Nest Relocation

Wow oh oh oh oh, finished reading! The whole article reads quite smoothly, but it feels very mature! Both parties have their own loves. Sister Ning, I like her free and easy, sassy and magnanimous style. I am clear-headed about many things, including this marriage and relationship, and I can see a sense of maturity from here. But because it is a relationship, there will always be emotions, so there will be entanglements, sadness, and boredom. With emotions, the story will feel vivid and the characters real. As for classmate Yi, he is also very interesting. He was the first to propose physical marriage, and the first to be moved and take action. Because he wants to be decent and explain, he is still brooding about his past relationship. This kind of repetition is not good in my eyes. However, when he knew that he fell in love with Ning Ning, he acted quickly, firmly and persistently. At the later stage, both parties were willing to go further. At this time, Ning Ning's uncertain attitude (unsure about the other party) further promoted the subsequent story. The whole article did not make people feel heart-wrenching by focusing too much on the entanglement and depression between the two parties, but it clearly wrote about the entanglement and hesitation between the two parties, so the story was told very smoothly. I give the author a thumbs up!!

It is comfortable for rich people to fall in love with each other. It is no longer the old story of Cinderella and the tall, rich and handsome man, the man and woman who eat and drink ~ they are both beautiful people who are drooling at the moment hahahaha

The full text is actually quite good, but there are two places that may make readers uncomfortable. After all, it is this type of article. First, the wedding room is arranged in Xinghe Bay. As the author said, he was already interested in the girl when he got married. Why has Pink Slippers not dealt with it and arranged the wedding room in a few places? The place where I lived with my ex-girlfriend of 2008 didn't have any other houses and it was far away from where the heroine worked. It was okay if I didn't explain this. In the article, I had to write that the heroine was thinking that even if she was given a bed in the master bedroom to sleep on in Star River Bay, they wouldn't care about the ups and downs they had gone through. The situation between the heroine and the hero in the house before the reader is brought directly to this room is really awkward, and I think this is a bit contradictory to the character of the heroine. From the article, it can actually be seen that the heroine still cares about pink slippers, and it can be seen from her later on that she cares about pink slippers. Regarding the concern of the ex-girlfriend, I think the heroine is actually a very possessive person. Would such a person feel comfortable in a house full of the hero and his ex-girlfriend? Another point is that I feel that the heroine is more tolerant in this relationship. It can be said that in the relationship

The author writes it in big letters, which is nice to read on the one hand, but on the other hand, I really feel that the male protagonist did not lick the female protagonist as much as he did his ex-girlfriend later on. I really think the heroine is right to care and think. There is a difference between a man who is devoted to him and a man who is still thinking about other women. Although the second male lead has some ideological problems, I think he likes the female lead more than the male lead later on.

