Harry Potter: Side by Side

I really want to see the story of the heroine after Voldemort's death.

Marvelous! The heroine who not only has the means but also has both online business, there is no plot of misunderstanding between the Virgin Heart and the hero and heroine! ! I like it very much. The author's writing style is also very nice.

Wow wow wow, I found a treasure article

"Happiness" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Probably convinced

Dear, catch the bug, 73.37% In chapter 30, probably in the fourth row, comfort is wrong, it should be stability

Finished spreading flowers! The characterization of Mrs. Zuo is very good!

This article is short, but it gives people quite a surprise. I think the work's overall approach to Riddler's strategy is very reasonable. Among the HP fans I have read so far, I personally think that there are two reasonable strategies that can be summarized for Lao Fu. One is the heroine Xiao Baihua, who takes the path of a sweet cookie with healing love interests. Generally speaking, it is reasonable and can be scored. However, because Laofu Ren is suspected of being OOC, and the writing is quite satisfactory and there is nothing too exciting about it. The other is that the heroine is very powerful and can fight with Lao Fu and be on par with her. This "power" not only refers to physical strength, but also includes the spiritual level. However, there are relatively many heroines who are outstanding in their ability to fight evil with evil and are equally matched (I have seen 4-5 books so far), but there are very few heroines who can complement each other on a spiritual level (I have only read 1 book so far, which one is that big). I think this book can be divided into the second path. The overall idea used in the strategy is relatively reasonable and can highlight the subjectivity of the heroine. By the way, the line of "hating the sea and loving the sky, and repaying it with the body of clay" is not my aesthetic point. Although this book is short in length, it is well detailed. In just a few chapters, the basic life story and development process before entering school are explained. The emotional line with Riddle is also well managed. It can be seen that in fact, it is very difficult to discuss further in many places, and the judgment of the abrupt end is quite good. The unfolding clues are all well done. It belongs to the kind of "got all the points that should be scored, and tried to avoid the points that shouldn't be deducted." It can be regarded as a relatively good writing practice article within the scope of ability.

Dear author, here I come. Such a good article, why don't you have any comments? [Shy]

Tie! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

It's beautiful, but it's gone now?