Who Taught You to Be Such a Burden?

Sorry, I just learned that the welfare extra can only be released after the application has been completed and settled. I have finished writing and applied for settlement. The settlement should be completed in about a week and will be sent out to everyone [translated][translated] There are so many new features, and now you have to choose to finish the chapter if you want to mark it as finished. I haven't found the button for the bonus extra. It says that this option only appears after settlement? I don't understand, I'll give it a try when the time comes. It seems that there is still a subscription ratio, I will try to lower the ratio. [Changed]

I've finished reading it, it's a very good article. Comments after reading the article: ①The author is very capable, and he writes the difficult subject matter smoothly. The logic of the whole story seems to be very reasonable after a quick glance at it. The author made good choices. There are not too many copies, but they are few and precise and interlocking. He did not waste time writing too many copies of cannon fodder characters. The characters are few but precise. The size of the characters is very good, and each character is very vivid. ②Poseidon's house fish is so cute, I feel like Poseidon can write a story by himself, telling the story of how Poseidon's strength increased greatly after the god descended, and salted fish slept for hundreds of years. ③The most important thing is! I finally saw that the love line between attack and shou in Infinite Stream runs in both directions [like]. I understand very well the relationship between love and shou and love and attack [red heart], and there are a lot of scenes of gong. (The day I cried over the Toolman background board [resolved]) ④ In the Jinjiang BL infinite stream, where all kinds of evil gods are everywhere, it is so rare for a pure player camp to not open a relationship account or engage in bloodline theory [Star Eyes] Who knows how rare this kind of story of a pure player camp not to open a bloodline and the husband and wife work together to fight against the shady story of the copy [Red Heart] [Red Heart] [Red Heart]. The author's Infinite Stream story has a lot of words and ink about the dungeon's shady oppression of players, and there are many descriptions of many places. I feel that the author has his own thoughts on some real-life issues. ⑤I don't understand that the traffic is so bad, but I understand it a little bit. The author is really using his brain in this copy of Unlimited Streaming. Here is an inappropriate example! The author did not forcefully use a first-grade calculation problem such as 1+1=2 to stamp it as a high school calculation problem. ⑥Does the author really not consider publishing a book for Zhaiyu Poseidon [Star Eyes]

I have all the photos taken after it is finished, but I feel that it was finished too quickly. I feel like there are still some small points that I can dig deeper into. 1. As for the system that accompanies the protagonist from beginning to end, we only know that it is a neutral camp and only plays a role in providing clues. The ending can be written a little, otherwise it will feel inconsistent with the writing of similar system texts. 2. Chu Sen's character design is particularly lovable. From the man-eating monster who just wants to commit suicide to the bug-eating monster who desperately tries to save his teammates, he feels full of security and has his own growth. It is not difficult to see that there is a lot of foreshadowing with Xiao Hui in the front. However, there are only a few sentences in the back to say that the three people are the same person. A woman who has given birth to a child, a sensible and innocent little girl, and a woman who will grow up. It is difficult to think that the three people are the same person at different ages and different experiences. I feel that it can be briefly expanded. 3. I actually think there are a few scenes of Grandma Jiang. From the beginning of the writing, I thought it would be a scene where the protagonist had arranged everything to die and was unexpectedly resurrected by the old woman. I didn't expect that it was directly pointed out that it was a scene of a spy (the article also mentioned that the protagonist did not notice her behavior) There are only some hints that make readers feel that she holds the script, but they fail to see how deep the connection with the protagonist was and why she became a teammate (the power is really useful, I don't understand why the protagonist didn't notice her at the beginning, maybe because her acting skills were too good (?)). The relationship with her granddaughter Yingying is also a bit abrupt, why the granddaughter disappears, and the plot of these three people, Grandma Jiang Yingying and Chu Sen, feels incomplete. 4. The most questionable point is that the center of the article is clearly called "Death Heroically". There are many descriptions in the past that the protagonist has been planning how to die. Gong is also particularly worried that he will die on his own, and the readers are also worried. Almost throughout the entire text, they always think that the protagonist will actually "die", but at the end, he writes lightly that he will never leave you (the same as the previous words to comfort Gong, it is difficult not to make people feel nostalgic). Suspected to be acting and lying), it makes people feel as if there will be a big result later and nothing will happen. I was originally guessing whether the protagonist would arrange a script in which he would die with the mother goddess and then resurrect himself and become a hero. In the end, everyone actually believed in him, giving people the feeling that he could actually defeat the big boss without sacrificing anything. The plot was just flat and finished. So what does it have to do with the clue at the beginning that he wanted to "die heroically"? It can't mean that the big boss is dead, right? 5. There are actually very few plots before the cycle. The protagonist destroys old friends in the old team in order to keep them alive. Everything about the protagonist team before the resurrection is pieced together through the dialogue of the supporting characters. It feels very fragmented. The protagonist and Gong who interest me most originally met in the arena. How did they develop into teammates in the future? How did you get the other team members together? The description of the present is very good, but the background feels very vague, and the change of everyone's feelings towards the protagonist is also a bit abrupt. From the initial trust and admiration to the later betrayal and abuse, it gives the impression that the protagonist saved everyone with one operation, and the protagonist suddenly has a group of insiders, suddenly has a clone to help, and everyone suddenly believes in him. So the verbal abuse the protagonist encountered at the beginning is nothing (and I feel sorry for the protagonist's previous experience of being abused) Due to various doubts, I feel that the author finished the novel in a hurry and did not unfold everything. However, it is still a very complete novel, but there are some regrets and unclear parts. Congratulations on the completion. The above are some questions I have after reading the full text. If you have any answers, please feel free to discuss and answer them (actually, I am too stupid to understand the clues and plots, but I can feel the motivations of the characters and the interaction between settings).

I feel that there are still many things that have not been explained, such as the system, such as the colonel's parents. I thought General Wei would appear. As mentioned before, General Wei is dead, so he should not believe it. There are also Yingying and the others. The explanation is not particularly clear. It does not explain how Staff Jin and the others got in touch, and why they founded the Salvation Society? Moreover, the talk about the alliance and the new world is too one-sided. I feel that there should be important information that has not been written. Why do the upper-level villains of the alliance have so few appearances? Attack's identity as a singer, why he went to the new world, and the ten previous teammates, and even two of them don't know the names. It feels like there is a lot of foreshadowing and no explanation. It ended too hastily. Of course, it's pretty good-looking.

I didn't understand it, that's my problem, but I ordered it all and finally finished it. It felt so grand that my brain couldn't keep up.

The people who read this book are amazing. Obviously, every scene does not give people the feeling of watering down, but the plot progress is slow. Many times, I lost my temper and skipped several chapters, and it was almost seamless. There was no cost of understanding.

I really want to watch the plot between Chu Sen and Fu Shanying [please]. Finally, I hope Xiao Nian and Brother Han will be together forever.

It depends on Chu Sen and his wife ah ah ah ah

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At the end, scattering flowers [bursts of tears] [bursts of tears] [bursts of tears] [vomits blood] I really want to know where the mycelium comes from, there are so many unsolved mysteries. And the future of this world [Hold your thighs] The author's writing is so beautiful! ! I really like the feeling of the author watching the protagonist use his brain to decipher the secrets in the author's novel, but I can't understand it at all! [Spread flowers]