I don't know how to reply to the author's comment, so I'll reply here. The author asked, what's your mindset when reading this article? It was the copywriting that attracted me to read this article. As I read it, I felt more and more that the article was wrong and uncomfortable. The copywriting gave me the feeling that this was a story about a male protagonist who had trapped himself in a cocoon and regretted not trying to find ways to save himself. It was a kind of meaning of chasing his wife in the crematorium. In short, I initially understood that the copywriting should be about the changes in the male protagonist's mood and the hero's strategies and actions, while the female protagonist was It is a story about being shaken and moved and falling. After reading the article, I felt that the change in the male protagonist's mood towards his ex and the female protagonist was very vague. In fact, the female protagonist is a more emotionally and physically compatible partner for the male protagonist than his ex was to him. However, this level is not shown in the description of the male protagonist's mental state and emotional changes. Basically, this article mainly focuses on the emotional line. What is more important is how the heroine conquers herself, how to conquer the mood and emotional changes of the male protagonist and the heroine, and the feeling of writing the heroine does not require the male protagonist to worry too much. The heroine is always moved by herself and falls into self-strategy. Seeing the male protagonist is like seeing a walking ****... These are really opposite to the feeling given to me by the copywriting, and there are some such as the female protagonist. A 28-year-old working beauty with a strong family background can easily accept the room card of an old man. It is really stupid to force the heroine to write. It is difficult for ordinary working women to accept. Moreover, the heroine is not educated and proud of her family background. She can accept the room card of an old man and go to classes with the old man alone at night. Also, the male protagonist described by the author at the end of the article is not a loyal dog type. He is a dog-licker, but he has been loyal to his ex-girlfriend since the beginning. The former heroine dumped him decisively. He still refused to contact her and wanted to meet her. He even decided to give up on marrying the heroine. After they met again, he chased this dog-licker and gave him a gift. At least compared to his ex-girlfriend's attitude towards him, his licking was obvious. He gave people the impression that he has no sense of propriety and can't handle it. A man who can't let go. If his ex-girlfriend really wants to come back, he can seduce her away without any subtlety. I think this is because the author has no detailed and in-depth interpretation of the change of his mood in the male protagonist's emotional line. He only writes about how the female protagonist conquers and falls. Therefore, the author's few words later about how the male protagonist loves the female protagonist are not impressive. For my part, I didn't see how he fell in love with the heroine, and he felt that the heroine was the right one and the one he loved more. He helped with cooking and pick-up business. These male protagonists can do this to his ex. He only served as a licking dog for the heroine in bed, and the heroine also liked it... He was so blunt that he moved the heroine to a mess. I feel hard to explain. Originally, the heroine was pregnant, and the hero Knowing that happiness is tied to the previous unhappiness, the author really can't describe the male protagonist's happiness. Instead, he can write that it is the compensation for all the unhappiness in the male protagonist's life, rather than the past few years. In the past few years, a male protagonist who had everything going smoothly was just unhappy because his ex-girlfriend broke up. The male and female protagonist's happiness of having a child has to be tied to that little thing about his ex? Is it necessary to mix some sugar into it? I really don't understand it. The author didn't write a few words about the male protagonist's emotional change towards his ex. From those few words, it can only be seen that the male protagonist's feelings for his ex have always been sticky. In the end, when it came to pregnancy, it was easy for the guy who was unhappy in the past few years to just talk about it. It's really unreasonable for my ex-girlfriend to hang on to me. I personally like the author's point of view. It's better to let go of an old relationship than to hold on to it, and also the male protagonist's behavioral concept: stop in time when the hope given by his ex has been shattered. But I think the disillusionment of his ex's hope comes from his ex. The decisiveness on the part no longer gives hope. The more important point is that after I calmed down and settled down, I felt that my ex was not the most compatible one after meeting someone new. I no longer had any hope of reuniting with my ex. I think the latter is the core, and the passiveness of the former is Having to let go after being cut off from hope will leave a lot of regrets and unwillingness to let go, and the latter is the decision that is clear-headed, rational and independent without any regrets and unwillingness, just as the male lead turns back and the female protagonist has made her own carefully considered choice, and what is the male protagonist writing? From the beginning to the end, I feel helpless after my ex dumped me~ This is also something that I feel has nothing to do with the writing. In the final analysis, the male protagonist's emotional line is too sketchy and superficial, and it is really difficult to sympathize with the male protagonist's love for his ex, the female protagonist, and his own inner state of mind. Some, and this is because the female protagonist is good enough to attract the male protagonist, and it is not a reflection of the male protagonist loving the female protagonist more. The copywriting of this article gave me the feeling that the male protagonist's love dominates the male protagonist's love more than the female protagonist, and the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is not even evenly matched. The female protagonist has fallen into quite a lot of self-degradation, and it is not obvious that the male protagonist loves the female protagonist more. This is my highlight. I am just commenting to express my personal opinion. What others think has nothing to do with me.

Does the happiness of having children have to be tied to the unhappiness of previous years? The male protagonist's unhappiness in the past few years was due to the breakup of his ex-girlfriend. Is the love between the female protagonist and the male protagonist a compensation for the male protagonist's frustration and sadness a few years ago when the previous female protagonist broke up? It's so jarring. The author really needs to learn how to describe the emotions, emotions and psychological activities of the male and female protagonists in a way that makes it comfortable to read. There isn't much about the male protagonist in your article that touches people, but there are quite a lot that make people feel upset.

From a practical point of view, it is inevitable for the male and female protagonists to come together. They are of equal strength and are a perfect match. However, from the perspective of the whole story, first, the heroine gave me a very calm feeling in the early stage. Later, when I went to Xinjiang, I was a bit romantic. Second, the male protagonist should have been unwilling to accept the breakup of his ex-girlfriend at the beginning, but in the past year and a half, he is still obsessed with it. However, it fell so quickly after the marriage, which is a bit staggering, because at the beginning, the male protagonist gave me the impression that he was relatively cold, dispensable to his marriage, and careless about the person who was the shopkeeper. I think the ambiguous relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage was well written, but later on it became sweet and sweet and it didn't seem so attractive. But overall, this is a pretty good Marriage First, Love Later article, without any cookie-cutter plot.

