Transmigrating to the Villain's Younger Days

By now, this book has become a mere camera tool. I can't see the shaping of the book. I can only see how carefully the large pages were written and how heart-wrenching it is. So the comment section has already addressed Shou as Xiaoyu, and Gong has been addressed as a simple name.

. . . . . . [Joker] You two have started, this chapter is over

Laughing to death, this subject is now completely different from the copywriter. Even in version 3.0, I am still a coward. I am still weirding out Gong. I dare not take the initiative until Gong promises to kiss him. Sure enough, all the mothers in the world are from the same family. This way of writing has been used in countless people who say that they have produced I have seen the author of Sister Pin's mama, which is your article. If it is really attracted by mama's readers, now plq will probably say that if you are super loved, praised, scolded affectionately, you will be cremated anyway (probably this is what you want to see)

An Xiaoze, although I don't know if you need my approval, but I still have to say that this book is very interesting. It's rare that two characters I like very much are obviously going in both directions. The only pity is that 3.0 Is too short. I haven't seen enough of the plot of the domineering president doting on the little star. Finally, I wish the young couple happiness, and An Ze you too.

What a humorous chapter, someone can really do it, write about being forced, navel orange, without condensation throughout the whole process (if you want to condensate and fear of being scolded, you can only accept it), it's better to stop writing it if it's so embarrassing. What you wrote is not what everyone wants to eat, so it would be less painful if you don't write it.

AZ, have you been kidnapped? Are you the author of the two little bird attack books in Conjuring? [Rainbow Fart] [Rainbow Fart] You said that the last book had poor weak attack data, so this one is strong, and you didn't say that you would write camera attacks with great naughty temperament. Now I feel like those two little bird attack books Bird Attack is not as beautiful as what you wrote [Split][Split] You have seen what the so-called strong data looks like. I can only say that Miss Xiangong is really easy to coax. Don't follow your old path of stabbing relatives, friends and aunts in the back, okay [Split][Split]

This book should be more suitable for reading by sisters who are only slightly biased and sisters who love each other. When I first started reading the first part, compared to the previous one, I was pleasantly surprised that the author's description of emotions was more detailed, and the rhythm was also very appropriate. He also made great progress in writing, and the portrayal of Xiao Ming was also very good. From the perspective of Xiao Ming as an elder and a redeemer, this Part of Xiao Ming's love for Yu Shou is completely reasonable. It is the kindness of an older man's heart and pity for a poor child. His various care for Yu Shou is because he is a very good person and is part of his own personality charm. It is reasonable for Yu Shou to fall in love with Xiao Ming because of these. I think the only part of this part that has a bad reading experience is the part where the author tries to say that Xiao Yu Shou is like a cat cub when the context is inappropriate. Then to the second part, I actually don't quite understand why Xiao Ming always felt that Yu Shou should hate him for leaving without saying goodbye. I think even if Xiao Ming only stayed with Yu Shou for a month, Yu Shou should feel grateful, right? In the darkest period of life, when a person suddenly appears to help solve your worries, make people feel warm, and leave the house and bicycle behind, no matter what, you should not hate more than you are grateful. If you can hate more than love in this situation, then I can only say that there is only one species that feels this way, and that is the white-eyed wolf. There is also this part when Yu Shou understands his feelings for Xiao Ming and is ready to pursue Xiao Ming after being rejected by Xiao Ming. Let's not talk about how he pursues. I think this part of the pursuit is successful because he warms to the pain that Xiao Ming has always hidden deep in his heart (this Part of the description is even very little. The reason why he chooses Yu Shou when he is named later is because of Yu Shou's firm company. Understanding Xiao Ming's past is also the third part after the two talked about it), but it gives the impression that Xiao Ming is just soft-hearted and let Yu Shou chase him. During his relationship, his lack of sense of security was also very serious. Apart from companionship, he did not bring anything to Xiao Ming. Instead, he was like a high-demand baby, asking Xiao Ming to coax him unreasonably. There are countless behaviors that are not in line with Yu Shou's personality as a smart person (if you want to say that love makes people blind), they destroy the sobriety of this character. The third part is what I think is the strangest part. Yu Shou has not grown much except for the improvement of his status in the author's words. After learning about Xiao Ming's death, he actually denounced Xiao Ming as a liar, and even though Xiao Ming was so special to him, he still hated Xiao Ming's choices like an ignorant child. Even Xiao Ming felt that his choice was sorry for Yu Shou. It was clearly stated in the previous article that Xiao Ming had been tempered by life and even had a cold heart. This part made me think that he has a pleaser personality. There is relatively little description of Yu Shou in this part, but a large description of Xiao Ming's psychological journey. The two-way redemption written in the copy only reflects Xiao Ming's redemption of Yu Shou, and does not show how Yu Shou redeems Xiao Ming. This part of Xiao Ming's firm choice to go back to Yu Shou is very strange, which made me see a black eye. There is no sense of Su Shou's personality in the whole book. Of course, the author may not have planned to create a Su Shou. . . As someone who has read many of the author's books and started reading the author's articles very early, I should be considered an old reader. For me, the previous articles are more to my taste. The feeling of the protagonist between the lines in this article is obviously different from the description of the protagonist, and it has a very restrained feeling. I hope the author will make some progress in the future.

Is the author in a hurry to finish? Why does it feel like the more I write, the more sloppy it becomes? For example, after Gong Zhi Shou told Shou what happened to him before, he just hugged him so briefly and there was no follow-up.

Is it worthy to turn the TM beast into the unforgettable Bai Yueguang in Gong's heart?

I feel like the plot of this chapter is progressing very quickly, and I feel a little confused. Of course, there needs to be more and more intimate and passionate moments, I just love watching love stories.