HP: The Sound of Silence

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, when the father and son found out about their sbss relationship, they were thinking about Merlin's fattest briefs. It's so funny!

The author's writing is really, really good. I don't know if it is his first work. The writing style is really mature, the plot is compact, the logic is smooth, and the sense of substitution is strong. There is no innovation just because it is a fanfic, and the innovative parts are not OOC and are even very reasonable. The best Chinese HP fanfic I have read so far.

I was so moved when I saw this, not only because of the fight to the death during the decisive battle, but also because of their happy ending, and also because the magic will always exist. DaDaDa really combines the real society very well. The wizarding world has undergone great changes. Magic also exists in everyone's heart because of love and belief. Thank you DaDaDa for your excellent creation so that we can feel how prosperous the magical world written by Rowling would be without those damn wars.

Sparkling Petunia... Eyes curled up

Let him be strong, let him be strong, the breeze blows on the hills

It's really good!!! It's so awesome! I never noticed R. A. B when I read the original novel, but now I really notice it, and it seems to have become a part of my soul. In fact, I was Draco's dream girl at first, and I read many fics. Later, I gradually got into HP, read more fics, and downloaded Orange Light. By chance, I noticed Sound of Silence (but it was too difficult to conquer on Orange Light, I couldn't get through 😭) and then downloaded Jinjiang, just for "Sound of Silence". After reading it, I really paid tribute to R. A. B. Both the writing and the imagination are very good (so much so that I also wanted to write a fanfic, but the writing was so bad that I gave up). Rael was her own anchor. She redeemed him. It can only be said that without her, R. A. B might have used the bottom of the lake in the cave to keep company with the Inferi. However, R. A. B is also the savior of Slytherin. Seeing Veil spend time in different parallel worlds really resonated with her. At that time, I couldn't hold myself any longer and cried loudly. I've read a lot of fanfics, and it's really easy to relate to them emotionally. And I personally prefer to watch works that interweave sweetness and abuse. It's too sweet and fake, and it's too painful. All I can say is that I have a strong ability to empathize with emotions. In reality, I am the only one around who is a hp guy, and I am the only one who reads fandoms and is a European and American guy. Really 😭 My friends don't understand me, I don't understand what I say, and my family doesn't support me very much. . . But I will still insist on dreaming about the dream girl (Okay~_~ I may be a little???, Dreaming about several characters) What is the dream girl? There are endless peripherals to buy. It's endless tears, It is a love that only increases but never decreases. Finally, I hope there will be more high-quality works. I will always be your loyal reader.

I really love Penny in this timeline [Make Me Well]

Oh my god, I probably can't say a word. Such a powerful idea. Muggles and wizards are closely connected. There will even be a "Harry Potter" published in that place soon. People in the three time and space will be happy.

