The unserious version:
Aives felt like the unluckiest person alive. Even going to heaven was different for him!
Looking at all the monsters and demons in heaven, he nearly fainted. Where the heck had he ended up?
He worked diligently to get home, earnestly completing the tasks assigned by the big shots. But the setting kept changing: the Last Judgment, the Trojan War, Ragnarok... Why wasn't any of it his old home, Earth?
Lucifer: I think you need my help.
Aives: I suspect you're the traitor. You're everywhere!
Lucifer: That's a very hurtful thing to say.
Staring at that dazzlingly handsome face, Aives unashamedly gave in: You're handsome, so whatever you say must be right.
The serious version:
Aives stumbled into an absurd transmigration. Heaven had lost its holiness, angels had become uncanny, and the faces of the gods were twisted and unfamiliar. One careless glance nearly tore his soul to shreds.
He watched from the sidelines as a vortex of love and hate unfolded...
Yet that tiny spark of defiance in his heart burned fiercely in his frail body.
The brilliant Morning Star hung high in the sky, beautiful and beyond reach, almost a sin in itself. If he could bask in his radiance, would being burned alive count as a kind of salvation?
Sugar-coated poison. At the end of sweetness lay eternal damnation.
One glimpse of the radiant Morning Star was enough to turn all his resolve to dust. He knew it was like drinking poison to quench his thirst, but he still craved that moment of warmth.
At last, his fingertips touched the starlight beyond his reach. Spending every last ounce of strength and luck, he drew the falling star into his arms, as though embracing the entire dazzling universe.
But God said, "Aives, all that meets the eye is illusion. Do not ask, do not seek. What is destined cannot be changed."
Reader's Guide:
1. This story throws together all kinds of mythology, with plenty of original worldbuilding. Readers who care about strict accuracy, beware!!! I'll say it again: readers who care about strict accuracy, beware!
2. The prose is a little wordy. Please bear with me, QAQ.
3. Very melodramatic, extremely melodramatic! Readers with strong preferences about romantic purity, beware!! If you love a love triangle showdown, you have to read this~~
4. The romance is complicated, but it ends with a one-on-one pairing!
Theme: The road is long, but you are my destination.
It's so good-looking 🐰 I hope it can be finished 🙏 🙏 I've been fooled by the few articles I've read recently 😭
The sole of my foot slipped and fell into the pit (crying)
Come on, author [Spread Flowers] It's very beautiful
The protagonist is a good boy who values loyalty.
The image of this angel is very interesting! There are also some real angels on site B who are actually very scary, while demons are actually beautiful.
"She allowed her child to be abandoned." This is a big bug for the author~ not allowed
Doesn't his brother get time traveled often?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the first chapter is too scary! I was convinced that I had a nightmare and read the novel, but the novel was still a nightmare, Inception, right?
If there is a problem, then from my own perspective, it may be that the pace of the first few pictures is too slow. Of course this is entirely my own opinion. For example, in one of the previous pictures, I remember they were on their way to the third heaven. The protagonist and his brother kept chatting on the road, which took up a lot of space. I felt at the time that the pace was a bit slow. Of course, this can also be explained as the protagonist's need to understand the rules and regulations of heaven. Okay, okay, in short, these are all my opinions. It is up to the author to judge the specifics.
I think my wife wrote it very well. Maybe it's just not the style You are the same, you are the second Hebrew mythology book I have seen written in this style. But it's very interesting. You just give me a very special feeling. Compared with others who are the same, you are very special. But maybe you can try to improve your writing style.