Bringing My Younger Sister to Restore the Ming Dynasty

No matter what channel you come here to, sisters, just take a look, believe me, it's great [Come on] Personally, I think this article should be worth 200,000 collections [Shy]

This must be my first long review. I have never liked to leave long reviews when I read books. On the one hand, I am afraid of disturbing the eyes of the author and readers. On the other hand, I also feel that so many words forcefully cut my own thoughts open for everyone to see, which is a bit awkward. Because I am also a history student, although not in the direction of Southern Ming history (I study Pre-Qin), I am very interested in Shi Tong/Shi Chuan. After reading the whole article, I really want to say that Mr. Luzi really shouldn't belittle himself. The teacher has achieved a very good balance between textual research and popularity (at least it doesn't have the uncomfortable feeling of being incomprehensible in some novels)! ! ! Really don't worry, this isn't some rainbow fart. I have also commented before that the main reason for this article is that the channel is too cold and there are no daily updates. However, it is better to be less popular than unpopular. Readers will be more sticky, and there will be less quarrels, and there will be no scenes of groups attacking each other because of different opinions. Believe that gold will always shine! I also recommended this book to my classmates haha. In fact, before reading this book, I didn't know much about the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty. My impression was of the exile regime established by the Southern Ming clan in the south, the endless fighting within the court, and the Qing army and pirates outside the court. The history described in this book makes the characters in these histories more three-dimensional, with the beauty of idealism + socialism. Especially every time Zheng Mingzhou stretches out his arms and shouts and everyone is in harmony, the history of group portraits is indeed great! Every character in the teacher's works is of flesh and blood. Whether it is a real historical figure or an original character, the character's personality and stance change very naturally. The Great Lama gave Mingzhou a chance to live, Qi Xiaowu and Panpan were Mingzhou's earliest ties, the Nanzhus/Zhao Mingzhous became Mingzhou's first sisters, and the Kuangshengs allowed Mingzhou to see the people's hearts/loyalty... Everyone Mingzhou knows is the anchor of her future in this era, and everyone she loses will also become the responsibility and motivation on her shoulders, helping her to grow better and become the General Zhao Zhao Mingzhou in the hearts of teachers and our readers. Of course, I think the best ones created by the teacher are Young Master Hua Xia, Miss Cao Sui and Ban Ban/Xiao Zhu! (Personal opinion only) The image of a martyr is the brightest glory of an era, and it is also the easiest to leave for future generations to comment on. In addition, the process of getting to know Hua Xia and Mingzhou is the easiest to remember. To be honest, Sui Sui's words are really well written, from the image of a lively, upbeat, simple and capable fisher girl at the beginning, to the later revenge for her father's revenge, , the image of the little general who appears with the elephant army at the end is very vivid. There was even a moment in the middle when I felt that it was not worth it for Mingzhou's kindness to Suisui. There is no need to say more about Ban Ban and Xiao Zhu, the teacher upstairs has already written very well! It's all my mouth, haha. The last thing I want to write is my thoughts after reading it. (This is still just my personal opinion!! Don't get internally conflicted by these words). First of all, I agree with the person above. The rhythm of the plot is indeed a bit tense. I feel that Mingzhou has been rescuing people, helping people, confronting people, and killing people all the way... There is very little time to breathe. The few moments are basically Xiaozhu and Banban's home court. It's just like Hua Xia said, Mingzhou has a bumpy road all the way up just for such a peaceful and beautiful life. But you can also add some daily life of other ministers/soldiers/civilians appropriately to make the group portrait fuller! (Recommended only). Then, maybe because of the subject of the writing, the teacher's descriptions of collective encouragement/pledge scenes are somewhat similar, with one or several leaders, and the blurred crowd as the background, using parallelism and exclamation sentence patterns. Although it is indeed shocking and powerful, because the plot is tight, if you are a sister who reads quickly, you will feel "oh, why is this description again" (this only represents me personally). Maybe the plot would be better if it were a little slower or longer? Finally, it's the ending. I still want to say that it's a bit rushed. Can the teacher mention the follow-up like this in the extra chapter, the follow-up of others, why the Mingzhou sisters came in the first place, and how Tiandao dealt with it, etc. For example, how will everyone live without the emperor? Will the problem of Ryukyu still exist? Will women continue to join the army? It feels like it's a long story to write, haha. (It doesn't matter if you don't have it either. It depends on the teacher himself, and I'm a little reluctant to give it up...) One last thing to add: the teacher's words are really powerful! Whether it's war or daily life, it looks great! I hope the teacher can write more and quickly, waiting to read new articles! ! (Mwah)

I sincerely ask everyone to give Donkey a five-point rating. Of course, you don't have to give it a rating.

