
[Honkai: Star Rail + Genshin Impact] The Legendary Sword Champion, but in Teyvat
[崩铁+原神]剑首传奇,但是在提瓦特
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Haoba, we Yunwu are finally reunited. Ps: id is only for screenwriters who don't know how to present [dog head]
After reading it, I had a feeling that I didn't know what to say. In fact, I was a fan of Yunwu at the beginning. I had never played the game, so I just watched the fandom and fell in love with it. Later, I played the game and met Luofu General Jingyuan. I had a subtle feeling that, ah, Jingyuan is really over 800 years old and has been a general for a long time. Later, I watched his CV and other side plots. I had always focused on the Cloud Five period, and then I truly realized that the past has passed, the dead will not come back, and mistakes have been made that cannot be changed. People can only move forward carrying the burden and shadow of the past, get to know new people, build new bonds and feelings, and have a future that is not affected by the past. I'm not very good at speaking, and I don't know how to describe my feelings, but my wife's writing is really great. I can feel the emotion and really move towards the future.
I finished reading it in one sitting before, but after reading it, I felt empty every day! ! ! ! I really didn't see enough, so I reviewed it again. Teacher, your writing is really awesome! ! I don't have much culture, but I really like the part where Yanqing opens Zhouben! ! ! ! Although Xiaoyan, the demonic body, is really miserable, it is really touching. . (Words are poor) And the teacher is not going to develop several settings of this extra chapter (rubbing hands)
I saw this article by Mr. Hexing when I was scanning the rankings a few months ago. It has been a long time since I played Yuan. My memory of the original plot has gradually faded, and I have played it intermittently. My impression ends with Funina (I really like Xiao Shui, so I am satisfied with Yuan after finishing her chapter in the main plot). In a blink of an eye, the teacher was finished and dinner was ready! Since I read the entire article in one go, I simply opened a word document and recorded comments while reading. It will definitely look strange to ramble on like this, so please forgive me. (It's a lot of nonsense, I'm very sorry. I dare say there will be more unfocused words and divergent nonsense. If the teacher reads it, it must be a waste of precious time in life... Well, I don't know how long it will be wasted. I hope it won't take too long. Let's do a Doxiazao orz here first.) The first thing I heard about was traveling through time. Xiao Yanzi looked very young, omg, there is probably no conflict between being trapped in the devil's shadow and being blessed by the medicine master. If I hadn't traveled through Teyvat, I wouldn't have dared to think about it... I looked through the catalog and looked at it, it seemed so easy and effortless, but the word "Farewell" in Chapter 60 made my heart skip a beat. What a good word. I am more and more curious about the direction of the story. The first meeting between Yanqing and Xingqiu resembles the case of Solomon's paternity judgment in the Bible. I wonder if the teacher learned from it. It's so wonderful. I feel that Yanbao's blond hair has the holy light of the King of Wisdom (no). I heard that Yan Qing is very similar to the characters in Shen Qiu Shi Jian Lu or some other book. It was a coincidence that they became friends. (I haven't typed Yanbao's name on the computer for a long time, and the input method has changed back to the old way. I have to remember to catch the bug again) It's a pity that Beng Tieli didn't see Yanqing playing easily with friends of about the same age until Yunli appeared, let alone childhood sweethearts. I can't imagine how cute these two cute creatures would be as friends. However, from a business perspective, it may be to prevent the character from being bundled with CP in advance, which shows that our Yanqing does have a promising future. The interaction between Yanqing and Xingqiu written by the teacher is weird and cute. Feijian may be closer to the research of the Fontaine Academy of Sciences, because it feels more clever than the research of Xumi. He started out as a fool and had a good personality but was packaged as a beautiful, strong and miserable character by the system. He made friends in a low-key manner and then was exposed as a "villain" by his colleagues. It was wonderful, wonderful, it really felt like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. I am a layman and I like to watch this. This is very Yanqing. After the plot of Jingliu, many people said that Yanbao was innocent and evil. I think he is the kind of person who already has comprehensive values at a young age (Jingyuan is really good at teaching children, but it is so stressful for both of them to watch, sigh). He can distinguish right from wrong very early, and has complete value judgments and weighing methods. So he will agree to be the villain of the system in order to achieve his goal, and at the same time he will