Online Dating Is Risky, So Be Careful When You Meet in Person
网恋有风险，奔现需谨慎
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 136k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
31Chapters
1.8kFavorites
8.2Score
2.2kNutrient gifts
1.1kClicks per chapter
359Comments
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Reader comments 15
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I have always liked your writing and have been truly moved by your articles. I was following that novel before, and when I saw you overturning the outline and rewriting it, I actually looked forward to you polishing it into a more complete story. Unfortunately, I couldn't wait for a satisfactory ending. Later, I also followed the newly opened novels all the way, and I can feel that you have a lot of ideas and inspirations. However, after reading the whole book, whether it is the advancement of the plot, the presentation of details, or the emotions between the characters, it all seems a bit hasty and sloppy, and the ending is also a bit hasty. As a reader who has been following along, I feel a bit disappointed and regretful. In fact, I really hope that you can give yourself more time to finish telling your favorite stories without having to rush for success or force yourself to open new ones frequently. Good writing deserves to be polished slowly. Taking every story seriously is also a responsibility for yourself and the readers. I will still follow you all the time, and I hope you can write more works that satisfy you and make readers recall them in the future. You will keep writing and get better and better.
The ending felt so sloppy and hasty. In the end, it felt like I was trying to catch up with the progress. The characters were good and the story was not a big problem, but it just felt inexplicable. Obviously there were many places that were very delicate in the beginning, and I could tell that I had the ability to write slowly and carefully, but in the end I don't know why it ended so hastily.
I beg you for a sequel 😭
I am a black-bone mackerel =_= Actually, the author, you are capable of writing well. What happened in recent years?
This is just a few sentences to finish it.
What the hell? Just write about it? I'm convinced that I didn't read the word count and chapters carefully...
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This is the end, haven't you seen enough? Please give me a sequel🥺😢
It's finally almost finished, I hope it won't end badly 😣 😣
Author, when will it be updated?