Crossing the Threshold

The painting style is completely different...

Really. . . Not easy

Anthracene! Not bad! Come on

Ask for extras!!! I really want a sequel!!!

It looks good, but it's too short. It's not satisfying.

It's really fun to write, but the problem is that it doesn't seem to be true. Thank you for your submission. The "uncle" sentence really shines!

Relaxed~ Not bad Some children said that it would be better to write a long novel, and I think so too, because I saw it until the end, and I don't know why Lin Yan liked Shi Cheng. Was he moved? Love for a long time? You can expand it appropriately and write about Lin Yan's emotional changes and so on. Shi Cheng's wife and other children also said it~ Really, please write in more detail~ Your writing style is also good, but I feel like it was written in a hurry and there was too little plot. Is Shi Cheng a person? He has been a gangster before, so he can be a bit arrogant, but he is so gentle to Lin Yan, and it is right to be gentle to him. Why does he feel that he is gentle to everyone, but has been smoothed by life? This made me feel that the settings of the gangster were not written out, so when Lin Yan asked the question at the end, I was shocked~ (Comments are indeed something I have learned through practice~ I feel like I am better at writing reviews than yesterday...) Lin Yanmo, a white-collar worker in the company, is a little poisonous snake, a little tsundere, and a bit childish. . . I suggest writing a side story rather than expanding on the previous article. Those two kids feel pretty much the same, they are a good match after all, they have similar personalities. . . It stands to reason that what kind of father brings out what kind of children? The fight at the beginning is well written, but then they assimilate when they live together. . . . (Why did I hit bricks... I'm being slapped) The entire article has a very clear line. I am a very rough reader, and sometimes I just skip over anything I don't like. For this article, I read it chapter by chapter, without skipping any replies, so the writing is quite smooth. When I entered the house, I thought I had come out as gay at home. . . . I misunderstood. Okay~ This article is quite good, please forgive me for taking a long time to write it. . . If you don't like it, delete it

Hehe! It's over so soon?

What a normal reaction! Ha ha!

Before going to bed, I read the story about the two uncles and climbed up to discuss it during work time. Well, I think Lan Lan you can definitely write this short article into a short article. The past of the two people can also be described in detail. I like Shi Cheng very much. He looks like a big boss but is actually a gentle and loyal dog. Lin Yan is just an awkward person. The process of breaking up is tortuous and bright! One question is, is Shi Cheng originally curved? Why did he tell his son that his first love was also a man? I have indeed seen many people like Lin Yan, and Shi Cheng, I think it is really strange. He is said to be scheming, but his methods are clumsy. He is said to be stupid, but what he does is very sinister. I really want to have a story about their sweet life~~\\(≧▽≦)/~La La La