try to be friendly to everyone. He is not a bit dark at all. This kid has a very hard core - all of the above make it easier for him to hit me hard when he plays a cute and charming villain. Teacher, you are so good at it... Yanqing's attitude when making friends is also very interesting. He is very friendly to everyone in Teyvat. When making friends, he didn't seem to think about "I might not see these people again if I go back" (at least not yet) (at least not yet) (maybe he has a heavy mentality when doing tasks, just to gain favor, haha). This is also a very open-minded Yanzi style. It doesn't refer to the image of "the old king and the swallow in front of the hall". I want to think about how to say it. The young man Yun Qi who conquers the world is like a free and easy swallow. Most of the time, he seems to be carefree, but he cares about his own nest. In this article, the nest is probably the embrace of the master, hit www. Although at first I felt that Yanqing's painting style would be too different from that of the Fools, but after looking at it for a while, I found that it fits perfectly. You don't need to make yourself look like the Fools, you just need to make the Fools look like the Yunqijun (no). I like the teacher's story about Yanqing's neither humble nor overbearing attitude in getting along with his colleagues. The lively, steady, wise and courageous little boss is so adorable. It turns out that the healing power is caused by the contamination of strange objects. In fact, even if the teacher directly said that the medicine man appeared and personally blessed the body with sixteen blessings, the fertility formula activated the in-situ incarnation of the fertility order, we would not have any objection (making violent remarks). It's great that little Yanzi can breastfeed and spank now. There is still a time lag between master and apprentice, and it is really sad that a white-haired person has to send a blond person to a single person in the middle. Wait, Yanqing's sword was not broken. Could it be that the system accidentally found the wrong one? Jing Heyan actually came from parallel time and space... In the end, the system sent them back which was equivalent to breaking them up. Uhhhh, let me just stop thinking about it. How can someone be so dedicated to picking out the fictitious blade and eating it? I can substitute Jingyuan's Liyue clothes directly into his regular clothes. Not to mention, his armor looks like a lion's skin when he wears it. In the animation of Fei Xiao, he is really a skinny several hundred years old young man wearing regular clothes. Looking at it, it feels like Fei Xiao can beat ten Jingyuan hahh. Seeing that the name was the little dead soul, the DNA moved again, and began to chant Youlan Luru's cry, uh, stop it, don't go off topic. However, the teacher wrote that Yanzi and his colleagues were like singing red and white faces, and it was finally our turn for Yanzi to show the title of the villain. It was such a strong visual sense. I don't know if I've misremembered it or if I just imagined it, but I seem to have seen system-related memes in Bengtie's copywriting, that is, higher civilizations may disguise themselves as systems to defraud lower civilizations in the world. Speaking of which, there are humanities on Luofu, so will there be system texts (Cosmic Cat Cat Head. Jpg). The fourth paragraph of Chapter 19 has an extra word "I'm afraid" (it can be ignored, it feels like it would be troublesome to change it, so it's not necessary). Fengruo is so easy to use. I really don't know who will be the first between Xiaoyanzi and Yuanyuan. The sourness added by the teacher is like vinegar on dumplings. It's awesome. Healthy love is sweet, but the rainbow after the storm is even more moving. Okay, I admit that I just wanted to see Yan Qing cry to Jing Yuan. This chapter was written with too much tension (that tone). It's so awesome. Really, I think Mr. Hexing's heart-to-heart talk was written better than the official part in Suiyang's mission. Since the Ghost Hunting Team was present, Yanqing definitely couldn't let go of himself completely, so he couldn't say "I messed everything up, it's all my fault", but I think he needed to say this once to let Jingyuan fight him back, instead of just "Yanqing wouldn't draw his sword against me for such a reason." The biggest feeling I have about the Yanjing master-disciple team is that they are closed in. The tacit understanding of everything is of course a point of criticism for them, but they have always been "closed" and never "released". Under the long-term official high blood pressure and various operations, it even makes people feel depressed. From the perspective of Yanqing's only fans, before 2.5, These two people have almost become a big pressure cooker and a small pressure cooker in my eyes... If you change this paragraph into a script and make it into a fan animation short film, I don't know how many Yanchus can be saved from the fire and water, and it will surely save all sentient beings. The interweaving of this memory killing is a wonderful touch. Except