A Heartfelt Confession to the Second Male Lead Before Faking My Death

Generally speaking, it is pretty good, but the essence of the copywriting is all at the front. After reading the wonderful things in the front, it makes the back a bit boring. Moreover, it is an eighty-chapter novel. The first thirty chapters are the essence, but the last few dozen chapters are somewhat boring and it is difficult to see the ending. The plot of the copywriting is good. If the author wants to write this kind of thing, he can put the focus later and write more about the process. In this way, he not only looks forward to the plot of the copywriting, but also hopes to see the later parts. Therefore, the main thing is that the focus is too forward, so some people find it difficult to finish reading the later parts. The character created by the author is very good. Although the fear of the heroine is understandable, I still don't like and understand it. But as for the heroine, the image is very good and I like the heroine very much, but I just don't understand the fear. I feel that the heroine should know the temperament of the hero from the first time she touches the wheelchair, but Later, he became afraid, and after the male protagonist knew that the female protagonist was back, the female protagonist was afraid and refused to admit it. It was really boring, and the male protagonist did not expose it. It was just so boring, and there was no contradiction at all. Just like this, the female protagonist felt that the male protagonist was not good and did not understand based on the system and the original text. Doesn't the female protagonist like the male protagonist? She has slowly fallen in love with him since she first came into this world, right? Otherwise, she would have to apologize if she was stabbed, and then she would directly write that after seeing the male protagonist and what the system put, she felt that the male protagonist was so cruel. ? I don't quite understand. I didn't say she was cruel when she was stabbed. I just judged it based on what she said later. It was true and decisive. In addition, the female protagonist is also good, but in terms of the degree of change, the emotions change too quickly, from liking to being afraid, or should I just rely on one side of the story? The male protagonist is good, and the female protagonist is good. The author can make more improvements in the future and write better stories.

New article, new article! (Knocks bowl) New article, new article! (Knock on the bowl) [Let me be healthy]

When will the new article be published [Star Eyes]

I prefer the first half of the whole story. There is too much plot flow. Personally, I prefer more emotion and sweetness.

Although there are many controversies in the front, overall I feel that it is still a very good article~[][]

Happy New Year, Ye Yezi, I haven't read the new article, so I wish you a happy new year [Fireworks][Fireworks]

It keeps making me cry! But fortunately, both of them are fine in the end. Awu and Wuzhuo will always be happy🥰

Yes, yes, the story of Gu Wuzhuo and Lin Xwu.

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I really want to read new articles! I really want to see it! I want to watch it until I'm crawling on the bed in the middle of the night, scratching my head and scratching my head [Joker] I want to watch it so much! I really want to see it!