Silenced

I read this article very well in the early stage, and thought the author had a very big idea, but in the later stage, it was just anticlimactic, with no explanation at all as to why the heroine lost her memory, and I don't know why she gave up, given her original heaven-level strength. The most important thing is that Shi Beigu can be said to have been betrayed twice. But I was just angry for a few days and I just brushed it off. The status of the two heroines was never equal from the beginning to the end. Gu. Like a person in control from start to finish. It would be outrageous to pick up an orc at random and use it as a dog. The whole thing is the Riddler from beginning to end, and I don't know why he has to hide it from the other heroine. Shi also couldn't understand what he was doing from beginning to end. It can be said that it was because of his cunning act of causing himself to lose his memory that so many people died. I don't know why the Gu family was wiped out. The Gu family was wiped out, and the other two families, the Guo family and the Liu family, didn't seem to know about the relationship with the court. The charming heroine who plays everyone from beginning to end has absolutely no need to make herself lose her memory, but instead makes it very difficult for herself. This article is great from the early days. In the later stages, I couldn't stand it more and more, and I always thought that the author could do it. Is there any particularly good way to bring everything back together? I didn't expect that it would end up being a mess in the end. I feel that the emotional development of the female patron and the female host Shi is not smooth at all, as if they jumped directly. I feel that I have been taking advantage of Shi and not putting Shi on an equal footing. Are the first two star gods dead or not? Or maybe there was no explanation of what happened. How did Shangting appear? There was no explanation. It feels like torture for the sake of torture. So many people died for the heroine, but there was absolutely no need to die. How did horror appear? No one said either. The whole article is confusing, from beginning to end. The introduction of the Mirror World at the end really felt like a complete failure. The biggest feeling after reading the whole article is that it is difficult to understand. It was obviously developed very well in the early stage, but in the end it was completely unclear. It felt like a different person was writing it. The target is Qiangqiang, but I feel that the female lead Shi is completely unworthy of this title. And female patrons feel like men wearing women's skin. Every time I hurt another heroine in the name of your good. I'm really upset.

Why. The writing in the early stage is really good, and the setting is interesting, but in the middle stage, you will find that the emotional line is basically followed, and the plot line is stagnant. Moreover, this emotional line is not coherent, but suddenly "□□" at a node. The accumulation of previous interactions cannot support the two protagonists' relationship from "qualitative change" to "quantitative change". In the later period, the problem was even bigger. The plot line was forced by the emotional line. The three parties of District 13, the other side, and the Terror Bureau had so many clues strung together, but they suddenly threw away the clues and started fighting inexplicably. Including the concept of "Shangting" introduced in the middle and later stages, it was too sudden and too late. It was not mentioned at all before, and then it became the existence of the final boss. As for the concept of "Mirror World" that was introduced around the same time, I think its introduction time was reasonable, and there were foreshadowings in the past. It was a very good concept, but it was a pity that it was abandoned like this. Another reader and I have very similar views, and both regret this good start. But I feel it's unlikely that the author will revise it again.

It felt a little rushed. The setting was very good and there were quite a lot of emotional scenes. I skipped some emotional scenes and rushed over to watch the final battle. The final battle ended too quickly.

😭 😭 😭 😭 Chapter 3 "My powers never go wrong", the boomerang comes here, right? You have no intention 😭 😭 😭

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God, why do I stay up late every day watching it?

Ah? [ Bursts into tears ] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh The ending! Not at all! Not perfect!

I really cried to death 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Every one of them is so alive!

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