for the dialogue, the sentences describing the scenes and the psychological activities are superb. This chapter of Mr. Tsuruki is really a dream come true, and I feel completely satisfied. Yanqing's cat-like smile... Cat-like smile, so cute - this is what I scrolled through on my phone today, and I fainted with relief. Xingqiu, you did a great job. You are worthy of being Teacher Zhenyu. Now you have made your debut. There are no bad people who like Yanqing. This is my view of good and evil, Yanmen! (Putting hands together) In the plot, Yanqing often talks about taking care of the general's worries. I think he has a sense of political worries to some extent. There are intricate things like Luofu Longshi and the secret home of the King of Medicine, Dan Dingsi. As a guard of the general, he probably has some knowledge in his mind, but it is only superficial. He can't think of too many twists and turns. He can react immediately if the adults give a little advice. The teacher's description of his actions and Yanqing's response are absolutely amazing. He smiled and was fascinated. He came back to his senses after seeing the classic sayings of the tree people. Yes, yes, what is the relationship between the swordsman of the fools and Yan Qing of the resistance army. The chat record of Yuzhao in the master-disciple group is so cute. Good guy, Yanbao can also send raw stones to players, give me a big guarantee so that I can be sure to get them out, and I will get the raw stones back immediately (I was daydreaming, and the reason why I only slept for five hours at night found www). The swordsman is a wet nurse, hahahaha, no, let me laugh for a while, teacher, you are such a genius. Speaking of which, this Fertile Passive is really useful. It can cure anything. If word spreads about it, there may be NPCs who will worship the little pharmacist from Teyvat when they see it. It's so exciting to confront the God of Thunder, and the foreshadowing of the imperial duel is revealed here. Yanqing is super handsome, and Mr. Hexing is the god of Shuangwen, right? It makes sense, it's awesome, and the battle is cool in Wuhu. This section is like a decisive battle at the top of the Forbidden City. Asking the heart to prove the truth, Ying said that Yanzi is the farthest from eternity and asked me to pull out a knife. For a young man, growth is ongoing all the time. He will not be still. He is running towards the unknown future at every moment, so he is far away from the static eternity of the shadow. But to a certain extent, he may be very close to eternity. I think the demon body is a kind of stillness that is stuck at the end. That is, they could have died and been buried, or continued to live and their mentality changed every day, but the demon body is like half-dead, and the state of mind falls into delirium. I don't dare to think about what would have happened if Yan had not crossed this world line. Jing Yuan was so heartbroken when he saw Yanqing starting to use Dakai Dahe to exchange injuries for injuries. The correct way to use infinite resurrection, ugh. Oh, I saw Jing Yuan's psychological activities, the vision of the double-edged sword, the teacher's great prophet, the shadow of Wuji Feiguang really appeared on Yan Qing, making the sun yellow and the moon warm, and frying the life... Fortunately, Xiao Yanzi and Jing Yuanyuan were watching, Jing Yuan's teachings were reassuring, if Yan had been lost once, if Jing would never make the same mistake again. The young knight-errant put himself to death and later realized that he had no regrets. After Xingtian Yanwu came out, the official meaning was almost the same. Wait, General Sanwu, oh why did I suddenly start to think about what fancy name Yanqing would get if he became a general:) Wow, this direct confession is so pure love! ! ! He was caught off guard and knocked unconscious by the cute little swallow's straight ball. He is such a transparent boy, and everything he does is based on his heart. Teacher Hexing's Yanqing is so good. Children who grow up in love will always reciprocate love boldly and enthusiastically. It's a pity that some hundreds of years old people didn't see it clearly. It's really difficult to deal with it from Jing Yuan's point of view. The people Yan Qing is closest to, admires, and cares about are all Jing Yuan, but Jing Yuan has so much more life experience than him, so they are not equal from the beginning, but this wave can be regarded as Jing Yuan's appearance. Yanqing's attitude is so cute. Love is love. The love between them does not need to be denied and cannot be denied. There is no need to use the world's definition of love to formulate formulas. All you need to know is that you want to be with this person for the rest of your life. Take the famous meme for example, "I can't be your master, adoptive father, idol, and lover at the same time..." "Well, why not?" Is this right? That's right, and the opposite is also true. Why can't Jing regard Yan as his apprentice, adopted son, weakness, concern, and lover? Jingyuan looked like he didn't dare to say, "Let's try it, so that you