The articles written by my wife are all very beautiful, and I feel very comfortable reading them [Spreading Flowers]

The ambition to expel Manyi Dazi was realized in this article

If there were no extras, this would probably be the last comment I would leave on this article. I wonder if I can make up a long comment 2333. Because I am not familiar with history, I actually read it as a fiction at first. But when I saw Hua Xia died as a martyr, it was difficult for me to regard this article as a fiction anymore. The text description of that scene really shocked me. He is a graceful person in troubled times. Young Master is too perfect to be a real person, but he does exist in history. He is the link between Mingzhou and history, the leader who brings Mingzhou to the road of salvation. I believe he is also the premature death of Bai Yueguang for us readers in this article (laughing). I feel that this is also the biggest difference to me from "Dawning Dawn". In "Dawning Dawn", my favorite brother is a "fictional" character who is both good and evil, but in this article, he is a real historical figure who is a perfect idealist. The little emperor, who is also a real figure in history, is more contradictory than a real ordinary person in China. His cowardice is because he has no ability to control his own life, and his indecision is because of his gentleness. Every decision he makes may cause casualties in this troubled world, and this is not what he thought. So before he met Mingzhou and Banban, he was a "waste", but Mingzhou and Banban gave him the courage to control his life and express his own thoughts, and the emotional line between him and Mingzhou was also very natural (I feel that this aspect has indeed improved a lot compared to the time in "Dawn"). Mingzhou, as the party member-type heroine I saw for the first time, gave me a very different feeling from the novels I had read before. I can feel that Mingzhou actually just wanted to be alone at the beginning and went home after finding her sister. However, after meeting more people, she integrated into this era faster than usual. After she chose to save the world, her original indomitable background was stained with sadness and blood because of this war-torn era. And because Banban is one and the same with the little emperor, she feels that her feelings about this era are not as good as Mingzhou's. The only contacts she has with that era are her sister and the little emperor. Before the historical trajectory changed (that is, before the last "earth dragon turned over"), she actually maintained the "arrogance" of modern people. Until the historical trajectory changed, she realized that this was reality. I wrote such a long story about the feelings of the characters in the story, actually because I think this is the biggest highlight of Donkey's article, including all other characters, like Qi Xiaowu, the little Taoist priest, like Tong Jun, Li Pan, Cao Sui and countless other people who struggled in the Nanming era. They constitute this article. They are vivid and interesting, and they also aroused the interest of me, a person who knows nothing about this history. Secondly, I would like to mention some questions and suggestions that came to mind while reading the article (of course, this only represents my personal opinion, donkeys can just listen selectively, and I hope that donkeys will not be internally conflicted because of this). The first is the rhythm of the plot. In fact, when I watched the free chapter, I felt that the small climaxes were very compact. I was a little dizzy after watching it. After entering v, I felt much better (but now I wonder if it was intentional by the donkey, because when Mingzhou first crossed over, he was at a loss and was pushed by various things, so everything was arranged so compactly). Second is the ending, which still feels a bit sudden. I feel that many things are not explained clearly, such as the ending of the way of heaven (I have always felt that this way of heaven is a bit tasteless), such as the general body, and how to develop after overthrowing imperialism? It would be great if there was a side story [holding my chin] (It doesn't matter if there isn't, it's just a joke, I just really can't bear to part with it..) Finally, I would like to praise that Donkey's writing is really good. Many scenes or sentences are written that make my skin crawl. I am also very happy to receive comments and replies from Donkey every time. This can be said to be the happiest time every time I read Donkey's articles (but I also hope that Donkey will not be too stressed or internally consumed because of this.) Finally, the ending is full of flowers~ I wish Donkey happy every day and the next book will be even better!

The writing is very good, but I still have more to say. Keep up the good work and don't give up writing.

I really like this book. Sister Mingzhou is simply an indestructible boulder. The torrent of history is rolling down, and it can't hold a corner of her clothes... She implements her own moral principles from beginning to end, and executes them to the end. It's so handsome.

I finished it in one go, the author did a great job! Very very beautiful! I simply can't get enough of it!

In fact, I feel like I can still write a lot more