A long review or record of thoughts written to Mr. Chunshan from Orange Light 1.5 Weeks later: (I finally finished sorting out my thoughts after writing for several days. The paragraphs are described separately and there may be many differences in person names and third-person pronouns. The original text has not been read from the beginning except for the extra chapter, so I apologize to Mr. Haruyama if there are any mistakes or omissions.) I've finished watching The Sound of Silence, and it has the expected happy ending and the feeling of emptiness and fullness after everything is over. I particularly like Regulus and Verdante portrayed by Haruyama, and Revy is such a perfect match. Each has its own thinking space and ideals, and has its own persistence. I like the tacit understanding that they understand instantly when they get along, and the greenness and caution in dealing with this relationship. I especially want to mention Rael's arrow to Veer, an unexpected realization and the cherishment that can be glimpsed in daily life. The joy that almost overflowed my screen on the day of the showdown between the two really touched me. Why is it so cute! I especially like when Veil comforted Rael about his lack of senses. Rael said, "It should never be you who should pay the price, but us who changed the outcome because of you." From many details, we can see Rael's respect and consideration for Weil. The cherishment of every intimate contact is very touching, and Weil's reaction to this is also special. I love watching shy young couples. For the above sentence, Wei's reply "Then love me more" made my heart empty. At this moment, I completely substituted for Rael Regulus, I understand you... Lei Wei's double arrow is so delicious. Chunshan's writing also has a strong sense of destiny, although this life was actually snatched by Wei (← I like it better from this point of view) In fact, after reading the opening chapter, I roughly understood Haruyama's writing intention. On this basis, I particularly like Lei Wei's rational soul touch, so I don't have a big feeling about the netizen who accidentally saw it saying that Wei Er was designed for Rael and is not independent enough - ah, but I have to refute the lack of independence in the literal sense. Although I feel that Chunshan also developed such a more detailed plot trend during the writing process, Wei's behavior logic was not completely solely for Rael at the beginning and at the end of the rescue. In the very beginning of this timeline, Weil even did the same. For those who don't know Regulus, she gives me the impression that knowing the direction of such a sad story, it's hard not to fight for the possibility. (As an aside, because of other time element works, I really hate the idea of A saving everyone for B aaa) - but it is true In fact, the entire story completely revolves around Levi. There is no other original content except Elise, but it is already very difficult to change most of them. Moreover, Levi has changed many more people than I originally imagined, so I am super satisfied with the development of the story now... But what I feel is a pity is that the initial focus of Chunshan was very small and routine. He usually enrolled in school and took classes to make friends. Later, when he gradually expanded the time setting and focused on changing his destiny, there was very little school content. In fact, it is a bit regretful. For example, Cresswell, whom he met at the beginning, appeared twice. There is no content at all, and in the future, the circle of friends will basically consist of celebrities such as the Marauders and Barty Jr. (Barty Jr. Actually went offline for a while after solving the family problem until the final battle, which seemed a bit tool-like). After all, in theory, I think that the second week of the game will be popular because Veil is cheerful or has a much higher integration level. But then I thought about rewriting the plot direction and was already very busy. It seems that there is no more space to write these. I really want to push Voldemort back and let Haruyama write a few thousand words of Verdanti Hogwarts Story! (Not There was basically no misunderstanding, incomprehension or quarrel between Lei Wei and me. There were only short-term differences in choices and the resonance deep in the soul that was discovered as they got along day by day. Maybe it is a bit too heavy to say this, or on the other hand, this kind of emotional story is not ups and downs enough, but from Lei Wei It is a natural progression for the two of them to start from the core. They are both people who view the world with their own ideas and try to change the current situation. Weir's intellectual characteristics are not only reflected in the study of knowledge, or the kind of justice mentioned by the Sorting Hat (here I am I really like it), and the understanding of those who want to change. In fact, the latter two points are essentially the same rationality. For example, for the likes of Barty Jr. Or Severus (whose full picture was unknown at the time), they did not directly label people as evil. Understanding animals At the same time, I also silently observed and subtly influenced their choices. I did not stand by and watch, but I also did not interfere aggressively. In this, I also smelled a bit of Mr. Chunshan's own thoughts about the original characters in it (later I read the postscript and it turned out w). I think Weier has never Logically understanding a person's empathy, it is difficult for the two of them to have emotional hardships. In addition to external difficulties, Rael also promoted the transformation of pure-blood family heirs under the influence of Veil, which was not seen in the original work. However, this is not entirely due to Veil. Haruyama shaped the original work. The personality of this character who was perfected when he died young and left only a few words to describe it is very reasonable... One of the similarities between Rael and Veil is also here. Although he belongs to a pure-blood family with ancient concepts, he also has his own set of ideological logic, which he did not have at the beginning. Being completely led away by the environment and blindly pursuing absolute pure blood (of course, you can get a glimpse of it from a few words in the original work). The basic idea is based on the ambition to revive the family and the entire wizarding world based on the incomprehension and dissatisfaction with the current situation of the wizarding world. It is a pity that in the normal timeline Rael has never met the right person. If these unfortunate possibilities are ignored, I believe he will be able to go his own way. This is the starting point of Chunshan writing The Sound of Silence. Everyone wants to look at the possibilities under "what ifs" and "what ifs" after such a tragic story. ↑ Speaking of which, I would like to add that I think Haruyama's logical additions to R. A. B.'S actions in the original plot are also very reasonable. For example, as to why he had to die, from the multiple timelines in this article, the biggest one is Rael's regret. This regret is not only for his wrong choice, but also for being forced to have no choice but to... Well... Violate his own morality after embarking on this path. Therefore, his death gave me the feeling that there was probably an element of atonement in it. In addition, it may have been because he did not want to bring more trouble to the family (when he had already realized that he could not go all the way to the dark side), and there was also a little bit