know that your feelings for me are not love." The dignified General Shence would not think of the reason why it is better to block things. It shows that he does not have a clear conscience. He is probably worried that his old house will catch fire if he does not stand firm. (Many times, I seriously misinterpret the author's intention. In CP articles, I will automatically make up my mind to express my love for you, and unconsciously I will favor me and recommend private Marseilles:) After all, Mr. Hexing is very good at writing straight shots. As expected of Jingyuan, he can handle this. This is not the kind of thing that a child comes back from school and sings, "Dad, you have a hard time at work, please have a cup of tea." It is the straightforward pursuit of a young man named Zhong Ling Yuxiu. It is known that the one who played with Yanqing since they were young is Zhuma, so why is it not considered Zhuma when Jingyuan raises Yanqing? Also, it is known that Tianxiang appears after the story begins, so why is Yanqing's confrontation with Jingyuan not considered Tiansheng. Since ancient times, Zhuma has been defeated by Tianxiang, but Zhuma is him and Tianxiang is also him. In conclusion, he will win. What a hearty argument, Q. E. D. The forum style is really interesting, it's interesting to write and look at, and the easter eggs are very interesting (like it). Does the "wife" in the wife-chasing crematorium in the fanfic refer to Jing Yuan... Gk's heart was broken again qaq recalled some bad memories for a while (I couldn't let it go). I seem to have an impression of this girl Liudashka. It seems that the ending is not good? It seems to be the Lei Ying who was beaten to death by the traveler. I was too quick to complete the mission, but it warmed my heart to see her have such a happy ending in the teacher's writing. It wasn't until the Winter Night Fool's Play came out that I realized that the lady was not there. My god, the teacher wrote it in such an immersive way. I had a vague memory of the original plot and almost forgot that this was not the original direction. I was shocked when I saw the lady speak www. The funeral turned into a pure group meeting, and the results were handed over on the spot, which was still full of fun. There are a lot of jokes among colleagues. Yanzi uses public funds for personal use without any pretense, which saves him from the trouble of accounting (Yun Bei). The mental state of the cellphone-eating guy on the forum is the same as someone dug up from Bengtie Universe, xs. The Hearth House made my eyes twitch when I read it. The lady and the servants were so kind to the children. Old Rice was so evil. It was so warm and cozy. The teacher wrote it more movingly than a razor blade. I like the chemistry between Yanqing and the servant. The servant is so patient with the young Yanqing and even takes the initiative to warn her that she is so gentle. Is interfering with travelers' actions constrained by heaven's laws? I have never felt that Paimon's classic lines were so terrifying. The atmosphere is so bizarre and dreamy. Yanbao calls Sora's name and the following dialogue into the main line. Maybe it won't be against the rules. Players will just fall into brainstorming - at least I probably will. I guess there are a lot of uncertainties and everyone will curse God together. It's not a kind of dumpling making. Yan Qing looked a little weak in front of Jing Yuan. He seemed to be in the fear of "messing everything up" again. Oh, it was so sour. How could Yan Guo Wuhen be rejected? I doubt that Xiao Yanzi was affected to some extent. Genius! It's really a tragic past, misguided and stubborn, but the "villain" is gone. The main plot of the Flower Goddess's Birthday Festival can be changed to be so interesting. It is very interesting to find the subject of the dream. The plot was originally smooth and calm, but the variables added by the teacher were like adding two more catfish, which made it more exciting. How did you come up with the homophone of extraordinary intelligence? It made me laugh. Could it be that she is really a beet? Okay, once again I am sure that Mr. Hexing is a genius. The hypothesis of Yanqing Daci Shuwang in the forum easter egg makes me happy to death. It would be so beautiful if Yanqing's hair grew as long as the Great Ci Tree King. Then she puts on a white robe, so holy... I push her to be purified. Oh my god, the Flower Goddess Birthday Festival copy belongs to the type that gradually gets better and better. This development is eye-catching, reasonable and unexpected. This copy is very suitable for reading in one sitting. Nasida's Grass Knight and the skirmishers who killed her are very fresh and fresh in the places that are similar but different from the original plot. The teacher's writing has an orthodox two-dimensional flavor, just like watching anime. The description of Skirmishers trying to change the past is very RPG. The repetition of the first sentence makes people think of a float, but this one is longer and more impactful. If the pixel dialog box is refreshed piece by piece, the effect will