
An Improvised Performance Full of Flaws
即兴表演,漏洞百出
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 106k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
32Chapters
905Favorites
9.3Score
903Nutrient gifts
770Clicks per chapter
316Comments
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Reader comments 25
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The plot of this book is really interesting, especially the copy, and from the estrangement between Cen Shu and Xu Shanhe, who were once childhood sweethearts, to Xu Shanhe's unexpected confession, the two people's lives were disrupted, and the development of the story is particularly gripping. The author writes the twists and turns of the emotions between the two very delicately. For example, Cen Shu alienated Xu Shanhe because he felt that Xu Shanhe was too dazzling and kept hiding his inferiority in his heart. Later, after Xu Shanhe confessed his love, the cautious and entangled feeling between them when they got along was really written [][] The characters of the two protagonists are also very unique. Cen Shu is particularly sensitive and delicate, and thinks a lot; Xu Shanhe is radiant on the surface, but he is still a bit silly in terms of emotions. They have different personalities, and when they come together there are all kinds of dramatic conflicts. I find it very interesting every time I watch them interact, and I can't help but feel anxious for them. I also like the author's writing style in the book. It is simple and smooth, and can express the characters' emotions clearly. Especially when I write about what the characters are thinking, the writing is so good that I feel like I can get into the minds of the protagonists and know what they are thinking. Moreover, the dialogues of the characters in the book are also very natural, just like our usual chatter, which is very real. The most important thing is how does the author know so many memes? Did he endorse them overnight hahahaha Finally, I want to say that this book is not just about a love story, I think it also talks about people's need to grow and pursue freedom. In the process of getting along with Xu Shanhe, Cen Shu slowly began to understand himself, bravely faced his inner thoughts, and tried to get rid of the bad influences of the past to pursue his own freedom and happiness. Watching her change little by little, I also feel quite inspired. I hope I meet true love soon! 🥺🥺[Orange candy][Orange candy][Orange candy]
The characters of the two protagonists feel like they were written directly, and they look very nice without any copy 🐶
Delicious, when will you write a longer novel [Hold your thighs]
"Give yourself some steps" is a big bug for the author~
"If you want to raise a clingy little one at home," the author will catch a big bug~ like
Why do you do it so quickly... Then again, can't you really write it all? 🥺 Teacher, when you are tired, just take a break from writing.
It's actually finished. The teacher's ideas are so interesting. I like 🤩 and [Spreading Flowers].
"The female teacher walked into the classroom" has really caught the author's eye. Can she be the teacher directly? The author has [let me be healthy]
God, I really love this character to death
God, I really love this character to death