle? Or maybe the heroine actually has this skill?

The passenger base of this bus is quite diverse, from rich to poor. Moi's process of finding "her" identity is very interesting!

"Campus" What do you want to write about, small courtyard???? Sister, this typo is a bit [question mark]. I can really see your resentment in this chapter.