be particularly great. The sense of despair is comparable to that of 486 and Homura, who are nicknamed the Samsara Suicide Squad. It is much higher than the disastrous performance of the original plot that was criticized. At first glance, the grandfather clock that appears in reincarnation reminds me of the Magic Circle, especially the ever-increasing red thread. Homura keeps going back in time to save Madoka, but the cause and effect is like a thread wrapped around Madoka. But the plot that follows is so outrageous and breathtaking. I seem to be able to find all the common female memes in this article. Will I get ABO and flower vomiting if I continue reading? Such a rich imagination, this dislocated universe puts Marvel at a disadvantage, the teacher is a fangirl at the level of the Envoy of Joy, Pinoconi invaded Teyvat this time. The stalks are so dense that I'm going to choke to death... It's so good to grow grass. The land of the Grass God is all grass... The three-phase goddess should refer to the three sisters of Moi Lai, expressing the trap of destiny spinning. The grandfather clock is indeed related to concepts such as the law of cause and effect, time and destiny. However, there is no clue as to what the relationship between the bicorn fluke and the snail is and the Doctor. Is the manipulator behind it the system, the law of nature, or something else? The Doctor is being used as a tool to stir up trouble. It's ridiculous. Oh, the time ruler here is like the mastermind behind the scenes, and has hit a blind spot. He has no understanding of the plot related to Istaru. Let's look at it again. Maybe mentioning her name here is symbolic. Zhou's animation is so vivid, and Yan Bao is indeed going to be trapped in the devil's yin (crying). So, in fact, the effects of demonic yin and strange object pollution are almost complementary. Maintaining normality is actually the effect of the Teyvat law. The Teyvat law such as time governance uses the method of tracing back individual time to help suppress this pollution that is equivalent to taboo knowledge. The memory loss may be due to the gradual deletion of cloud data during the formatting process, so the burning of the World Tree is probably like the firewall being removed, and the virus immediately invades and forcibly terminates the formatting process. "Return of the Wraith" has a great feeling and ghostly feel to it, and it completely hits my strike zone. I really like it. The selfless and altruistic mechanism of adding blood to both the enemy and the enemy is also very rich, which is exactly the style of the pharmacist. ... Sure enough, this is the way to go. The plot of the grandfather paradox is that Jing Hui will travel through time because of the broken sword he got in the future, so he creates a broken sword and sends it back to the past. Is this how you understand it? Do you want to exchange lines that almost led me to the Dragon Clan, private Marseille www. It's not surprising that the original world consciousness is the boss, but I'm a little surprised that the system is not in the villain camp at the moment (I've read too many routine articles and am always the first to list the system as the number one suspect:) The teacher underestimates his own worldview, which is very logical and self-consistent. This is super expansion in a positive sense (nod). Although there are still some confusions if you think about it carefully. For example, why did Malice-chan make a deal with Jing? Maybe I didn't understand it, but the villain's chances of winning were too great at that time. If Yan had died, the villain would have won directly, and would he have offered to keep Jing in Teyvat in exchange for Yan's safety? From the villain's point of view, allowing the protagonist to complete a simple robbery seems to be like forgetting to pay the phone bill and having his IQ shut down. In addition, the bugs in combat mechanics are somewhat difficult to ignore. Since a star god like Lan is full of malicious intent, and the teacher set the character of the Bengtie Universe to be greater than Teyvat, it is not very reasonable for Jing Yuan's memory in the Bengtie Universe to be erased after the fate exchange. This is not because Chu Zihang was captured by Odin, but the fate of the high-level universe is slightly violated by the power of another system. But the above are all small cases. I think the teacher is great because of the self-consistency of logic. Without careful consideration, there will be no doubts at all. It is easy to follow the teacher's ideas. In other words, the plot development is not abrupt at all, and it is a very successful fic. The mastermind behind the scenes appears, falls into a big crisis, emergency response delays the arrival of the decisive battle, looks for a way to break the situation, and the situation is reversed. It is a pretty standard way to end an adventure story. The accelerated pace itself tends to make people have no time to think about the rationality of their actions. Anyway, if you can win this way, it will be over. I personally think this is a very correct way to