of youthful loneliness. Alas. It seems a bit far-fetched, so when talking about the original work, some people want to talk about Peter first. After experiencing the changes in the fate of most people, in the middle and late stages, I began to wonder about Haruyama's arrangements for Peter. In fact, my reading speed dropped a lot when I came to the plot where Peter was just threatened, because before seeing the subsequent development, I kept thinking about Peter, although he is an existence that most people hate. Sometimes he even surpasses the pure villains such as Old Fubai and others, but what is the difference between him and Barty Snape Jr. In the original timeline? Barty Jr. Is because Crouch Sr. And Snape are influenced by family and environment. Is that any different from the family members that flashed through Peter's mind when he was threatened? In this timeline, he has not yet committed any act of betrayal? Couldn't Peter have been kept from getting involved in the Order before a possible betrayal, like the ideas that influenced Crouch Sr. Or the accidental involvement of Snape's bad family and school environment? But firstly, Veil was not familiar with him and had never known Peter's future before remembering the first week, so she also handed the matter over to Sirius, who was more qualified. Secondly, as Veil said, everyone must be responsible for their own choices. It was Peter's own behavior to choose to join the Marauders and become their friends. Peter himself also understood that leaving the Order of the Phoenix would not necessarily escape him from being threatened by Death Eaters. Fate, if Peter were to have a fate that was completely consistent with the original work, I would probably continue to struggle with it. Fortunately, I think Chunshan's handling was actually very appropriate. James expressed my struggle on my behalf. No one directly sentenced Peter to death because of his betrayal, but after giving him another choice, he still paid the price for his cowardice and evasion. It can be said to be a relatively fair ending. And I can easily tell from the compatibility of several pairs in this article that Chunshan's cp preference hhhhh. To put it simply, it means that the souls are similar or have similar qualities that can resonate with each other. To be honest, because of the nature of the orange light platform, Huai Zhou did not close the dog bat in Chunshan's original article. The system was put up, but in the middle period, I felt something was wrong even though it was not written clearly. Why are these two so addictive (?). When I saw this, I stopped and analyzed how the two people's personalities became familiar, and I understood it very well. What's more, the behavioral logic of the two people in the original work is quite similar, ugh. In addition, the timeline pattern of Sound of Silence is very clear, it is a rewind of a line. I think this is also a wonderful point of this film. From the emotions of Rael and many important characters in the original timeline being affected by the afterglow of the subsequent development of the old timeline, Rael's spirit of self-sacrifice and many similar decisions in the current timeline. Many points give me the feeling that the emphasis on the difference between the same people in the two timelines is another choice after more understanding, and it also supplements a lot of logic. And I think the reason why the current ending is so comfortable is that it is difficult for scripts with time retrieval elements to avoid the fact that the characters in the two lines have different experiences. Then there will be a big problem when it comes to the emotional line. If one person has two lines of memory, it will be different from the other who only has two lines of memory. How should the emotions of one line of memory be calculated? I feel that most scripts either weaken this point and emphasize that emotional collision is more important, but if it is not well written, it will become two lines and two people will be unable to reconcile. (.) Bringing it back to this one, Haruyama Nie Yue arranged it very well, with the two characters of Lei Wei in the first episode. It didn't start to develop, but it ended with two-way secret love, two forgetting curses and the enlightenment and regret of knowing later. The two of them didn't fall in love with each other because of the subsequent ones, but it was the result of the two weeks that only happened because of the increasingly heavy obsession; secondly, Weier's knowledge was that at the beginning it was a It is a kind of prophet, rather than reading files with memories. The memories of the last movie were revealed after a long and difficult step-by-step revision of the current timeline. Therefore, the plot of Lei Wei in the second movie is also very profound, and it did not give me a sense of dominance that the last movie could not overshadow the current story (but the last movie was also very interesting. T T); Moreover, the gradual changes and introspection of Rael's second-term thoughts are closely related to the person himself. As mentioned before, each decision of self-sacrifice is exactly the same as that of R. A. B. Who voluntarily died in the cave. In Haruyama's writing, the ending of the second-term eye is completely rewritten by Levi and everyone else's soul core under the influence of external variables, and there is no mismatch in the protagonist's emotions caused by the information gap. Thinking of this, I can better understand the feeling of soul compatibility mentioned by Rael. In short, Levi 99 T T Alas, this week... My favorite hindsight is so sad... And there is also the if line of the premature death of parents that Veer saw in the time gap... I feel that if I give it more space, I can taste several flavors of be Leiwei. Although there are no be lines in this article, whether in Orange or Jinjiang, I directly regard these as be lines. Come and see () From this point of view, this article doesn't need to be. It's not easy for a young couple to be together after suffering enough. Fortunately, no matter which timeline it is, the two people parted ways without having a mental relationship, which makes me feel better. It's like a person who suddenly regained consciousness tastes bitterness...? Chunshan, I love you,,, But there is another whole game that I care about the most. Even I ignored the use of advanced magical silent spells in the lower grades by Veil, but I still feel that it is a bit flawed. That truth or dare is related to the change of everyone's thinking. Although I have already understood the central purpose of this article, I have all regrets, but the plot method here in Chunshan seems a bit drastic. It's like forcibly combining a group of people. The difficult boy was here for the psychology class and they didn't even bother to listen (although Weir found it very difficult). At the beginning of the school year, Barty's classmate was almost mad at the Weir family. Then the mood suddenly stopped and nothing happened. I didn't expect it. It was understandable that I was curious and felt that there was a slight lack of details. At this point, Barty's epiphany became even more unnatural. I can only say that I am looking forward to Chunshan's work as the protagonist of Little Barty. P. S. It's hard to imagine that this is Chunshan's first published work. Although it's a little rough on the top, the writing style is so familiar and engaging that I couldn't get out of it for two weeks after reading it carefully hahhhh

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