I Became an Insectoid While Chasing Idols

The author added a big tag with Zerg. Is it because there are so few people that I can't find it? It's really nice.

What about the house on Earth? Can't we redeem it first? It's also a souvenir of the past so many years.

It feels like reading an outline 🐶 In fact, many causes and consequences do not need to be introduced so clearly. These can be reflected in the heart through the language and demeanor of various characters, which will be more interesting. I hope the author will write more about the storyline, dialogue, etc., Or write more about the appearance of the protagonist, the appearance of other people, etc. It will look better this way 🤩

It's normal for the author to be cold in his writing. After all, the author's writing actually looks quite average. The plot template is classic, the emotional line is unremarkable, and the language is ordinary. There are no big flaws but no highlights either. It can be said that it's normal to be disappointed. Either the language at the beginning is flexible and the humor is attractive enough, or the plot setting is attractive, otherwise it will be easily buried.

Changing the name but not changing the whole name will look really weird to new readers_(:з∠)_ Xiao Yu suddenly had to endure it and just treated it as a nickname, so this chapter just didn't make sense. Is there a saying that Zerg characters require foreign names? I don't understand. If this is the case, can't you add a plot to overdo it? For example, the original name was a certain Yu, but after the Zerg came, it was changed to a foreign name given by the parents. However, according to this chapter, the family thought the original name was not bad, so they used it as a nickname. Or maybe the original name is Hexia. Xiaoyu was the name given by the parents back then, but now it is used as a nickname. Alas, this article is finished. It's not that I can't understand it. If I don't want to change it, I won't change it_(:з∠)_

I feel like the setting is pretty good, but the rest of the article is like a running account, and the plot development is too straightforward.

Why doesn't Ifill let Hesia help his brother sort out his mental energy?

These few pictures suddenly became a little wet, not that attractive, and the rising relationship between the two people was not written out, so it was a bit confusing, which is a pity.

It seems that the Zerg system has been deformed for thousands of years. The protagonist's health has not been affected by living on the earth. On the contrary, the male insects living on the insect star have more needs. I don't think this is right. The Zerg system must be backward at times, but it certainly does not mean that it is all loopholes. If there is nothing right, it will be internally destroyed long ago. Moreover, when the protagonist comes out of the orphanage, modern people do not have a comprehensive and healthy body 🐶

Is the author's birthday on October 30th? Happy belated birthday [Rose]