handle it. Many times the villain is too strong and cannot be whittled away. What the creator has to do is to whittle the villain into a smart one, and the teacher can whittle him very well. After watching Extra 3, I finally have a positive description of Jing's psychological activities from Jing's perspective. The text is basically Yanqing's gaze on Jing. After reading the sequel, I'm not sure what Jing's attitude is. It seems that he still loves Yanqing. It's true that they are going both ways, which is good. Fu Xuan recalled the inexplicable afternoon more than ten years ago, hh, it was a hundred years of loneliness. Abo really showed up... I've finished reading. Thank you teacher for bringing this wonderful story. Regardless of my personal shortcomings, everything else is great. I like all the plots except the emotional scenes, especially the design of the climax. (Emotional scenes are also very good. I just can't accept mud and other elements due to taste reasons. My attack and control attributes are a bit deep, so I will avoid talking about them as much as possible.) The teacher's writing style is very beautiful, and the plot arrangement is so sophisticated that it doesn't even seem like it's the first time he writes a novel. My favorite part is the heart-to-heart talk between master and apprentice and the duel before the emperor. The ending style of several chapters of the Xumi dungeon is also very amazing. It has the flavor of a strange story about rules. If you think about it carefully, you will be afraid that the chapter will break. It is too clever. There is no missing link in any place that should be igniting. Every time the plot reaches the climax, it is irritating. I admire the teacher's ingenuity. The descriptions of Pv and Zhou Ben are very full of game copywriting, and some metaphors such as "a stone brick road covered with frosting" are also very beautiful. Reading it feels like watching an animation (I think I said this, but the teacher's language is really vivid). Back to the topic, after all, I read this article with the mentality of Yan Qing's only fan. If Yan's growth is really cute, he finds a clear conscience from the tough and fragile self-exploration, and breaks and then stands up. The boy's biggest setback is his own death, and the fault is not his own, but ifyan still falls into self-blame for not being strong enough. The result is similar to the original plot of the one-on-one challenge to Yunwu. Although there is no pusher from Suiyang to help the master and apprentice talk, the teacher's Yanzi is more open-minded than the original, so he is more willing to confide and seek spiritual support from those close to him. The fate of the friends I met along the way was changed by Yanqing, and Yanqing's own fate was also subtly changed. (I just finished watching the last episode, and the app suddenly crashed. So I'm writing while recalling, hoping that the gap in reading comprehension will not be too different.) It's not a loss at all to read the title of the novel, "Legend of the Sword Head". The entire article is a legend created by Xiao Yanzi in Teyvat. Over-interpreting it in the direction of comparative value, the final boss is a malicious sauce based on the false sky, which is like the image of an eggshell. "The bird has to break free from its shell, and the egg is the world." Breaking the shackles of pretense, the young man moves forward to an infinitely bright future. End.
Woohoo, I suddenly thought that it would be a joke if Yanqing took the demonic form first. Yanqing has been strengthening himself, (I want to make a big extra story about Yanqing taking the demonic form first)
Okay zzz, (facepalm) I once called a character in zzz by the wrong name several times because I couldn't remember it. No one else pointed it out, or to be precise, I didn't say anything. But when I found out the truth, I was really embarrassed. It's too shameful to call him the wrong character with just two words. I really like the impact of zzz, it's very friendly to me I still have something to say, when will JJ allow the PC to watch welfare extras? I'm going to protest
I finally finished reading it... I can't tell you what I'm feeling, but the only thing in my mind is, awesome. How can you make so many jokes so funny and be sensational at the same time? Every time that memory crosses my mind, I feel so weak... Oh, master and disciple, oh, I really cried and laughed at the same time. What is pure love? This is pure love.
Yeyunwu team building, although it is zzz, but the team name has a cloud, so it is still Yunwu, no problem? If everyone here is on the same level, if the migrant worker Jingyuan and the migrant worker Yanqing come here, will they have a chance to face each other? XD Then Jingyuan might think of the past Yunwu and the possible future, and feel sad in silence (
One thing to say, I am very interested in the pair of brave demon kings. One is fishing, and the other is eager to conquer his own crusade. They are not OOC at all (laughing)
Hiss... That couple playing with ghost marriage is so sexy (wipes the corner of the mouth)