A Non-Mainstream Transmigration into a Book

I feel that the meaning of Xingxue's existence should not be to provide the heroine with experience packages and identity... She should have selfish motives, survive, connect to mechanical limbs, continue to pursue the meaning of her life, and even take risks with the heroine. I always feel that she is very careless when she logs off here.

The description of the suffering women is also too detailed... It's a bit uncomfortable and stomach-churning to watch. The focus could be shifted to reduce the depiction of female victimization

Do these two male supporting actors need to be given so much plot and highlights?

It's really strange. Didn't we say that humans can only live for 100 years [covering face and laughing] Now it can live for hundreds of years.

In addition to the necessary scenes to promote the development of the plot, do men need to spend so much ink? The scenes where these two men appear together feel like watching BL.

The author has a lot of typos here. In the beginning, the superior is Zhou Chu, but later it is changed to Liang Shu. A male voice sounded at the same time as Luo Xin spoke, but it was a woman who came out. The story is very exciting and good, but there are too many clerical errors, which somewhat affects the viewing.

Directly using love to make this person named Yan treat the protagonist well... It's so disconnected. Was this plot written by one person...

Why do I feel like this piece is about to be silenced?

So many such good girls

If only she could survive. . .