Finally, there are some extra stories from the male protagonist's perspective~ Good cheers to the author, I'm looking forward to the extra story about raising a baby, and also to the next book. It's great that a new author has such writing skills, and I'm also very interested in reading the new copywriting. In fact, the beginning of marriage first and then love is basically not going to be good, but they are already bound together at the beginning, which is different from ordinary couples, so no matter what, they will not end it unilaterally like the male protagonist thinks with his ex. After all, there is a divorce procedure, and perhaps the male protagonist has the most previous relationship. What he wants is that he is unwilling to be dumped after unilaterally deciding to do so, but in fact, love relationships are not legally bound like marriage. Falling in love is a matter between two people, and one person can break up. Therefore, what he thinks is a decent farewell has no bearing on the outcome of being dumped by his ex. What impact and change, and what he said to his ex-girlfriend that she had a clear conscience was actually too much worry. His ex-girlfriend did not do anything to make him sorry. She had sincerely devoted herself to him when they were in love. If they were unhappy together, they chose to break up. Their decisive attitude is even more admirable, and even She doesn't even leave herself any way to regret. At least I think her ex-girlfriend is strong and ambitious, which is much better than the male protagonist who can't afford to let go. Although my ex's view of love is a bit strange, this is still admirable. In fact, I feel a little sympathy for her, because in this life, I feel that the latter Regret is very torturous, and the reason why people regret is because their lives are not as good as before. Her ex squatting on the side of the road crying after getting off the car has shown that she regrets her original choice. Her current job is not as good as before, and her current life is not as good as before... Maybe in the days to come... This kind of regret will follow, but it depends on whether she will be happy in her future life, her mentality... And how she will reconcile it. If you don't want regret to always torture yourself, then you should work harder. In fact, the male protagonist has nothing to turn back to. In the article, he thinks that his ex will regret it. It would be unnecessary to look back. When he met his ex again, he was married and pregnant. Even if the male protagonist is single and not with the female protagonist, it is impossible to go back. If the ex is single and the male and female protagonist wants to go back at the beginning, then that is the time to test the male protagonist. To be honest, this article treats the male protagonist There are really not many tests. Basically, the heroine can easily fall into her own trap. Not only is his success close to the water, but he has already had the important result of marriage from the beginning. And how can a male protagonist who is scheming, confident and capable let his prey slip away? What's more, since Sansheng is lucky enough to meet the person who has won countless victories in the world, and is lucky enough to be bound to her by some strange combination of circumstances, even if the female protagonist rejects her as a male protagonist in a romance novel, how can she let go easily? The touching love in the novel and the touching male protagonist basically have their own all-or-nothing persistence. In fact, this persistence Rationally speaking, it is to satisfy his own needs, because she is irreplaceable to him, because he cannot bear to live without her, because his emotional value is only what she gives him that best suits his own needs... Therefore, he instinctively wants to take the initiative to approach her, and instinctively wants to have her, even at all costs, and will not have to ask the heroine to seduce him. Jade sends a signal, only steps forward when you see the hope of success, and you will not care about your pride and self-esteem from the beginning. Love will come when it comes, and care is about calculation. No one wants to pay without response. Self-esteem and pride are not all thrown away, but self-esteem and pride are the last words to let go in front of true love. Blessing, rather than weighing whether you should strive for it at the beginning and pay for it. If the melon is not sweet if you force it, you have to work hard before accepting the result. It is not that you don't want to bother to do it because you don't want to let him see that it can be sweet. After all, it is the male protagonist of a female-channeled romance novel. It can be more charming. The female protagonist decides the lower limit, and the male protagonist decides the upper limit.

It's very interesting, everyone has deep feelings, the setting is very reasonable, and there isn't much description of the male protagonist's love history, which is very good. In fact, many people nowadays care about non-c because the male protagonist is too romantic and the female protagonist is very sincere, and people don't treat the female protagonist worthy. In the face of such sincere feelings, I can accept it

Oh my god, you are so great, the author???? ˉ???ˉ?? )? This book is so beautiful!!