Carving a Cinnabar Mark [Quick Transmigration]

Because I like your article so much, this story suddenly came to an end and I felt very lonely. But I still really enjoyed reading about the four worlds. I look forward to seeing you again in my next work 🤗 Because it is written with a translator, it may be difficult to read. Sorry

Probably finished reading. The mood is still beautiful, but sometimes the over-indulgence in atmosphere and lack of substantive plot makes the reading experience worse, and it feels more like prose than a novel. Even so, the unique melancholy mood is still very beautiful and a shining highlight. It's just that the author really needs to train his ability to "write stories". Talent and training are like the two wheels of a car and the wings of a bird. Many people just regret that they have no talent. And if a person already has such spirituality, how can he not do training or study the Dharma? Really just rely on inspiration and squander his spirituality without caring about it, and even abandon the beginning and end of the basic story? Relatively speaking, the first story is much easier to read, and it is much better than the previous works. Although there are still flaws in the rhythm and layout, if compared with the following stories, the first story is completely an outstanding student. The reason why the first story is "easy to read" is because the author has learned to add a substantive storyline to his atmospheric protagonist, making the whole story really "move". Although the ending is not necessarily wonderful, it is indeed a "story" with ups and downs, plus the charming protagonist's character and unique personality. Emotional poetry-like prose, beautiful yet sad, bold yet innocent, the author's own characteristics completely achieve the effect of one plus one is greater than two. It just requires you to write the story as complete as other authors of the same type. The strengths are so long, and the shortcomings can be astonishing if only a little bit is supplemented. Bai Yueguang's shortcoming is that he can't write stories, but after all, it was a work made a few years ago. I was pleasantly surprised after reading the first story in this book. I didn't expect that the following stories would still suffer from the same lack of plot, which really made me feel a pity. All in all, I am very optimistic about the author and hope that the author can continue to write with great concentration [Hold fist]

Although Xiao Zhen and Xiao Xie got together and resolved their regrets, I still haven't had enough of it 😭. I feel like I can see a few more worlds 😭. The writing is very attractive, and it is very different from some of the current conventional fast-traveling novels. Xiao Zhen is not a paper person. Aura, with temperament, regrets, growth, and an ever-growing core, sometimes naughty, sometimes tough, sometimes soft, sometimes free and easy, sometimes leisurely... I look forward to reading the author's articles every day. I have searched and read every article. See you next article! It's hard work writing! I hope I can always be happy to see the big text [Orange Heart]

The boss wants to see the fifth world 😭 😭 😭 The tonic is finished.

I really love this book and Bai Yueguang. It made me dizzy and painful.

Woman, if you honestly write about Kuaiwen, we can give you money to write new articles quickly, do you understand? 🙏🙏🙏

Madam, your writing is so flavorful

Why is it over? No, I haven't seen enough yet! 😭 😭 😭

Great, is our next long open-ended book or slow-moving novel good? 😭 I can't read enough 😭

I feel like the story is good but the ending is too rushed. It feels like an outline but I'm too lazy to write it down in detail😂